P.S I Can't stay away from you part 3 updated[page :6] - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Its awesome! Amazing!
Pls write its next part too!
And do pm me!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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u know I read this yesterday before watching epi and for a sec I actually thought this is what happened in the show ..😆..

so realistic and well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Didn't saw your next part!
Pls update index!
I await your next part! Hope its soon!
Pls. Pm me!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yaar jaldi continue karo na! plz :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for all the appreciation😊
i'm glad u all liked it.
will update soon. hope u will like them as well
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I loved it loved it and I loved it. It is extraordinaryly awesome. Plz...plz cont soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow u update nice one!!
nandhu leaving the clg😲(hope it cmes in show nd manik goes to manify her😆)
precap-awww angry Manik😲😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice 👏 i just something like this happens on the show
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Oh this is really good!I 👏really like your idea..please continue soon and if you can please PM me when you update. 😊
Thank you so much.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Next Part::

I couldn't take my eyes off from her while she was talking with cabir. she got into car, I held my breath, hoping she'd stop, turn around and come running back into my arms..oh gawwd, stop being fool manik. Memory flashed of nandini teasing and running around calling 'Manik is a fool'. Instantly a smile appeared on my face.
Mukti: Hey manik,u look happy.btw what are u smiling at?
-🤢YEAH I'M VERY HAPPY[in a sarcastic Tone]
-of course mukti, we won musicana right replied alya. cabir reached us and we drove off.
Dhruv: party is @ur place , hain na manik
-Yes dhruv...ufff I realized I'm heading towards nandini's home. I'm short of words to curse my stupidity. I changed the direction.
we reached home, every one got down car but cabir is still lost .
Alya: Cabir, get down. what are u thinking abt?
cabir: hmmm nothing ...vo nandini...
-Nandini...every1 said in unison😕 Mukti: now u don't tell me that u r in love with her.
Cabir had a good laugh & said ...IF,IF I'm not gay may be i would..and raised his head slowly to see the reactions of all.
-For the first time I'm glad that cabir is gay...
All stood frozen, i finally spoke, lets go inside guys and turned back to lock the car. 😲saw nandini on car roof lying with me , I blinked my eyes and saw nothing. I groaned in frustration and moved with everyone to pool side.
After few moments of bitter silence,
Cabir: please guys say something, silence is killing me. If you are angry shout, scream do whatever u want but speak up...
Mukti: how could you lie to us cabir, you hid this and fooled us by bringing rose, and we are the last to know after that nandini, harshad. Huh, seriously? U killed me cabir..
Cabir broke up, i never saw cabir in such a bad shape.
STOP IT Mukti. I know u r hurt. even when i came to know, i screamed at him. But we need to understand him.If he could , he would . we are not just friends , we are family dammit. Lately i realized all us are keeping secrets like, u taking pills again. At first i got angry but i understood that we are not doing it intentionally. Its just that we are growing, new emotions , experiences; it takes some time to understand. Once we get to know then only we can share right[i just gave a pause realizing that i was speaking nandini's words..]. But from now no secrets guys, it will only break us. i cant let that happen, you guys are part of my life and had been since we were kids. NO, not part you all are my life, i can take all the pain but cant see u in pain, my voice broke i couldn't speak further.
Heard mukti sobbing and saying I'm sorry cabir.
Cabir:No mukti, I'm the one to apologise, i was ashamed to accept that I'm gay. when manik knew, he accepted and handled it well, i wanted to tell u all .I know u guys will fight with world for me, but raghav was not ready and later he broke up. I didn't tell nandini, she saw us, may be harshad also...
Dhruv: shhh stop it cabir.
He hugged cabir, mukti and me joined for group hug. It took us few seconds to realize that aliya was standing still and crying in the corner. Cabir went near aliya, asking is she still angry on him. She bursted into tears and hugged cabir
Aliya: I'm sorry, everything happened because of my bhai, he ruined mukti's life, now urs...because of me, u had to face him again and again..
I couldn't take it anymore
Aliya, don't dare to speak further, & don't compare yourself with that jerk. You are sweet and princess of our group. By hearing this she smiled and i pulled her into hug. I'm sorry aliya, i have been so rude to u. I broke up and didn't bother to know how u were, i almost stopped talking to u. its not that i don't want to talk to u, not that i don't like u; its just that i didn't know how to handle.and i didn't break up with u because of nandini, i wanted u to know this. Shall we start fresh, though we can never be a couple but i wanted to be friends just like before.
A lump formed in aliya's throat, hearing that never being couple, she thought for a couple of seconds and realized being friends is more imp for her and gladly said yes & smiled.
but i can't give you any massage, its only for my boyfriend.I made a sad face.
Alya: awww still its no manik
Manik:i definetely will miss that
Finally i felt good and realised mukti and cabir are staring at us but smiled later. May be everyone are accepting each other secrets and flaws. some knot in my heart loosened and we had a group hug.I could feel our bond is getting stronger.

Edited by meghana1reddy - 10 years ago

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