Manan SS Jealousy Kills Part 7 updated on pg33(Index on Pg4,Completed) - Page 21

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asadloveszoya

Very nice story plz upload next part asap thank you and take care..


Thank You. Busy Till 16th...with my Exams...Will try and continue after 16th. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ArpuSaran


when u will continue the story? Please do update soon


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -MyMy-

Love this. Please update soon.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Hii guys.
How are you?
So sorry for being late. Really sorry.
Here is the update hope you guys like it.
~~Part 7~~


But nandu's eyes were searching only one person who was nit there.
Nandini- man.manik kaisa hai? And vo kaha hai?
Aliaa- he is guilty he ll not come and he is fyn.
Nandini- ok. She cant ask more coz she is not talking to him.
After having soop and waiting for manik nandini slept due to effect medicines.
On other hand manik was waiting for nandini to sleep so that he can meet her.

At 10 Outside nandini's room.
Manik- plz abhi let me stay plz. They allow only one person and i wont be able to stay at home plz. If there is any problem i ll call you. He had tears in his eyes.
Abhi- fyn manik you stay i ll come tomorrow early in the morning.
Manik- ok abhi.
All bid goodbye and left.
Manik entered nandini's room making sure that she slept.
He saw her state, so pale, so lifeless.
He sat on the chair near by her bed.
He took her hand in his.
"Why you always have to be so mahaan nandini? Tumhare bina kya koi kuch kar nahi sakta? Kya zaroorat thi beetch mein aane ki goli mujhe lagne di hoti i deserve it" tears started falling down his cheeks. With a good pause he again said " agar kuch ho jata toh mera kya hota nandu. Main toh jeete ji mar jata, tum mujhse naraz ho toh mujhe saza do khud ko nahi. Plz nandini jaldi thuk ho jao plz" now he cried miserably. He kissed her hand which was entangled with his.
He than saw bandage on her stomach, he lifted her top a little and caressed her wound like a feather and placed a feather pike like kiss on her wound as if that kiss will work as medicine.
He than came up and kissed her forehead and said "i ll never forgive you for staking your life in danger never".
With that he sat on chair admiring her beauty.
Admiring her beauty manik also dont know when sleep took over him.
In morning doctor came for checkup and with click of door manik woke up with a jerk, he saw his surroundings and than the yesterday's events dawn on him. He looked at nandini she was still sleeping.
He moved out before she wake up and by that time abhi too arrived. Doctor checked her.
Doc- so how are you?
Nandini- i am fine doctor.
Doc- good. You ll have to stay here for 1 week than you can go home.
Nandini- doc uncle mujhe yaha aur nahi rehna.
Doc- haha. But rehnq toh padega. Ok after 2-3 days if there is improvement than i ll discharge you.
Nandini- ok
Doc left gang entered.
Abhi- how are you baby?
Nandini- i am fine bhai.
Abhi- girls you be with her i ll go and bye her meds.
Mukti- okk.
He left and nandini asked only one question. " mukti aliaa rat ko kon ruka tha yaha? Tum sab toh abhi aye"
Aliaa hesitantly replied " manik"
Nandini asked " toh vo kaha gaya"?
Mukti replied this time " vo tumse or khud se bht naraz hai. Usne tumhe sacrifice karke galti ki and he want to rectify his mistake but he know that the condition you are in is because of him. And he is angry that why you came in between".
Nandini asked being shocked " you guys know everything"?
Aliaa- yup. He told us. See nandini galti hum sab karte hai but you should forgive him.
Nandini- no aliaa he did wrong.
Mukti said" we agree and we are with you take your own good time. If you feel he has changed than forgive him. Or else dont"
Nandini- thanks guys.

At night.
Nandini's Pov
Nandini was acting like she's asleep because she wanted to see manik and he ll only come when she ll be sleeping.
She heard the door open. She felt someone coming towards her she pretend sleeping.
I felt a warm pair of lips on my forehead, i am sure its him.
He sat besides me and took my hand in his.
He started crying telling her to get well soon. She wanted to wipe her tear but couldn't do that.
I felt my hospital uniform's top lifting i opened my eyes a little making sure that manik didnt see me. I was shocked he dropped a feather light kiss on my tummy saying get well soon.
He got up and nandu closed her eyes.
She gain respect for him, if he just used her than he should have taken advantage of her unconscious state rather he dropped a kiss on forehead and tummy.
Thinking all this she slept and manik too slept.

Next day doctor discharged her on a condition that proper care has to be taken of her.
Everyone excused themselves making excuses so that nandini is left with no option byt to go with manik.
She cant walk for few days.
Manik very delicately scooped her in his arms made her seated in passenger seat of his car and drove her home.
Through out the drive he tookcare of her like a baby but didnt talked to her as he is angry with her.
They reached home.
He took her and made her comfortable on her bed.
Nandini- naraz toh mujhe tumse honq chahiye tha tum kyu muh phoola ke baithe ho.
Manik- goli mujhe lagni thi hoti kon ho tum mujhe bachane vali kis haq se tumne mujhe bachaya? Mere itna hurt karne ke bad bhi tumne bachaya. Kyu?
Nandini- oh really mr. Manik malhotra. Haq ki bat kar rahe hi. Tumne kis haq se mujhe kal tummy pe kiss kia, mujhe forehead pe kiss kia, kyu roye mere liye jab vo sab chize jhuthi thi toh. Kyu?
Manik was shocked "tum soyi nahi thi?"
Nandini- nahi. Batao manik meri behoshi ka fayda utha rahe the?
Manik- chi nandini itna cheap nahi hu. Tumse pyar karta hu or koi fayda nahi uthaya tumne. He was so angry that was about to leave but he saw nandini struggling to get up.
Manik rushed to her and scolded her- pagal ho kya... He could not complete his sentence he was cut off by. Ehm ehm😉
Nandini spoke all this to provoke him so that he confess his love to her. She knew he was angry so tried to stop him by getting up.
But he himself came to her scolding her. But she had her own pkans she was not in a mood of listening. She placed her lips on his. Within seconds he too responded.
The kiss was pure love. Nandini broke the kiss and whispered against his lips. I love you too manik. They again kissed in hapiness of finding their new love.

The End
So how was it guys? This is the last update. My SS ends here.
By guys take care.
Love Vish❤️
Edited by MeDHellsAngel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved this!
it was so dramatic and great!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome updt vish
Loved it

So dramatic one and lvly <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww so cute fantastic loved it superb ending

Hoping you would write again something different and awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was amazing story
I loved it fully
Thank u so much for the last part pm
SOO that I don't hav to wait for next part 😉 😆

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