Thanks for this thread Rafi :)
Here are my concerns:
1. Where is the progress in Manik's character? Guy was a knucklehead and still is. He wasn't all about anger and reckless. Kindly stop facilitating his ego and start bringing humane in him.
2. Nandini Murthy is beyond Manik Malhotra. Girl hasn't a single friend who would be there for her. Isn't it highly ignored aspect? Her support system is nowhere. She fights it all alone. Highly impractical. Her refill of strength is dependent on Moody Manik Malhotra who once in a while talks about taking a break.
3. Tender, love and care! Manik always misses the L in it. I guess, writers have kept it missing on purpose. Problem is that we audiences always see it coming, the sense and missing part in track, as we can see you people have kept open ended but then somehow nothing comes. Hence, I see MaNan standing at same place.
4. Fab5! For me, surely not the best sample to portray friendship. Few aspects of them are heart warming but they majorly lags wisdom part. They are toxic to each others' wisdom. They are always absent, unknown and insensitive about each others' individual battles. In case of Cabir, they all highly disappointed me with their treatment towards Raghav. In case of Alya, they are insensitive about her being sister of Harshad.
5. Dhruv! Butchered character. In order to align him with other tracks, His substance has gone missing. Guy is doing nothing these days. Highlight which was kinda explicited from very beginning, Manik-Dhruv bond has gone superficial. Dhruv doesn't sound anything these days.
6. Kindly cut the drag in tracks. Drag kills essence and significance.
7. Manik's realization track! He has not realized a single thing. He sacrificing, he calling Nandini classless, he dealing for her forgiveness and so on! I don't want a change in his character but a little introspection. He is still on some trip and isn't able is see how damaged Nandini is.
8. Nandini's individuality! Where the hell is it?
Edited by Nxt_rockstar - 10 years ago