MaNan OS based on Precap~ Inseperable Souls

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Posted: 10 years ago
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i hv written a quick OS on Manan ...its very seedha sadhaa like me 😆😆 hope u all lyk it bear it please...😉

Warning: Its all my assumptions(mere..dimaag..ka fitoor) Kal..aisaa..kuch..ni..hone waala..show mein 😆

Doc. Went inside to examine Manik n Neonika n Fab.4 dere too .
Doc: well young boy dere is such a relieving news for u
Manik was just staring at doc. As he was to exhausted n tired to speak anything. He has the energy only to take one name dat is Nandini.
Fab.4 n neonika: wt doc tell it fast
Doc: reports just came n dere is no need for amputation but we need little operation to heal d wound .
All screamed n fab.4 hugged Manik n dey got happy as biggedt fear of amputation went away.
But where was Nandini ..whom Manik wanted to share his happiness .
And yes dere she was outside Manik's room listening everything n she thanked god for everything
Nandini: ayiyappa thanku ..Manik will be fine soon now. Thanku thanku. ayiyappa plzz never give him pain ever.
Manik could sense her n he is in mind " Nandu i know u praying for me.. I know u alwayzz keep me in ur prayers n slight smile crept on his face.
All went home as dey were tired saying manik to take rest n Nandu was waiting for dem to go so dat she can meet Manik . Manik sighed saying where r u nandini. I feel there is still smthng between us. Neonika rightly said i m so idiot blabbering anything dat dere was nthng between me n Nandu.
Nandu on manik's room door peeping in
Manik : Nandu finally u here
Nandu was surprised how he got to know .
Nandu went inside n sat near Manik n just staring at him n tears rolled down her eyes.
Nandu: Manik tum theek ho na.. I m sorry manik sabh meri wajah se. Never wanna see u in pain. Manik wht u hurt urself Manik why u so stubborn.
Nandu was crying n speaking non-stop widout breath n manik was just staring at him smiling on her innocence ..though he was tired but nandini's presence n those caring words made him forget all pain tiredness.
Manik put his finger on her lips n said "shhh"
Nandu just stopped dere n MaNan eyelock n background score was making the scene more cute n intense
"Muskurane ki wajah tum ho" (sry mere ko hindi songs ni pata zyada :P)
Manik wiped Nandu's tears n placed his hand on her cheek n carressed it.
Manik: Nandini' listen i know u can't live without me..u can't stay away den wht u not accepting u love me ,u care for me, why u still here when even mah fab4 went
Nandini ask ur heart .. Wts dere .
Dun u think its me . Nandini was just listening to him.
Just den Nandu lean towards Manik n kissed on his cheeks n wispered in Manik's ear .. You are right mah monkey Malhotra i can't live widout u n ur mom is right u are such an idiot my monster oderwise u won't be here.
Actually Nandu was indicating Manik dat she has observed his each n every moment .
Manik: hey nandini listen , how come u know abt neonika thing
Nandini: Manik i was dere in d blanket on sofa not Cabir n she put her head down.
Manik: oh shit it was u ..Nandini tumne kuch suna nahi na.. Say no ( guyzz imagine Manik's expressions ;))
Nandini lay down on his chest n said Manik no i didn't hear anything n forget dat.. N she kissed manik o his chest.
Manik pulled her up slightly n gave a peck on her forhead n whole face n deir lips were inches apart
This tym Nandu took the charge n kissed Manik on his lips n dere was a soft kiss so slow so romantic n Bgscore " tu hi haqeeqat khawab tu " ;)
Both broke d kiss after good 5 mins
Manik:Nandu is promise will never break ur trust ..plzz dun ever think to leave me. Manik's life is now u and nandu again laid down manik's chest n manik hugged her Back
Nandu : Monster Manik i will never ..I love u
Manik: Love u too mah firefly ❤️
n both were talking in same position like dere is no tomm.


P.s. sorry guyzz fir such crap n boring OS .. Bear it..hope u all lyk it otherwise tomatoes n eggs all welcome 😆..no proof..reading..😳

#JAS


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Posted: 10 years ago
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My first MaNan one shot..
Awesome.. 😆
Sab kuch kitna jaldi jaldi ho gya..
MaNan kiss.. 😉
Wow nandini...
Haha lovely..

Love Rupanshi :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: PunjabiKudi_17

My first MaNan one shot..
Awesome.. 😆
Sab kuch kitna jaldi jaldi ho gya..
MaNan kiss.. 😉
Wow nandini...
Haha lovely..

Love Rupanshi :)



hehehe...mera..bhi😆

i..hv..read..many...

yeah..manan kiss...iske..bina..mera..OS..adhoora..hai..🤣

i..know..seedha.saadha..to...lovely..hi..hoga...🤣

thanx fr commenting...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres😆
than q thanq i was waiting for an OS on precap!!nd i got it yipeee
u write soo well jas nd KISS uski bina tou MaNan story adhoori hai!!!🤣
nd i knw it wont happen in the show but hope something like this happens!!
Jas ur really talented girl mera yaara🤗
do write more stories😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oka unres now...

firstly it happened so jaldi jaldi but still it was cute...

m not at all expecting all dis to happen so jaldi but still loved imagining all dis...

n ya i will not throw tomatoes on uh bcz it was seedha saadha yet sweet os...

😃🤗
ur first attempt jas... *hugs&kisses*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: manan_flab

oka unres now...

firstly it happened so jaldi jaldi but still it was cute...

m not at all expecting all dis to happen so jaldi but still loved imagining all dis...

n ya i will not throw tomatoes on uh bcz it was seedha saadha yet sweet os...

😃🤗
ur first attempt jas... *hugs&kisses*



dekhooo...yrrr..Cvs..gonna take next..3 mnths..and all..for..dis...
and hum..to..sabh ek..jhattke... mein se..soch..sakte,,hai na ..jo..3 mths..mein hoyegaa..oh..mane aaj..karwa..diya..😆

well..Thanku..for...liking ..;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oye Jas kamaal kar diti tu taan kudiye... loved it yaara... bahut sohna likhya g...Manik and Nandini can kiss anywhere hahahaha... thanks dear :) agge hor v likhde raho g 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely os
very beautifully written
loved it

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