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Posted: 10 years ago
sry sry sry mynet was not working properly thats y cant comment
but read ur story in my mobile nd
yayyy!!alya knws abt MaNan awesome!!
poor nandhu!!
urgh navshad hw dare they hurt my Nandhu
now Manik will take care of nandhu!!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
navya needs to stop
alya and manik convo good


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Navya had just texted Harshad and turned back to find Cabir standing just behind her.

Cabir was about to speak something when Navya put her hand in front of him indicating him to stop.

Navya: Look I don't want to talk to you at all. So please go from here.

Cabir: And you think I will listen to you Madhubala .I have not come here to explain anything to you as its use less. You have gone way to far from where no one can bring you back. Yah if you really want, you yourself can do that.

Navya: you...

Cabir: I have not finished. I am not here to make you understand anything because to understand you need brain and I really doubt if you possess that. I am here to warn you Navya. Dont you dare...I repeat don't you dare get influenced by Harshad and hurt Nandini because if that happens...Fab 5 will go after Harshad but I will come to you. So get your paths straight.

Navya got shocked by what Cabir said. She tried saying something but fumbled.

Navya: Harshad...Harshadji. I don't know what you are talking about...me ...I have already come to know his real face...It's over...

Cabir laughed and then said

Cabir: are you this stupid or you act to be this dumb...You are still giving him respect by calling him Harshadji and then you expect me to believe that you are over him...

Cabir stopped laughing and then said

Cabir: Warning you... you are not even that dumb to not remember the torture right...that time you broke one string of the guitar...just imagine if you break someone who is close to Fab 5 what will happen...

He took a big leap towards Navya making her jump then turned and left the place.

Navya kept her hand in her heart and said.

Navya: Don't get scared. They are just trying to influence me. I need to do what Harshadji says me. He will make it alright.

Here on the other side Nyonika came to a restaurant where Harshad had called her.

Harshad: Hello ma'am. It's a pleasure to meet you.

Nyonika: Why have you called me? What was so important about MAnik that you wanted to say to me?

Harshad: That was just an excuse to meet you. As you are not concerned about anything except MAnik and yourself.

Nyonika: Come straight to the point. I don't have whole day for you.

Harshad: You rusticated me for your son. I want to come back in SPACE and you have to do that.

Nyonika: and what makes you think I will do that for you

Harshad: because if you don't you might not get to see your son alive.

Nyonika smiled and said

Nyonika: Manik was absolutely right about you. He told me you are a loser but I had better expectations from you.

Harshad: I mean it. You know what I can do, don't you

Nyonika: And don't you know what I can do for Manik's sake. If I can stay away from him and make him hate me for his well ebbing, I can do anything .I thought you knew Harshad.

Harshad: So you are not going to agree.

Nyonika: Manik's given me a strong reason for rusticating you from SPACE. Give me on good reason and you can come back. And mind you the reason better be really strong.

Harshad: How about we keep it like this. If I am back in SPACE you son's life is not in danger anymore.

Nyonika stood up from the chair in ager and stared at him with furious eyes.

Harshad: You are angry.

Nyonika: Harshad Saxena. Get this thing in your head really soon or you are going to repent each day of your life. Manik is my life and you know how self centered I am right.

Harshad: So agree to my condition.

Nyonika: You cannot come back to SPACE as a Music student. Join the arts faculty and start your career from the beginning. Only then I will allow you to come in.

Harshad: What the hell. Arts faculty classes ebbing when music classes finish.

Nyonika: Smart. Your hell will begin if you come near my son. It won't just be me. And I am sure you won't want Manik's father to come in the picture right.

With that she stood up and walked away.

She texted MAnik.

Dinner with me at 8 in home. Be present.

MAnik texted her back.

I told you in the morning itself I won't come.

Nyonika texted back.

You don't want me to have dinner with Mr. Malhotra do you?

Manik called her. Nyonika picked the phone.

Nyonika: I knew you would call me

MAnik: He is back. I told you I don't like him and don't want to see his face.

Nyonika: Don't see his face then. Just have the dinner and leave.

MAnik: Why will he have dinner with us?

Nyonika: MAnik relax. Remember our deal.

Manik: I paid the price. The signed file is in your cabin right now.

Nyonika: That much won't be enough. I have to save you from the police as well. You haven't beaten Harshad till now, have you?

MAnik: Listen Nyonika. You know it very well that I won't come.

Nyonika: Manik I have better things to do than to argue with you on the phone. Even you know I hate him but for the custody...

MAnik: I.

Nyonika: Let me finish. Just come and have the dinner. If you don't want to fine. I will have to have the dinner with him all alone.

Manik: Fine. But I will come late hopefully by 9

Nyonika cut the call.

Manik was so furious and angry .But he was also sad, hurt and dejected.

Flashback

Manik along with Mukti and Dhruv came to drop Nandini and Chachi at Nandini's house. Nandini did not speak at all while Chachi kept blabbering. MAnik looked at Nandini from the mirror and her eyes seemed sad. She looked defeated with her life. He had to do something.

Manik: Chachi we have arrived. You go and open the door I will bring Nandini.

Chachi: ok, Nandu just hold Manik ok. You are still weak.

With that she gave Nandi's hand in Manik's when Nandu jerked her hands away from his.

Manik and Chachi looked shocked.

NAndini: I am fine Chachi. I can walk myself. I think Manik should just go away from here. I don't want him here.

Manik: what...

MAnik was gob smacked. And Nandini walked away from there.

Dhruv spoke up.

Dhruv: Buddy I think you should go from here.

MAnik: But...

Mukti: Manik, Dhruv is right. However NAndini does not like you. Remember the fight you all have always...If you stay with her she might get sick...sorry

MAnik was shocked and mad at everyone and more than that himself. He was responsible for whatever happened today.

He left from there and drives the car in full speed and stopped the car in a park. He then received the text from Nyonika.

PROMO
Fab 5 on a picnic with Nandini
Manik saves Nyonika from someone
MAnik and his Dad's confrontation
FAB 5 gets to know of MaNan but from HArshad
Mukti slaps Manik

Edited by loquacious_me - 10 years ago
keerthu27 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
yayyy!!update!!!
Nyonika harshad talk eekss i am luving tis lady!!
nandhu y she behaved like this with manik😲
promo seems intresting!!
continue soon dear
love ur writing waiting!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wooow! !! Very intresting ! I truly appreciate the writing and the story content is awesome...Please don't stop...eagerly waiting for the next update..promo looks promising
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Posted: 10 years ago
So your story is going to grow for long? That's interesting to know that your ideas are keep branching out for all other characters too... I hope you maintain the dignity and self-respect for Nyonika's character because it would be really good to keep her true to her portrayal of character without anything fishy and typical/unneccesary drama twist... Even if she is continued to be shown as a bad mother, full of herself and self-centered never mind but no case of infidelity and creepy relationship for her... 😊
I am waiting for Manik-Nandini relationship side of the story and their equation with Fab5 in your FF which interest me more than anything else.. So I will save my comments for that part! 😃
And yes Chacha-chachi with the group would be good to watch for... šŸ˜‰ I miss them so so much in the show...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank u thank u thank u so much. I so wanted nyonika to be a positivecharacter bt dnt knw if this will happen in d show or nt. I m so happy and navya you you toh just go to smwhere where I cnt find u.
oh my baby got slapped no plz no fab5 cnt break. plz update soon. And thank u so much for d pm. If u want to concentrate on one story at one time then do that only bt plz dont finish it in hurry I loved all ur story so keep writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
😊 awsome update yaar...😊
u r a blessed writer...😊
nandu... why she behaved like this with manik😲

promo seems interesting!!😊

continue soon dear😊
thank u so much for the pm...

Edited by aavani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg!omg!omg! this is sooo good!!!
there's so much going on here and I have sooo many questions, but I guess all of that will be answered by the next chapter?

urgh! im guessing Navya told something to Nandini about Manik? 😔 that's why she's all agro on Manik?
I love Cabir! šŸ¤—

I simply cannot wait for the next chapter!
and thanks for the PM šŸ¤—
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Posted: 10 years ago
please dont stop the story

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