FF : Happy Ending Pt4 (pg3)

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Part 1

Kabir and Raghav are in relation. Aliya and Dhruv are in relation also. Navya is pregnant while Harshad is in jail. Nandini stop singing after Manik betrayal and Manik doesn't have guts to propose her. Mukti starts to be happy and stop the depression tablets. She looks more serene. Shahid continue his life without any problem.

Raghav : Kabir, I want a family with you.
Kabir : What do u mean by family ?
Raghav : A child together.
Kabir laughing : I know we love each other so much but neither you or I can carry a child.
Raghav : Pagal I kno yaar, but it's possible to have a child with other option.
Kabir : You mean adoption
Raghav : No
Kabir : So
Raghav : Why we don't use the method of surrogate ?
Kabir : No forget it, which girl will accept to be the mother for us?!
Kabir left the room.
Raghav goes outside.
Kabir reaches Manik's house.
Manik : Hi buddy
Kabir doesn't respond to him. Manik punches him.
Manik : What's wrong with you ? Have you argument with your man ?
Kabir : Haan
Manik : Kyu what happened ?
Kabir : He wants a baby.
Manik controls himself : Clear something you are not a transexual ?
Kabir : What ? It's not funny ! I am serious.
Manik : Just adopt a child
Kabir : Not possible he wants our own child. And he has also a solution for it.
Manik : Which ?
Kabir : Surrogate.
Manik with reflexion : It's a good idea.
Kabir : What ? But who will accept ? And more I am so young I don't finish my studies still.
Manik : Mmm ok you are right you don't finish your studies but think about him. He is a man who hasn't the same age. And it's normally he consider about that. However you also have right to say your opinion about it.
Kabir : I wish that he will be happy.
Kabir's phone ring.
Kabir is devastated.
Manik : Kya waa ?
Kabir : We have to go, come quick.
They leave. Already Nandini is here.
Kabir : Tum ya haa ?
Nandini : Haan he calls me for a coffee. But before he parked his car. He met this accident.
Kabir : How is he know ?
Nandini : Patta nai.
Kabir : He says something.
Nandini : He said that you has to be happy for him, even if something happened to him.
He wishes that I continue my singing career. But before he closed his eyes I categorically said no.
Nandini has tears. Manik sees all without a word.
Doctor leaves the operation theatre.
Doctor : I am sorry, we can't do anything. He loses a lot of blood. He wants to see a man called Kabir.
Kabir is shattered. Manik asks him to go.
Raghav : Come beside me sweetheart.
Kabir goes slowly.
Raghav : You have to be strong. Please just complete my last wish you have to be a great father. And you have to reconciliate Manik and Nandini. Because you're the one who know about their feelings.
Kabir : Don't worry I will do whatever you want but please don't leave me.
Raghav : Don't abondon Navya she is alone and sad.
Raghav closes his eyes after his words. Kabir comes outside where all are waiting. He hugs Navya.
Kabir : He leaves me. Why ?
Navya : Kya waa Kabir ji ?
Kabir : He is dead.
Navya is shocked. Manik tries to console him but Kabir doesn't release Navya.
Navya : Manik I will take care of him.
She sits with him. He puts his head on her shoulder.
All other goes to Raghav's room.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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continue soon. this sounds really good.
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Part 2


Some days after Raghav's funeral.
Navya : I know it's difficult to loose someone that we love.
Kabir sobs : It's not same Harshad is a muck.
Navya doesn't respond. She just clean his tears.
Navya : I am here and I will never leave you.
Kabir : Don't make promise that you can't fulfil like Raghav.
Navya : I have decided to leave this world but before I received my pregnancy report. It's my child who allowed me to be alive. I couldn't punish him.
Kabir : His last words, it's to protect you and that I become dady. Even the morning of his death he talked with me about it.
Navya : You have also the right to be father. And I think you will be a good father.
Kabir : How do you know ?
Navya : When I learnt that I am pregnant, my first reaction was I can't be a perfect mother because I am young, no work, no money but above all no father. But when I saw my baby on scan and hear his beats. It was the best day of my life. I can't leave my child.
Kabir : Wow when I saw u for the first time, I was thinking you are a fool that we can torture easily. But this Navya is changed on a young mother. I appreciate you like that.
Navya : Thanks. You have to fulfil his wishes.
Kabir : So let start.
Navya : Ok
Kabir : Like me, he remarks that Manik and Nandini love each other, but they aren't together because of their guilty.
Navya : Yes it was her first love and wound.
Kabir : I know but he doesn't want to hurt her.
Navya : Right, so forget the past, if we are together we can make them unite. Ok ?
She tenders her hand and he puts his hand. She is smiling.
Nandini and Manik heard their conversation.
Edited by 8seetha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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pls continue. i can't wait for next part 😊
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short one but nice. next time plz update a long one.Nice story waiting for the next chapter.
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Nyc...story
Read in one go
Lovely story
I am in love with yr stories
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww nice one love kabir and Navya convo :)
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Part 3

Navya phones to Nandini. Before attending the call she goes outside.
Navya : Tum kaha hoo ?
Nandini : I am outside. Why ?
Navya : Can you go in cella and take out pots please, I need it for dinner.
Nandini : Hein ok.
She cuts the call.
Navya:Apki bari.
He takes his phone and ask Manik to bring bottles. And he accepts.
Navya : So what will do now Kabir ji ?
He takes her hand.
Kabir : Come mere saath.
They come near cella. He closes the door and locked it.
Navya : Wow Kabir ji.
Kabir : So follow we will see them.
They entered in a room with tv when they see Manan.
Nandini can't carry the three pots. She sees Manik glares to her.
Nandini : Instead of to glare me can u help me ?
He approaches and touches her hand. She feels him. It's was a long time that they speak or touch each other.
Manik : Go with bottles.
She tries to opens the door.
Nandini : Do u close the door ?
Manik : No yaar !
Nandini : Shit we can't go outside. I will call Navya.
She takes out her phone but she remars tht there is no network here.
Manik : Kya waa network nai hai kya ?
Nandini : Yep so what we will do know ?
Manik : We have to wait.
Nandini sees a mouse.
She yeels : Manik ! Manik !
Manik : Kya hai ?
Nandini : Woh mouse hai.
She hops and jumps into Manik's back.
Manik : Are u mad Nandini ?
Nandini : Tum ko pata hai naa I hate mouse. Remember when we were locked in college.
He thinks about it. He makes her stand. Catch the mouse and put it drain.
(Navya holds Kabir's hand.
Navya : Oh my god becchari she will cry. Let's go we will open the door.
Kabir : Naa naa they have to come closer first.
They look the screen.)
Manik : You never change.
Nandini : Like you.
Manik sits and Nandini too.
Manik : So tell me something about u.
Nandini : Kya ?
Manik : Anything like ur boyfriend ?
Nandini : Ayyappa ! How can I have boyfriend ?
Manik laughs : Why you become lesbien ?
Nandini : Very funny.
She touches his cheek.
Nandini : You have nice dimples.
Manik : Thank u.
Nandini : And u Romeo after your deep love in Aliya now who is the new one ?
Manik : I have no one.
Nandini : OOH.
(Navya : Very boring.
Kabir : Yes
Navya : How we can teach them the romance?
Kabir sees her cupidity.)
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love it, continue soon pls.
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Part 4

Kabir opens the door.
Manik attacks him.
Manik : Are u serious to lock us ?
Kabir : Chordo mudje, it's lock alone. And if it's me I will let u until tonight.
Nandini : Leave it guys.
Manik : I think u completely lost it after Raghav's death.
Kabir : What do u mean ?
Manik : I hear u with Navya to talk about our patch up.
Kabir : So what's the big deal ?
Manik : If u need someone just go and love someone but not interfere in our life. Before his death u was already like a Cupidon...
Kabir : Shut up Manik don't speak about him.
Nandini : Yes Manik you surpass all the limits and it's not fair.
Kabir : Let him talk. I am happy to be a gay and Cupidon but you are just a looser who can't tell his own feeling. I know why u pushed Dhruv to love Nandini because you never love her truly. No man can give his love to anyone but this stupid Manik did that.
Manik hits him.
Manik : Nandini look after ur own business. As raghav is dead you want to become Navya's child father, like his wish, isn't it Kabir ?
Kabir : It's my problem, and yes if Navya wants it will be a honour to be his dad.
Navya yells : Kabir ji, Nandini, Nandini...
All run upstairs.
Kabir catches her : Kya waa Navya ?
Navya : I have pain.
She cries.
Kabir : I will call doctor.
Navya : Please don't leave him. She holds his hand. Manik calls the doctor.
Navya faints.

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