JEALOUSY FOR SACRICED LOVE* part (1) up*12/11#Pg 2

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Jealousy for Sacrificed Love!!!

Hey guysss!
My FIRST ever post on this forum!!!!
I write stories on IPK.!!
But, Now I think I am getting obsessed with Manan!!!


And you'll think I'm stealing someone else's post!!!!
Confused much??! 😕 eh??

Ok..
Let me come to the point!
Yesterday I read one post regarding future track on yariyaan!
I even commented on it I want 3 option that is,
Manik to get jealous followed by passionate confession, but a
Little stubborn Nandini!!!!


I tried a lot to search the writer, but couldn't find!
Mind it - it was JUST post showing 4 possibilities on future track on Manan!!!

I want to continue a story on this track if you don't mind!!!!
Kindly let me know your views!!!
Then only I'll post; & write further;;
Otherwise I don't want my efforts to go waste!!

Thanks for reading my bakwas, patiently! 😆 😆

So, it is unfair on my part to leave you empty!
Don't worry!
Scroll down to 3rd post to find prologue!!!!

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Part (1) -> Click here..
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[size=5]So, here you go!

PROLOGUE


Musicana was over.
Yes.
Musicana brought a storm & destroyed the peace in SPACE..

Manik..
Well, no one knows what I'm going through..
For nandu, at least I understand what she's feeling & hence I always send Dhruv to her rescue.
But what about me?
What about my feelings?


Nandini..
I hate you, manik malhotra.
I hate you, Now & Ever.
You played such a sick trick just before musicana & made me joke in front of everyone!
Yes..
That's the only reason I hate him..
As I don't have any feelings for you Manik Malhotra!
(Wipes a lone tear)


Harshad..
Bloody looser!
A loser!
That's what that Nandini made me!
What does she thinks?
She'll have to pay for this.
We are not friends! That I'll forgive you..!


Dhruv..
Nandini is still upset for what happened during musicana.
I need to wait more to propose her!


Alya..
I'm happy manik knows about dhruv's feelings for Nandinni.
May be Now I can win him back..
But, I feel him distanced more than ever!


Kabir..
I knew Harshad will do this.
I so hate you nandini for spreading my video!
So what if I'm gay?
No one is able to accept me!


Mukti..
Fab5 is breaking after this bloody musicana.
It is proving us losers in spite of getting the trophy.
What is the use of it when you are breaking apart!


Navya..
I always thought after musicana everything will be ok..
But, I never imagined this..
At one side my friend has pulled herself .. I'm still unable to figure out what exactly happened despit knowing something very huge has happened!
On the other side is Harshad ji.
Don't know what to make out..
He's behaving so differently. Like...like...
Like we were connected for music only & my feelings for him doesn't matter!!


Shahid..
Musicana is over.
We lost.
But, everyone gets second chances, don't they??


Nyonika..
Urgh!
I warned Raghav before hand!
Still he didn't take precaution!
And Now see what happened?
And this Nandini!
I have to confront Harshad!


Raghav..
I knew something like this would happen!
That's why I was warning Kabir!
But, he didn't listen to me!
I'll give him a piece of mind!
Now, I don't even care even if he dies!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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No Reviews!!!
Fine!
I'll drop this idea!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome that u gave details to all reactions
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow this is nice... Plz continue it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part (1)

Fab5 were in the music room sans cabir in silence pondering over the revelations.
Dhruv loving Nandini, Manik & Alia break up, Mukti on pills & Cabir!?
Well he is different topic altogether.
He hid the truth & went ahead & brought Rose for what? To hide himself?! .


Trying to get these absorbed in their minds, everyone was silent.
Alia was thinking to do something for Manik & gain his attention back.
While Manik was busy in his thoughts of his STAR. Yes. That's what she's. A star for him. But, he has himself snatched its light.
But, he couldn't help but ponder, A star never loses its illumination despite our efforts to shun it.?
Then why Nandu...
He was brought back to reality after hearing Dhruv's voice,
"Guys, you all are supporting me for Nandini? "

"Of course dude. We love you.& so do all of your relations."
Mukti put a reassuring hand on Dhruv's back.
"But where's this Cabir? He messaged he's not coming."

Cabir entered the college, face down; trying to gather courage.
He messaged his friends he is not coming as he doesn't want to them humiliated in front of everyone.

As he was going to music room lost in his own thoughts, he didn't notice he collided with one girl.
He helped her stand straight, & that's when Harshad appeared.
"Arey, today you behaving like Human.
What happened, cabir?
Kahin isse pyar to nahi ho gaya?
After all, cabir made you stand instead of making you fall?"

The girl threw a disgusted look at cabir.,
"I would've prefered falling rather than being touched by this man!
Oops! He's NOT A MAN, right? To zara side pe HatoGI??? "

Harshad smirked at Cabir,
"So, here we have a GAY who used to make suicidal videos of poor, innocent students & upload them."

All the students were either laughing or mocking him. Some were cursing him for coming there as it broke their religion., etc.

Not able to bear more, he just ran away from there.
Whilst running away, he heard yet another comment,
'"Look he's running like a girl!
How come we didn't notice it, first?
It would be better if such people die."

Hearing commotion, Fab 5, too started coming down. Before they could reach there, Manik stopped them, "Cabir is not here. & our first priority is to find him, not to argue with these.
Pointing towards the crowd.

NH3
"Harshad ji, I know you're very upset with Nandini, even I'm; but please don't be so sad for musicana. We'll rock it next time. "

Harshad was in a bad frame of mind. He wanted to break Fab5, but still they are together; & on top of that shared every secret.!
Now, he has to find out, if yet theres something left to be ...

Tired, Fab5 members gathered again in nusic room.; on not able to find Cabir. Manik & Dhruv left the girls alone & strolled down, Manik enquiring Dhruv about Nandini.

Dhruv,-> I don't know. I called her but she's not responding.

Manik (selfthought) -> Nandini, pls don't avoid college.Come back Nandu, please.
(His face bearing a painful expression.)

Just then he saw Nandini entering the college in her usual attire. There was some sadness in her eyes, but she was trying her best to conceal it.
"No Manik. I won't break down. I'll rise everytime you make me fall, with even more vigour.
You can't break meManik.
Urghh! Stop thinking about that jerk Nandini.
Ha.. This is correct. I'll close his chapter forever from my life..
& Now I should go & apologize to Harshad."


"Navya stop it!
She's not yet here.
Anyways, why will she come here Now?
Musicana is over & so does our partnership.! There's no reason for her to come here, not even to apologize.!"
Harshad was beyond angry at Nandini for ruining his performance & Now Navya was eating up his head.

But, a voice from behind startled them.
" There is Harshad. There is yet another reason apart from apologizing that makes me come here.
First of all, I'm sorry. Sorry for ruining all. Dil se Sorry. Nandini promise.I regret it.
I regret for being so foolish.
Please forgive me!
And we're friends also, right Harshad? "

Harshad was already irritated with her speech & was about to blast on her, but something caught his attention,

for being so foolish..

for being so foolish...
...

"Hmm. Nandini. So, we ARE friends. & it must be very important for you to seek YOUR FRIEND'S forgiveness?
So, you've to do something? "

"Anything for our Friendship! "
Exclaimed nandini instantly.

Hearing Harshad's condition, their mouths were left open while Nandini was beyond shocked.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome... I m scared for Nandini... Harshad kya karne ko bolega!!!!! Update soon:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing chapter! It was really gud! Knowing Harshad, he's definitely going to make Nandu do smthing for his gain. Good effort dear & continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful start..
I wonder what this Harshad is upto?
Why can't Nandani understand that Harshad is a bad guy?
Hope soon she will realize this..
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh god why is every1 behind that poor soul. I m really scared for nandu. nice story plz cont soon.

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