Manan ss- I wont give up( updated part 4a- page 6) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fab5 stood there with shock bcoz they cnt believe what they r watching is true. There ws a man on his knees who is crying hysterically like he hs lost everything in his life. Blood is flowing through his hands but he didnt care. They all dnt knw this defeated man. He looks like their friend manik bt he cnt be manik. Bcoz the manik they all know is always in control. He always stood strong when he is there they dnt hv to fear anything or anyone. Bcoz they know manik is there to protect him. Bt this broken man who is crying his heart out infront of them they dnt knw him.
Last they remember they all were practicing in the reharsal hall when suddenly they all heard sm noise. When they went outside they cm to knw about the fire. Bt they didnt understand as soon as manik heard about it he ran towards the building which hd caught by the fire. They dnt knw d reason bt they know they cnt leave their friend alone.
Bt manik ran very fast and they couldnt match up with him. He went inside the building bt they all were stopped by the guards.
They all were tensed and after 10 minutes they saw sm ppl were carrying an unconsicous manik with them. They all rushed him to the hospital.
Doctor hd said he needed rest and he will be f9 bt after one hour they heard sm noise cmng from his room. And when they all cm inside they were shocked. They dnt knw what to do even dhruv dnt knw how to comfort him. They all knw an angry manik, sm times they hd seen a sad manik bt they dnt knw this manik.

Ok I knw this one is nt that good bt i dnt knw I ok actually I dnt what I should write nw. Will update this SS's last chap soon. Aur jo likha hai pasand aaye toh like zaroor kijyega.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is a great addition. 👏


So glad that the fab 5 are seeing an emotional Manik- they need to know that he can't always be strog and give things up for them. They need to see him need tooo, so that they can take care of him and get him what he needs- his Nandu!😉

Thanks for the PM- please do PM again when you next update!😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great one ... Love the emotional side of Manik... But really hope Nandu is safe :) thanks ... Update soon;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RomComFan

This is a great addition.👏


So glad that the fab 5 are seeing an emotional Manik- they need to know that he can't always be strog and give things up for them. They need to see him need tooo, so that they can take care of him and get him what he needs- his Nandu!😉

Thanks for the PM- please do PM again when you next update!😉


Thank u so much. Yes fab5 hs to see that as much as they need manik, manik also need sm support. Thank u once again.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nicky13

Great one ... Love the emotional side of Manik... But really hope Nandu is safe :) thanks ... Update soon;)

Thank u. I'l let u know when I'l update next time.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u for liking.

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