Manan ss- I wont give up( updated part 4a- page 6) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks viji.chandran, snigdhagautam, nadiafarjana, Arshirox97, enchantedMe,love.ishq, nicky13 for liking my update. I'l cont as soon as possible. Thank you all the members who hd liked the story. Every opinion matters to me. Thank you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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just read all the parts...lovely ss yaar...plz continue soon...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

just read all the parts...lovely ss yaar...plz continue soon...!!

Thanks I'l cont asap.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Manik Malhotra get a grip of urself and ur stupid hormones. What d hell do u think u were doing out there if she hd nt stopped u, u were going to... Just dnt even go there. Manik scold himself as he stand under the shower to cool down himself. He was angry, frustrated all this was his own fault. What did he thought giving her up will be so easy, its nt lust when he kiss her it ws smthng he cnt describe. He just know one thing when he lost himself in her he felt he found everything. He dnt knw how he is gonna stay away from her, when she is hell bent on making him crazy. He need to go away, yes he need to go away from her asap. He emerges out of the bathroom and without looking at her he proceed towards the door.
N: umm! Manik
M: now what? He snapped.
N: Nothing imp may be this is in fashion. Bt I thought I should tell u this.
M: wat? Now he look at her face and saw she has her face down and have a serious exp on her face.
M: kya hua? Wat r u trying to say I didnt understand. He said softly as he cont to look at her face.
N: Its just that...
M: hmm!
N: u r comp wet. She said with a naughty smile looking him frm head to toe, he follow her eyes and noticed he is comp drenched. Oh! He ws in shower. Humph! Why d hell he is making a fool of himself in front of her. Oh god! Some1 save me bt in his heart he knew he didnt want to be rescued.

A short update bt nxt one will be longer and may be d last part. Thanks for all the likes and comments.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Naughty Nandini will get him back soon:) nice update:) continue soon:) thanks for the PM:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nicky13

Naughty Nandini will get him back soon:) nice update:) continue soon:) thanks for the PM:)

Thanks and I'l try to update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great uopdate.. please continue soon! 😊 We could all use some cheering up..

And please PM me if possible when you update. Thank you.⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RomComFan

Great uopdate.. please continue soon! 😊 We could all use some cheering up..

And please PM me if possible when you update. Thank you.⭐️

Thank you. I'l update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3b
Manik hs called his driver to bring sm clothes for him and instruct him to wait in d dressing room while he change. Manik malhotra is scared he dnt want to admit bt it is the truth. Manik malhotra is scared and the reason is Nandini murthy. The girl whose head didnt even come till is shoulder, who is so frazil that she break into tears with a drop of pin hs made the manik malhotra so scared that he cant even change his clothes in piece. Who knows when he is changing she will barge into the washroom. Ahh! What a delicious thought. Oh no! Manik dnt even go there this girl has the power to turned u on by her thoughts alone. He cant help bt smile remembering her, she is the only wish that he prayed to god to grant him. And she is the only one, he cnt have.

"pata nahi khuda ne aisi takdeer kyun likhi hoti hain.
Jinhe pa nahi sakte usi se mohabbat kyun hoti hain."

When he come out nandini is nowhere to be seen. His driver told him that she hs sm work so she hs gone into the west wing of the college. He dnt whether to be happy or sad. He ws about to go when he see his friends coming from the gate. He greeted them and they all go to their practice room.

After three hours
Manik doesnt know why bt suddenly he start feeling restless. He hs a feeling that something is not correct, he cant point out exactly bt smthng is definitely nt correct.
Mukti: hey guys! From where this noise is coming?
Cabir: look outside why these ppl r running?
They all goes outside and see many students are running. Cabir hold the hand of one student and ask whats the matter.
Student: college ke west wing maine aag lag gayi hain...
Manik felt his whole world has come crashing on his feet. He cant hear anything, just one thing hs came to his mind and that is her face. Her smiling face and the thought of never seeing that smile ever again is like he is thirsty from years and he was denied the last drop of water. He cnt let this happen, nobody cn messed up manik malhotra's life and nandini is his life. He run towards the west wing, and with every stride he take he thought about his nandu and the time they hv spent together. Her smile, her eyes, her innocence. He cnt let her go. No1 cn snatch her away from him. Even if god cm he will stand before nandini.

Ok by d last para I become melodrammatic bt cnt help it hindi filmon ka bhoot utarta nahi hain. Thank you everyone for liking d story. Keep commenting ur views are important for me. I m sending pm's only to those who hd asked for it in d comments. Thank you once again:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wat a grt update
dil aagya ispe

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