MaNan-DhruLiya-Cabir OS : Double entertainment.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello there my fellow crazy MaNanians DhruLiyans and Cabirians. I wanted to write this OS as a welcome back gift for our Cabir...It starts from where the episode ended yesterday. Pls do leave your comments. All the rotten eggs and joothis are welcome!😛😛

Cabir's POV is in black and his thoughts in italics.

Happy reading folks!😊


MaNan-DhruLiya- Cabir OS: Double entertainment!

Everyone except Manik and Nandini came out of the police station. Cabir was happy .Finally that jerk has to pay for his deeds. He tried to ignore the constant pain in his heart because of his Mom...But he had nothing to worry about as long as fab 5 was there for him...

He spotted Dhruv and Aliya ahead of him.He couldn't help but overhear their conversation..

Dhruv :Aliya... are you ok?

Aliya looked at him and shook her head in negative tears brimming in her eyes. Dhruv wrapped one comforting arm around her and she leaned into him.

Bechari...eski kya galthi ki eska bhai ek psyco nikla..mujhe bhi usse baat karna chahiye. He was about to go to them but stopped himself. Nahin ..abhi nahin..they look really...comfortable with each other main beech main jakar kya karega..waise Dhruv toh hain na...they look good together don't they? Chi! Cabir tu kya soch raha hain? Agar en donon ko pata chala na toh tujhe mar dalega..

Aliya :Dhruv ..tumhe pata hain na after my parents death bhai was my only family...he really loves me Dhruv but voh hamesha galat rasta apnatha raha...and I really tried to change him Dhruv..i did but...but voh...he didn't...I've been a terrible sister Dhruv..I'm..

She broke down crying hugging Dhruv. Without a second thought Dhruv hugged her back trying to calm her down.One arm around her waist and the other caressing her hair.

Dhruv: Shh!! Aliya..it's ok...Aur tum kabhi bhi terrible nahin ho sakthi! It's not your fault that your brother chose the wrong way. You are not a terrible sister Aliya...Apne Bhai ko sahi rasta dikane keliye hi toh tumne ye sab kiya hain na...And don't worry we are there for you. Dhruv wiped her tears and said "I'm ..I'm there for you".

Aliya looked at him and for a whole minute they were lost in each other's eyes. Then as if they realized what they were doing they abruptly broke the embrace and looked at everything except each other...awkwardness surrounding them...

Cabir gave himself a mental shake and blinked twice. O teri! What the...it can't be...seriously..kaise??kab??...yeh chal kya raha hain boss!!??

Dhruv: voh main...tumhe..hmm...tumhe ghar drop kar duon? Dhruv asked obviously to brush off the awkwardness.

Aliya: haan. Thanks Dhruv. A faint blush still on her cheeks they walked together to Dhruv's bike.

Bye the time they left,Cabir was smiling his all too knowing smile.Kya baat hai! Kisne socha tha ki aakhir Dhruv aur Aliya will fall for each other. Wah! Cabir tera 6th sense hamesha sahi nikaltha hain. Well done!. He gave himself a mental pat.

Just then he noticed Manik and Nandini coming out of the police station. Nandini was having her nose high in her hair and Manik was right behind her looking as if he was pleading to her.

Cabir got ready to watch the developments in his first project.

Manik: Nandini... pls..

Nandini: Manik maine pehle bhi tumse kaha hain every thing is not give and take. Tumhare haath mein chot hai..tumhe hospital jaana chahiye and this has nothing to do with accepting your apology. Anyways I don't care ki tum jao ya na jao, I just don't care!

Manik looked heartbroken his eyes begging her to forgive but Nandini was hurt too. It was clear that her anger was the way she chose to express her hurt.

Manik: Nandu...and held her hand to stop her, unfortunately with the injured one and he yelped in pain.

Nandini turned around worried all her anger disappearing in a puff.

Nandini: Manik..kya hua..are you all right? Is it hurting too much? She asked fussing over his hand.

Manik just looked at her with a slight smile. Both were soon lost in each other forgetting everything around them...

Cabir chuckled to himself watching the entire show. Bechara..isse toh ishqu ne mara hain !!There is no way out bro!...

Ek do din main ghar kya gaya aur yahaan ithne saare developments! Manik-Nandini...Dhuv- Alya??!! Yeh Jodi reverse kaise padh gaye? AnywayzzI'm loving it...ab toh double entertainment ho gayi!!! Ab en luv stories ka happy ending main likhoonga...Caabir style!!! Koi nahi bachnewala! He thought to himself with an evil smile...

Picture abhi baaki hain mere dost!

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Here is the link to my other OS: Mission MaNan stage one: Completed!

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4245701

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cabir!!!!
my saviour he is...
i just want him to see the developement in Dhruliya tooo😆
i want cabir mission on MaNan nd DhruvLiya😉
very well written👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _keertu_

Cabir!!!!

my saviour he is...
i just want him to see the developement in Dhruliya tooo😆
i want cabir mission on MaNan nd DhruvLiya😉
very well written👏


Thank you dear!!! Me too .. i desperately want him to pull the string to get our love birds back ontrack...I just love Cabir!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Super👏 finally read something super positive ... 😃For the text of the cyst ten⭐️ and a big hug ...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumatra1234

Super👏 finally read something super positive ... 😃For the text of the cyst ten⭐️ and a big hug ...🤗

Aww. Thank you sooo much dear🤗.. Woh kya hain na after yesterdays episode i needed something to hang on to.😆!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: crystalfairy95

Aww. Thank you sooo much dear🤗.. Woh kya hain na after yesterdays episode i needed something to hang on to.😆!

I know how you feel ... my situation is the same as yours ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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woww i so lovedd this os😊
it'll b awesomee if this happens
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishu3003

woww i so lovedd this os😊

it'll b awesomee if this happens

I'm glad you liked it dear! Now that cabir is back i really hope we can see something better than this in the show..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: crystalfairy95

I'm glad you liked it dear! Now that cabir is back i really hope we can see something better than this in the show..

jus like he found out abt manan he shld know abt dhrulya too😳
it'll b fun😳
keep writing more👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks a lot for writing this yaar!😛
It is awesome!😛

CABIR is the best!😉

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