Crying In Love

Manik:

I cried for not seeking love

I cried for not being the one...

to hold u tight when u needed me the most

to wipe the tears descending down ur cheek

to take ur pain and give u pleasure

to make ur fireflies shine again

I cried for not seeking love

I cried for giving u up

I cried for all the shattered moments

I cried for the broken heart

I cried for u believing that I had never loved

I cried for breaking ur trust in love

I cried for every pain I have caused

And I cried for the yearning heart

For all I wish is to see u smile...

And shine once again for me...like a shining star

Nandini:

I cried for seeking love

I cried for believing in trust

I cried for falling in love...

For all I found was sorrow and pain

For all I got was a broken heart

I had wished to be in your arms

I had wished to feel your warmth

I had wished to see the love between us flourish and grow

But all I got was a shattered heart

I have lost all hope in love

I have lost all hope in trust

I have lost all hope in promises

But deep inside I still have hope in us

p.s. This is the first time I'm writing something like this. I know it's not that good, but I just wanted to portray Manik and Nandini's feelings and their different pov's. Plz do leave ur comments/ thoughts and tell me if I should change something about it. I'm also open to any kind of criticism. 😳

Originally posted by: addictedlove

Wowewww
Mind blowing!!!!

Originally posted by: nadiafarjana

Very nice

Originally posted by: apardh_ba

Its lovely and the last line- "But deep inside I still hv hope in us." Its great u hv described their emotions, their pain beautifully through ur words.

Originally posted by: Ireena7

it's brilliant!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Parud26

this is brilliant!!! 😲👏

all ive been doing today is going through the forum and reading everyone's amazing work. like seriously, how the hell do you guys come up with these ideas? these words and phrases?

"crying in love" - this title suits our two lovers so damn well!

all in all, great job! and I can't wait to see more of your work 😛

Originally posted by: ragvir.fan

wow ... awesome