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Posted: 9 years ago

#861

Why is so small update after long time

are you going to update this

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aarvi-manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#862

nice story n confusing also...

i just started to read ur story n completed in one gooo...

its really nice

plz update next part

waiting...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#863

Originally posted by: millie17
Shockng updt. But alya is bng quite hlpful.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#864

Originally posted by: ROOP0605
Superb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#865

Originally posted by: bhagupur

This is a awesome story. .

Wow the culprit of nandni is manik...omg..

Looking forward to seeing what happened next.

Thanks for sharing this update.

Stay blessed dear.

Thanks.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Z a r o o r a t

Chapter 43 !!! Broken!
No one's POV

Aliya :"I know Dhruv must be a part of this drug thing, but I think he can't have planned it alone." Manik :"Yes, all the others must be a part of it, I know. But I am only thinking about how to make Nandini understand that I didn't do it purposely." Aliya :"Let me talk to her... she will understand if she loves you."
In the meantime, it's a very windy weather, you can only hear the noice of trees everywhere.
In a very dark and lonely place. You can hear some people's voices saying. "Haha, Manik does not even know what is waiting for him." "But he already found the medicince drug." "Let him think like that, haha." "He will definitely get shocked whatever will happen next.!"
At that night, Manik went to his house to see how Nandini is now. He arrives at the place with Aliya. Manik opens the house door and both enter. Aliya goes straight to Manik's room where Nandini is. She opens the door and sees Nandini lying on the bed. Nandini opens her eyes and sees Aliya infront of her. Manik stays outside of the room. Aliya closes the door and takes steps towards the bed. Aliya starts with "Hey Nandini, we haven't talked for so long, how are you? Missed me?" Nandini answeres with "What are you doing here? Leave me alone." Aliya comes more steps closer to the bed and knees and says "Nandini, have you ever loved Manik? Do you really think he would do this to you purposely? He loves you, really! However it is hard for you even he is very sad. I think you should talk to him and trust him. That's all I wanted to say." Nandini had tears in her eyes. Aliya stands up and says "Goodbye Nandini see you soon, take her and please think about it! Bye." She turns around and leaves the room. Nandini starts crying, she doesn't even know what to do now, she doesn't even know whom to trust after all what happen. She has soo many questions in her mind. She keeps crying.
Aliya is out of the room but she can't see Manik outside the room. She starts to find him. She goes to the living room and sees him there. He is standing in the balcony turned his back. Aliya goes to him and stands next to him. She looks at him and sees how he is broken. He is crying even his whole face got wet because of the tears. Both of them look at the dark Mumbai. Manik looks at the top and closes his eyes but keeps on crying. Aliya now couldn't see him like that, she takes his hand and lies her head on his shoulder. Everything is sooo quiet. Silent is everywhere. But then Manik looks at Aliya and says with his broken and with his lightly/softly voice "It's paiining. It's paining here Aliya." While saying 'here' he showed his heart. He cries. Aliya touches his cheeks and wipes his tears away and hugs him tight. She couldn't see him like this and even she started crying. They kept on hugging for some time and then she broke the hug and says "now I need to go and you need to talk with Nandini about this, I am sure she will understand. Good luck." Before going, she gives a small kiss on his cheeks. Then she goes and leaves broken Manik alone.

NEXT CHAPTER sneekpeak
Manik and Nandini will clear every misunderstandings.
Nandini will be kidnapped.

What will happen next? Stay tuned!
Next Chapter will be online at 8th March 2016.

See you soon! :)

Edited by StrawberryParam - 9 years ago

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Liana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#867

Originally posted by: Viji.Chandran
nice update...
again a twist...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#868

Originally posted by: saradanamrata
Awesome...
I read all ur parts in one go...
Twist is shocking...
Plzzz pm me from next part..
Waiting for ur update..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#869

Originally posted by: ankurparmar
so much confusion yaar 😕 akhir manik pyar kisse karta hai nandini se ya phir alya se ... nice story Plz update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#870

Originally posted by: archu_asok
Awesome update. So much of twist and turns.the story is getting interesting day by day. Continue soon.
Keep writing.
Stay blessed😊

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