MaNan Drabble/OS|One at a time|

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hola lovelies. This OS is an inspiration from one of my favorite OS's written by my woman crush Rafz. Here It starts from where her OS ended so I would suggest you guys to read it first. It was a challenge from my virtual mom (Doc) to come up with a serious story, here it is.
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After washing his lice infected hair, she slapped him again, a little softer this time.
"Ow! That hurt" he winced rubbing his cheek.
"You asked for it" she huffed.
"That sting like a bee, Nandu, what the hell?" he gave her an annoyed look.
"Next time, you pull a stunt like this, you'll have the worst from me" she hissed at him, sticking her index finger in his chest.
"Worst, eh?"
"Yes, you have no idea" she crossed her arms.
"You do know that I can shut your smartness, don't you?" he raised an eyebrow earning a puzzled look from his child-woman.
"Don't you dare Manik" she tried warning him but he had already made up his mind. he pulled her towards him, making her crash against his hard chest. Damn he smelled so good.
"Manik, let me go" she struggled to get out of his grip but it was too strong for her to do anything.
He leaned in, nuzzling his nose in the hollow of her neck, breathing in her skin, every time he did that, it sent shivers down her spine. She loved it usually but this time she was angry at him, well that as her plan. She pushed him away "Come near me only when you get rid of your lice" she pointed at his head and ran away.

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It's been 18 months since they got back together, again. It didn't take long for Manik's revenge plan to go kaput. His feelings were far too obvious for anyone to ignore. Dhruv got to know what his buddy was trying to do. Manik was trying to force Nandini to love him, he was sacrificing her as if she was a goat. It hurt Dhruv, when Nandini rejected his proposal, but it killed him when he got to know about the sacrifice. Dhruv went back into his shell, he refused to see Manik, not because he stole the girl but because he didn't think Dhruv was strong enough to accept the truth. Guilt engulfed him, every time he saw Manik with Nandini, smiling, giggling, holding hands, he was hurt, not because she was with him, but because Manik was trying to give up all this for his buddy. He had never seen Manik so happy, and the thought of taking away his happiness, though unintentionally, killed him from the insides. He wasn't angry, he was disappointed, in himself and Manik. In himself, because he wasn't able to see what Manik's eyes were trying to say, and in Manik because he underestimated their friendship.

Manik knew Dhruv was broken, he had let his buddy down, his stupid act of sacrifice had unintentionally bridged a gap between them. He tried reviving his old bond of brotherhood, he succeeded to some extent, but he knew Dhruv would take his own time to process everything and come to terms with it. Manik was ready to wait.

18 moths had passed and Manik and Nandini got to know each other, their love grew stronger, their trust was rock solid, they were the kind of couple one only dreamed about. And yet, there was something missing. Like Cabir had once mentioned, "they needed to take it to the next level". But Manik was the kind of guy who did one thing at a time, and this time, his priority was getting back the old friendship with his Buddy, Nandini understood him,stood by him, and waited for him. Cabir was annoyed, he thought Manik was being stupid like always, and taking a sanyaas, but Manik was being Manik, and only she understood him.

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"Why was he cranky yesterday?" Cabir asked Nandini, whilst stuffing a piece of cheesecake that she had brought.
"Ah, the joy of eating cheesecake early in the morning" he licked his fingers while Nandini smiled.
"Lice" she sighed, making Cabir almost spit the cake.
"What?!" he looked at her puzzled.
"What what?" Manik walked in, taking a bite from the box. Music wing was Manik and Nandini's secret spot, but Cabir joined them, making it a fun spot, their spot. All three of them hanged out there, before and after college, teasing each other to their wits end.
"How are those lies doing, Manik?" Cabir wiggled his eyebrows, making Manik drop the piece of cake he was holding.
"You told him?!" he screamed at Nandini in disbelief.
Cabir stood next to her, wrapping his arm around her protectively.
"We follow a 'no=secret policy' you see" she high fived Cabir.
"Such cruel monsters you two are, it's not funny okay," he made a grumpy face and stormed away only to come back and snatch the lunch box containing the delicious cake.
"You won't get to have any of it" he hissed and disappeared.
"Such a drama queen he is" they both stated together, before bursting into a fit of laughter.
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That's about it. I wasn't gonna post it but oh well. Leave in your feedback, I would love to read your thoughts. <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
I WIN.
So long, SUCKERS 😎

EDIT :

Ok so pahle toh Doc, Thank you so much for making this happen and pushing this gadhi toh write.

And doosri baat ... koi itna acha OS likh ke choron ki tarha logon ko PM mein kyun chup chup ke dikhaye ?! I mean this idjit under-esti-mines (yes I said that) herself way too much -_-

And now . Umm ok. Let me start with my favourite bit.

The last bit where he stalks out of the music wing hideout all disgruntled after Cabir and Nandu gang up on him ... and then comes right back to snatch the cheesecake and then leaves just the way he came, sulking and throwing a hissy fit 🤣🤣 Need I tell you ? Dramaqueen Baba is my favourite ... and you've portrayed him JUST the way it is in my head. LOBE <3

And Cabini yaariyaan <3 The Feeelsss <3

How much do I love it that Cabir and Nandu have nothing better to do than sit and bitch about Baba? 🤣

From the tone of the OS to the content ... Its all LOBE <3 Which is a lot like love but much much cooler.

And I love how this is both serious and hilarious at the same time ... love how you've balanced Manik's antics with his serious wale feels.

More power to you.

Bohot saaray OS likh, and mujhe khush kar.

k bye.

^ #IKEdYouAgain 😎



Edited by OneThatGotAway - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww Bushy, i wnt my CabIni 2 b jst lyk dis..4get MaNan i'd rather ship these 2..😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww...Bushy 🤗\
that was soo cute...the romance part was so up your alley of course...shut her mouth?ahaan!😉

but Cabini...hayee...such feels!
I wanna see CabIni n MaNanBir bonding RIGHT NOW...viku r u listening?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You girl heel my heart like nobody else. My firefly .🤗
My Manabir ship be sailing so proudly. Fluttering my poor heart and the "no-secret" policy. Bless you two Cabir-Nandu, be this awesome always. Can i just go and eat that cheesecake with you all, Nandu you can have your Manik, while I will just cuddle Cabiraaa.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Bushyyy
Borrowing some words from Robert Burns, you get the point right, love, rose, and all that...😆

"My love is like a red, red rose. That's newly sprung in June : My love is like the melody. That's sweetly played in tune."
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Edited :D :D :D

And oh oh oh .. I forgot to add how I love that the story starts with nandu ka domestic violence 🤣

And agar aise awesomesauce OSs tu mere insane drabbles parhke likhti hai toh mai toh roz ek bakwass rant na post kar doon uthaa ke ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Adhi Medha Genie .. You guys ... sharam kar lo.😳
Bushy ka post LIKE kaun karega ? Meray padosi ka langdaa kutta ?! 🤬
Edited by OneThatGotAway - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AAAH!😲😲😲 Bush! Bush! You be so damn awesome! So AWESOME!🤗
Whuh? Like, I can imagine the first scene, I can visualize it -- This is so effin' adorable. And I can totally see her blushing and trying to get away from him. Omg, I am obsessed with her cuteness.
And the whole music wing secret spot --😳 Ahh! My Head-Canon MaNanBir and CabIni -- Seriously, I'mma in love with your character voice. They are just effin' bang-on and perfect in my head. I can imagine the expression on her face when she says 'Lice' and I can completely visualize Cabir's eyebrows doing their thing on this and when he teases Manik. And Manik's shocked enrage at being sold out 😒... And the high-five and Baba being a drama-Queen but most importantly, Baba coming back to get the tiffin' and hissing at them ... OMG EVERYTHING IS PERFECT AND I WOULDN'T CHANGE A THING!

MORE ... MORE ... MORE ... GIMME MORE *runs towards you like a demented Pokemon*


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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice continuation..
loved the romantic scene but ofc lice came in between 😆

and this was my fav part.
"Such cruel monsters you two are, it's not funny okay," he made a grumpy face and stormed away only to come back and snatch the lunch box containing the delicious cake.
"You won't get to have any of it" he hissed and disappeared.🤣

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