MANAN OS I found my solace

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This is my first attempt on writing a piece on manan...please let me know how is it...if you like it then please hit the like button and please comment.thank you

I FOUND MY SOLACE


MANIK can I take a rain check on our today's meet please,she contemplated for some time and then hit the sent button.she felt relieved that manic replied in positive ,she was really apprehensive about his reaction because she knew he did not like it if things did not go his way.


Manik was surprised and curious to know what personal work did she have and what could be more important than dhruv and rishab for her,but he let it go because he knew she was not good at lying and she must have really something important to do for canceling their meet.i should really stop thinking about her and just focus on musicana.


Chachi please distract rishab and keep him occupied with his foot ball game.i just need to be alone today please and if anything happens then txt me but please otherwise do not disturb me.i hope you understand. nandini took her scooty and drove away...she had her secret get away place when ever she was upset and sad.she sat on the cold grass and closed her eyes.


Nandini baccha can I open my eyes now please, no mommy please wait ,a 10 year old nandu exclaimed just five more seconds.one two three four and five avantika opeaned her eyes and she got the best surprise of her life...the room was decorated with roses and there was a beautiful painting which was signed as to the best mom of this world happy birthday I love you yours and only yours nandu and there was a beautiful chocolate cake .do you like it mommy asked an exited nandini,like it baccha I love it my sweetheart, this is the best surprise ever.i love you too meri jaan avantika said with a teary smile.


Nandini opeaned her eyes tears streaming down her cheeks ,that was the last birthday she got to celebrate of her mother ,the next day they had gone for a drive and everything changed.the worst part was she could not grief properly for losing her parents because she was the elder sister and she had to be strong for her little brother.she always muffled her sobs so her amms and rishu could not know how much she was damaged, how at the age of ten she had matured just so her family would not be burdened with giving her the solace after her parents death as well.


She got up slowly and took out the canvas she had brought ,she started painting ,she wasn't even sure of what she would draw on the canvas but as soon as she held the pencil it was like her hands had a mind of their own and she started to draw.


Nandu's chahi was worried it was nearly four hours and nandu wasn't back.she decided to call navya as she thought that she might know her niece's whereabouts but chichi was met with disappointment as navya replied in negative as navya did not know where nandini is.navya was mumbling to herself, worried sick about nandu as she wasn't receiving her calls or was replying to her messages.kaha ho tum nandu.hey bhavanji plese nandini ko safe rakhna. Manic heard navya say that and was tensed,it had never happened that navya did not know where nandu was...he removed his cell and gps traced nandini's mobile he did not know why he had added her number along with his friends list in the gps tracker but it came in handy today.


Manik drove like a mad man to reach where his nandu was...the more time it took to reach there the more he got angry he was in a good mind to blast her off for behaving so irresponsible and making all her loved ones worry for her.as he reached there he stopped there stunned,the place was mesmerizing ,with the greenery and the small pond,it was beyond beautiful ,he found nandini drawing on a canvas.she was so lost in her own world that she did not hear the footsteps coming close to her.

When she was done with her art she was shocked,because she drew her mother's face after 10 long years something in her snapped and she broke down,seeing her mother's picture she cried like a child had lost its inspiration like a child had lost her most loved person.manik was stunned seeing her like that.he slowly placed his hand on her shoulder ,nandini turned and when she saw manik's pained expression on seeing her condition let her go of her last restrains as well,she hugged him and cried like she had never before,she cried like she wanted to when she saw her parents lifeless bodies,she cried like she wanted to when she saw her parents burning pyre.she hiccupped and told manik every feeling that she had bottled up deep within her and manik held her tightly saying soothing words to her .



She stopped crying after a while.she moved a little and looked at him,he caressed her face and gave her a warm smile,she smiled back and hugged him again.she had finally found her solace in the warm embrace of a man she loathed at one point of time.she finally let it all out.and she finally accepted that this man who gave her immense pain but he was the same man who wiped that pain in his own twisted way and now she felt at home in his arms.she finally accepted that this man had come to mean to her more than anyone else could,she could finally accept that she is falling for him and now there was no turning back.


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zohasad2.0 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was amazing dear

Manik and Nandu spending some US time when Nandu really needs him..amazing.

That hug was P-E-R-F-E-C-T.šŸ¤—

Do write more on MaNan,

---Zoha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!!! That was beautifulšŸ‘
It truly touched my heart,brilliantly written!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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heart touching os. And you hv written nandu's feelings very well. About one thing I hv a doubt I think nandini was 8 when her parents died. Though I am nt sure.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: apardh_ba

heart touching os. And you hv written nandu's feelings very well. About one thing I hv a doubt I think nandini was 8 when her parents died. Though I am nt sure.


true...i just changed the age...
and thank you for appreciating my work
really means a lot
butterfly7 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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zohasad2.0, shahz
thank you so much for appreciating my work...really means a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Manik is such a sweetheart
poor Nandu..nicely written
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one and very much heart touching... I don't know I m feeling sad for Nandu coz she was missing her mom terribly or happy that she got her solace... So mixed feelings:) plz keep write more Manan stories:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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are you sure that this is your first time writing on manan? because this is just amazing! šŸ‘šŸ‘
poor girl didn't even get to mourn for her parents properly because she had to stay strong for her brother😭
I really enjoyed reading this! do write more 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You've written beautifully... ManaN hug not once but twice that was the best part of this OS..

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