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Posted: 10 years ago
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😊 awsome ...😊.
😊pls update next part soon... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh god kaun hain yeh log and why they r bothering Nandini??? Update soon:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
oooh Interesting!👏 Love that Nandu spoke to Manik like that... Manik needs a real push to get his overactive imagination to work and then break down so the truth all comes out!😆

.. as for the mystery of the pen and goons, i am really curious. Hope they don't end up really hurting Nandu!😕


Can't wait for the next part!😉
Edited by RomComFan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Suspense Suspense..i cnt w8 2 knw wat is it abt da pen dat's soo importnt 2 those peope..🤔
Haha kya timing hai Manik ki..he always end up seeing thngs which infuriate him further..serves him right..😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Update kab milega? ?? Waiting for ur post ...plzz update na :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nyc. Plz continue soon nd pm me plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you all for reading and liking my story. Apologies for delay in update as I was little caught up.
Part 10 : Here we Go.

Manik stops his car. He is fuming with Anger and he wants to Push Dhruv away from Nandini

Manik goes near them. Stares angrily at Nandini

M : Dhruv yeh kya kar rahe tum log...

Dhruv is irritated

D : Manik cannot you see that Nandini is hurt and is bleeding.

Manik looks at Nandini's foot and snatches Nandini from Druv. Now Nandini is in Manik's arms.

Dhruv is shocked but doesn't say anything.

M : Nandini, kya hua tumhe.
Nandini is not responding to him

Manik puts Nandini in his car and dhruv and him take Nandini to the Hospital and get her dressing done,
Dhruv is observing Manik and Nandini and he has sensed that something is wrong between the two of them.

Dhruv goes to bring Medicines for Nandini and Manik is making the payment for dressing. He is done and goes near Nandini.

M : Nandini,,,
Nandini again ignores him. He tries to touch her
N : Manik I am telling you to stay away from me. I would not be able to bear anymore pain now...so please leave.

M : Your pain , what about my pain. Do you even have a slightest idea what i m going through.

Manik just looses it emotionally and Blurs out everything and tells Nandini that he did everything for Dhruv.

Dhruv is just standing behind and he overhears their conversation. He is heartbroken. Manik is shocked to know that Dhruv has heard everything. He tries to go near Dhruv but Dhruv leaves from there.

Nandini watches this helplessly.

Manik goes behind dhruv but Dhruv pushes him away and tells Manik that if he and Nandini liked each other then why did Manik lie.

Dhruv tells Manik to take Nandini home and tells Manik that he wants to be alone.

Manik is hurt but he goes inside picks up Nandini against her wishes and puts her in the car. Nandini is angry at Manik put she can also see how much Hurt he is.

They reach Nandini's house and he brings her in her room . He sits besides her and tells her that he wants to stay with her tonite.

Nandini notices his pain and cannot say no to him.
He hugs her and cries and finally he Says " I Love you Nandini"😳



Edited by backwithabang - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Aww.. Soo cute.. A ki bar jaldi update krna yar
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Poor dhruv I hope he understand and forgive manik. And manik u toh... I dnt knw whether to be happy that he finally confessed or feel sry u spill the beans in d wrong moment.
plz update soon and nxt time make it longer. plz cont soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So it's clear now ... Nandini and Dhruv knows ... I know they r hurt but they will understand Manik... Loved it plz update next part soon:)

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