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@CrazyGirl.21

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Posted: 10 years ago

I totally love those awesome replies, dude. Too good. 🤣 And you put a convo of Cabir and Nandu. Hayeee <3 This soo rocks. xD

Real great work, penned down all so nicely. Do write more. ^_^

-Ash.

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nicky13

@nicky13

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Posted: 10 years ago

LovE Their code language... Love the story :)

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Suha

@TheShipWeirdo

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Posted: 10 years ago

First of all, hiii! Welcome to the forum 🤗

And now, back to this OS! My, my. This was screaming ADORBS from all above! MaNan are dating secretly here, right? That's like my dream come true <3

Now I want more MaNan from you. Wait, no, correction- now I need more MaNan from you. The plot, the writing, the characters, the style; just... everything about this was so freaking flawless and you've satisfied my feels to such a point that I can't even anymore.

Write more on MaNan. Please.

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AyaNi.CabIni

@AyaNi.CabIni

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Posted: 10 years ago

Just wanna squeal at their cute secret conversation!!!! I just love it!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏❤️...i really wish that have something similar on the show...that would be really really really awesome.

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@-SAM1445-

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Posted: 10 years ago

hey awesome writing,but could u plzzz plzzz make it two or three shot,coz i want more...

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Sparks-galore

@Sparks-galore

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Posted: 10 years ago

Cheekiness personified these two!! ❤️ *doing my happy wala dance*

So fun, light... can absolutely visualize this happening very soon 🤣

Awesome saucome Raina ! Great piece of writing ! 👏

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Ishq-Dua

@Ishq-Dua

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Posted: 10 years ago

This is just ADORABLE!

I so hope we get this kind of scene in the show where MaNan are secretly dating and using their own code language.

beautifully written >

I can picture the scenes as I read your words.

Hats off to you 👏

Continue writing !

oh yeah welcome to the forum buddy 🤗

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angel_7

@angel_7

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Posted: 10 years ago

This was amazing and beautifully written ⭐️

I enjoyed reading every single part of it..loved the way MaNan were

trying to hide their love from everyone else..it was too lovely and sweet...the code language

between them is so adorable..I can totally imagine a scene like that between them in the future.

Please do keep writing more and keep us entertained with your beautiful writing. 😊

Edited by angel_7 - 10 years ago

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Cat.

@Cat.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Oh my God, I am late to the party but I loved it, loved the playfulness and teasing😳

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her_story

@her_story

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Posted: 10 years ago

Welcome to the forum Raina!

This one is awesome!!! I could so imagine Manik and Nandu here, them in a relationship hidden from the others... their playful, naughty banters! ❤️

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