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Posted: 10 years ago

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Nandini asks Manik to bring back Harshad to SPACE.

MAnik witnesses his parents fighting.

MAnik has a confrontation with his DAD.

MAnik is broken and compltely shattered.



He sat on the floor with all his feelings shattered like the mirror glasses. But at least he had NAndini. He thought of her and smiled. But then remembered the last encounter...

Manik: Manik...You overreacted again...You need to say a sorry...

He called her but she did not pick his phone. He thought she has slept so just texted her

Sorry...I overreacted...I am sorry I love you.

He received a text within few minutes.

Manik please do a favor to me. Stay away from me for some days. I want a break in this relation. Just give me some space.

Manik felt as if the whole world was joining hands in hurting him today. He called her but she did not pick his phone and then switched the phone off.

He finally lost hope in what he had only some hope left. He was strumming his guitar strings and was thinking of a way out to the closed doors in his life.

Manik was hurt beyond repair. Why did it happen every time? He is always there for everyone whenever they need him and when he needs he can't even find their shadow nearby.

But hasn't it always been like this. Manik is the strong one. MAnik needs to look after everyone. He can never be broken. He is the devil in the disguise of an angel. He needs to be strong. He is the guarding angel. Hasn't it been decided since childhood...

His cell phone beeped with a message. It was Cabir who had added all the members of Fab 5 for group conversation.

Cabir: Guys Madhubala's hurt Nandini beyond repair.

Alya: How will she be? Navya called her an orphan.

Dhruv: True. Nandini is not the same. I can feel it.

Manik was not replying. He was just reading it and the memories of his last encounter with her were striking in his head.

Mukti: So what are we going to do then?

Alya: I think we should take her to Manik's farmhouse. What say?

Cabir: Yah. The place is good. And that would bring some fun and we too can relax.

Dhruv: But why is Manik not replying. I think buddy has a problem.

Mukti: MAnik are you there

MAnik took a deep breath not knowing what to type. He then got a different message from Alya.

NAndini will ignore you but don't feel bad. I already know she is going to say some harsh words to you and distance herself. I heard her talking to herself alone in the room. Take her there and make her realize your love. You guys need to be together. Please MAnik. Say yes.

Manik was frustrated. Why? Why every time does he need to prove his love to her? Why?

He took a deep breath and remembered their happy moments. Her cuddling in her sleep towards him. The way she hugged him. He way she stood on her toes to give him a forehead kiss.

MAnik: For the last time Manik...You love her and she loves you too...Be strong...These are small tests in the path of your love...You will excel...Nothings impossible...Be brave...She loves you and that what matters...Don't care about other people. One last time Manik...Just once...Give it a try.

Manik texted the group.

MAnik: OK guys. As you all say...

Mukti: All set then...Tomorrow morning at 7 at Manik's place.

Cabir: Yah and we can pick Nandini from her home itself.

Manik: bye guys

Manik took his car keys and then went towards Nandini's home.

He climbed the ladder and then got in her room with the help of the window. He found NAndini on the other end of the room and she was carrying her fireflies.

Nandini: MAnik...I told you to stay away from me. What are you doing here...?

Manik: I want a break...Don't mind if it's a short one...

NAndini wanted to express her concern but then

Manik: please Nandini...I won't be romantic...I just want to talk and vent out my frustrations.

He sat on the floor and Nandini too sat by his side.

Manik: I was small when my parents divorced and since then I have always been alone. I don't like being alone...It scares me...I too wish sometimes that I can lie my head upon someone's should and tell them what I feel...Why does everyone leave me in the between.

Nandini: everyone does not stay with you always. This is life...moving on is a part

Manik: but I can't...I only have limited people in my life with whom I share my happiness...I can't let them go

Nandini: Goodbyes are always hard to say. These separations are helpful in realizing the worth of the person...

MAnik: But I already know the worth of the person...She is my life...

Nandini: Everybody is not there always so always have something that can stay with you always. With whom you can lay your head on when nobodies around...

Manik: I had someone...but she left me today like everyone else...

NAndini: I was not talking about people...In my case I have fireflies and in your ...they are stars...You can always find them by your side wherever you are...

MAnik: but what about the promise she made to never leave me and be my star

Nandini: some promises are only fulfilled for some time...

MAnik: so all the promises were a lie...doesn't she realize she is breaking someone's heart

Nandini: maybe the fear of losing someone is more dreadful then breaking someone's heart...At least the person whose heart you break can be in front you well and fine...

MAnik: but if by breaking someone's heart you are killing that person's soul

Nandini: A person's soul is never killed by heartbreak...But the ones who love you will kill themselves if something happens to you

MAnik: How are you so sure that I will die?

Nandini: I am not sure Manik...When in child I can be responsible for killing my parents...

MAnik: that was an accident...You are worrying for something that is just baseless...I don't even have a scar in my hand...I have not been into any accident...I am standing n front of you well and fine...What makes you think I will die

NAndini: I can't lose you MAnik...I love you very much...I can't see you go away from me. You Aare just too precious for me...

MAnik: one day down the line...everyone will die NAndini...But I want to live my life and then die with you...

Nandini: No Manik...

Manik: Don't kill me like this

Nandini: Time out MAnik...You should go away from here.

Manik was so angry. He had to knock some sense into her.

Manik: No...Now your turn to speak up...As we have nothing between us now...You can use this as your weapon against me...So speak up

Nandini: I killed my parents...

MAnik: NAndini...

NAndini: No MAnik...I did and no one can deny it...If that day...

MAnik: Stop...let's not talk about your break because if you start you are going to faint right here and as there is nothing between us anymore I can't show concern towards you...can I

NAndini: I am an unlucky soul and you might get harmed as well if you be with me.

Manik grabbed Nandini and said

MAnik: get this Jab tak hai jaan fever out of your head. I am no SHahrukh Khan who will get recruited in boom squad and you will release my worth after some years of separation...Get a brain NAndini. You are spoiling your present by worrying about something that happened in the past and think that will happen in the future as well.

He left her and then again said

Manik: For this stupid reason you were advocating about the jerk with me. So that I get angry on you...You ...You thought about Harshad as a point to bring a strain in our relation...NAndini are you trying to act funny with me...Because your actions and words are really...

NAndini did not let Manik complete

Nandini: Manik all this seems a joke to you. I was not concerned about Harshad...Navya told me that Harshad would take student in his confidence and rusticate Fab 5...because Harshad had not done anything so big as much as compared to what Fab 5 does to other students...

Manik: Oh so that Madhubala blackmailed you...So it's Harshad's plan to keep you away from me...

Nandini: Manik it's not about Harshad...I want you to stay away from you so that you don't die...My parents died in front of my eyes. And I don't want to lose you...

MAnik: And in this way you think I am with you...You are distancing me from yourself by your own actions...

NAndini: MAnik I am tired...please I don't have the energy to prove my point to you

MAnik: fine...Do what you want. But I am not going to go away from you...You get that Nandini. I am not breaking up with you...

NAndini: MAnik listen to me

MAnik: No you listen to me...I came here because I thought you can handle me as I was really down but here I find that you are in a more vulnerable state then mine. You need lots of help...I am not leaving you...Either you give me the old NAndini back or get ready to face the old Manik...

Nandini was weeping

MAnik: how can you give up on life when you are the one who taught me to live...What was I before I met you...A living dead soul and now I am happily living with you...Learn to live at the moment...Give me that old NAndini...

Nandini: MAnik I love you but

MAnik: But what...If you love me have faith in my love...I am tired NAndini...tired of proving my love to you every time. I feel like this generation Sita...I am giving Agni Parikshya to you every time...

NAndini stood there still crying.

MAnik: Don't ...don't do this to me and yourself...I don't know anything...You are going out with Fab 5 tomorrow...That's it. End of discussion...And yes I want my NAndini there...

Nandini: You can't force me Manik

Manik: I will...and you have been a really bad girl today Nandini...So get ready for your punishment tomorrow...

He walked towards her to hug her but Nandini stepped back.

He smiled and then said

MAnik: I won't force you physically but emotionally yes. Because I need you...And this is the last time I am fighting for my love...

He kissed her cheek and Nandini looked shocked.

Manik: Don't be so shocked. Get some sleep and remove the bollywood fever from your head...

He walked towards the window and slowly descended down the ladders.

NAndini looked from the window if he reached safe or not.

Manik smiled looking at her concern.

He took his cell phone and texted her.

Relax.

Take that bollywood fever out and everything will be fine.

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Posted: 10 years ago
oh god I dnt why I hv this feeling that smthng bad is going to happen. maybe I m also having bollywood fever. nice update. iss madhubala aur harshad ko fab5 bas maza chakaye. update soon.
And thanks for d pm dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...

nandini needs some serious help...

hatss off to manik,...

he dint leave her...

he really seems like modernn age sita...

hate navya d most...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww loved every bit :) superb post...excited for the next update 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
😊 awsome update...liked the conversation between manik and nandini...
continue soon...
waiting for the farm house story...
thanks for the pm...
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update
loved it
very nicely written
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovee love love ❤️
awesome update gal really i love manik nandnai talk and the bollywood fever and jab tak hai jaan line was too cute yet funny really nicely written

keep it up 👏

and its really good u posted the update in one day do this every time cx i love reading this story

update soon 😉😳👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Waw waw waw..superb job..👏 What they need at this moment was a clear cut conversation and you described that superbly..i am becoming a fan of yours..please update soon..
MeDHellsAngel thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nyc update.
I loved it.
Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesum.. Liked nandini n Manik's convo!!
Update soon.. Vry well written
Edited by manan58 - 10 years ago

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