Phir Le Aaya Dil || A Manik-Nandini OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

Raina...omg u here?helloonzzz...🤗...

i joined the forum today only n urs is the first OS i hv read in this forum SOLELY coz i knw u from TBP forum...i saw this show today only n am lovin it n my SOLE REASON to watch the show is Parth aka Manik..i had loved this guy many months back in Yeh Hai Aashiqui..But i had NO IDEA till today tht he ws the hero of this show...While changing channels today i saw him..n i ws lik omg hes in this show?i so loved loved his char n this couple n joined a forum a few min ago n WHAT A TREAT i got..ur wonderful MaNan OS..loved it...i had so so loved ur stories on RaHi..!! glad to knw nw i hv opportunity to read them on this brand new couple i am lovin- MaNan..!!

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

aishu...oh terii..u too here?i joined forum today only..see last page for my meet with this show..😆

glad to see TBPians here..🤗🤗

Kya baat hai ...Raina 's here...vaise abhi tak maine officisl entry nahi maari hai iss forums pe but what d Heck...I have been commenting here lately coz apparently most of my friends are here ...
coming to ur OS u do know I love reading ur work dont u?
Well u didnt disappoint one bit...
I had this huge grin plastered on my face while reading MaNan banters ...
U surely know how to draft a complete package
love
Rads

OMG OMG OMG!
What was that LAST PART!
Poora part was DAAAYUM
BUT LAST PART IS MY FAVORITE!
Screw You commoner
Becomes Love you spot
And that wink Becomes Love you too Monster. And the way he sits up while she peeks through the tree.
RAINA TERE HAATH KO KISS KARNA CHAHTI HOON MEIN YAAR!

Ab poora OS was like A BOMB. YUP> YOU HEARD IT RIGHT BACHI. BOMB. BIG WAALI!
COME BACK FROM WHEREVER YOU ARE AND GO WRITE KY2 SCRIPT. LIKE RIGHT NOW? GET ME?!
The way you write dialogues Man <3
Tujhse baat karna is a delight and adventure and tere stories padhna is like A TREAT YAAR!
Manik and Nandini HAS NEVER BEEN SO BEAUTIFULLY PORTRAYED IN ANY OTHER OS> GUARANTEE!

LOADS OF LOVE
Aaru <3

That was awesome; indeed he's attitude is rubbing off on her; can't wait to see that in the show.

-Sona

Originally posted by: apardh_ba

I dont hv words to tell how much I love this os. Its awesome plz do write more on manan.

Originally posted by: lostmymusic.

Chocs is here! And so is the cheesiness! 😆Gee, thanks Maisy! 😆

Naah..it wasn't that cheesy :P It was quite..cute. Manik & Nandini having their own little secret and enjoying it as they kept up with the facades. And I tou love the way you write dialogues!
Shukriya, shukriyaaa! 😳
My fav bit?
her Aiiyappa knew how hard it was on him. Ufff, that's my favourite too! <3

ADORABLE!!!!! Them learning each others' habits and quirks with all the alone time they spent, they craving the other's touch and proximity...aeww! Me Likes! Thanks a bunch once again! 😳

Stick around girl! Oh please, maine jhande gaad diye hain! 😉

you're still using my RaHi gifset! :O Yuuus. It's beautiful <3

Are you sure this is your 1st OS breaches I doubt it...
It has left me speechless..like literally..
I mean I can't think of a word which can describe this OS..
It was mindblowing..
I had a constant smile on my face while reading this OS...
Cabir Nandani n the rest of the Fab5's scene was superb..
Nandani and her witty answers to Manik..
Their emotions..
N in the end those line and their actual meaning...
Perfect...
Please do write more OS's<3

-Tehmina(Tehmi)

Plead accept my friend request as I would love to read more!!