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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pallo,
Welcome to the KY2 Forum! 🤗
The Drabble/OS is amazing! <3 It's one of the best works I've read in this forum! ⭐️
The fact that all of them are in character is delightful. And I could actually imagine the whole scenario. . so kudos to you. You've penned it down brilliantly.

She hesitatingly looked out. No cockiness, no smirk in sight. Just a plain smile. A real smile. A real devastating Manik smile.

"You're welcome, Sweetheart ," he winked.

** ~ **||** ~ **

They went on to lose the game.

But, she'd definitely lost more than just the game.

Much more.

^ Those are my favorite lines! ❤️
Waiting to read more from you. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Heyie..
I have recently started watching this show and totally In love with MANAN..
And the way yu penned the scene..I wish something like this must happen in the show...that was sooo cute <3
their chemistry is hawt and innocent at the same time..
Keep writing and keep entertain us!
And I am new here..hope to make some friends soon :)
And ya the last line " She has lost much more then a game that day." was the masterstroke! :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dewcute

first a warm welcome pallo🤗


your first gift for us was beautiful...

have no idea what will i return to you for this awesome piece of work..

i really loved this one...

this was such a heart warming work...

write more...bcoz the forum and we truly needs you...

Jiya



Hey jiya..apeksha here..
If um not wrong..Yu are the same jiya na which we have in the Vidharth DT.?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi and welcome to the forum😃 This was an amazing OS, I loved how u wrote the playfulness aspect of Manik and how Nandu was dealing with all this Looking forward to read more of ur work
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
This OS just gave me the feels! Damn! I should be studying! Noiii!! This is going to send me in to a day dreaming mode!
*sweeheart*
DIED

Anyways, the ending <3
Lost a little more than just the game! Eeeks! You are a fabulous writer darlo! Please do continue writing!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: infinity_

Pallo,

Welcome to the KY2 Forum! 🤗
The Drabble/OS is amazing! <3 It's one of the best works I've read in this forum! ⭐️
The fact that all of them are in character is delightful. And I could actually imagine the whole scenario. . so kudos to you. You've penned it down brilliantly.



Thanks sweetie. 🤗 The forum is pretty nice. The fanwars haven't started yet. *old DMG Forum flashbacks* 😆 But in all seriousness, hope it stays this way. It's nice to come and read only positive or constructively criticizing posts. A fresh change.
Glad you liked it. Hope to keep posting more.

Originally posted by: apekshajain15

Heyie..
I have recently started watching this show and totally In love with MANAN..
And the way yu penned the scene..I wish something like this must happen in the show...that was sooo cute <3
their chemistry is hawt and innocent at the same time..
Keep writing and keep entertain us!
And I am new here..hope to make some friends soon :)
And ya the last line " She has lost much more then a game that day." was the masterstroke! :*



Their chemistry is white hot. That's what makes it easy to write.
And am new here too, so I hope to make friends too. 😉

Originally posted by: Desigirl_21

Hi and welcome to the forum😃 This was an amazing OS, I loved how u wrote the playfulness aspect of Manik and how Nandu was dealing with all this Looking forward to read more of ur work



Glad you enjoyed reading this.
Thanks for the warm welcome dear. 🤗

Originally posted by: gujjupari

This OS just gave me the feels! Damn! I should be studying! Noiii!! This is going to send me in to a day dreaming mode!

*sweeheart*
DIED

Anyways, the ending <3
Lost a little more than just the game! Eeeks! You are a fabulous writer darlo! Please do continue writing!



😆😆 My good deed of the day. Killing someone with THE FEELS.
Glad you enjoyed it. I will definitely be writing more. 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
it was so cute
Manan are awesomeness..Manik helping Nandini eeks☺️
welcome to the forum😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was awesome Pallo.

hope you write more.

My Manik smiling...helping...sweetheart...loved it totally. <3

----Zoha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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These posts of Manan are killing me! I have all these major assignments due and all I can think of doing is reading this and fan girl 😵
i want a Manik Malhotra!!😭
Really love what you've done here 😃
urrrgh! their relationship here is so damn cute
pinching his cheek and forming heart with his fingers 🤣 gosh he's so adorable!
'you're welcome sweetheart' in a deep, husky voice + a wink = heaven!! ☺️
awesome stuff! and i hope to read more of your work 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved reading this drabble! Fabulous piece of writing!

Looking forward to reading more...

Edited by Skylar - 10 years ago

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