MaNan OS~ Cravings and Secret Temptations

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

This was amazing 👏
Poor manik 😆 😛
He was thinking about something and nandu s naughty 😆
Loved t 😳
Keep writing more 😊
If possible write a sequel to this 😉
Manik taking revenge for this 😊
Well written 👏

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Suha

@TheShipWeirdo

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Woahh, that was awesome! Ugh, your writing style is absolutely fabulous. I really enjoyed this! I can totally imagine Manik acting like that. Poor guy, he got turned down, again.

You should write more on MaNan! Pleaseee? I love your writing, it'll be great to read more of such one-shots. I'll look forward to what you write next <3

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Amazing at first ime was like maanim how the role reversal took place but at last... Its amazing how absistence took place lolzzz ice cream...

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

that was one of the hilarious works,i ever came across😆

it was beautiful and lovely😊

amazing work pari👏

i enjoyed every bit of it😊

jiya😛

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Bushra Iqbal

@Sanely_Insane

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: gujjupari

Naaaw! You cutie Bushra!
To be honest, I write best when I write angst😆 (I am weirdly weird😆)

I actually read a line om attraction on FB and was like "hm, this is so MaNan right now"😆
Thank You SO much Bushra! You are a total sweetheart for wanting more tortures from me🤪

Thank You darlo :*

Eeks. I'm cute, thanks. 😳😆

I love reading angst. You better write angst on MaNan, coz your writing style is beautiful. <3
Its frustrating to see him not getting a kiss, even in the OS's. He's gonna die if Nandu does this in the future.😆

Nah, cut yourself some slack. This OS is not a torture, its a relief from the MaNan-less weekend torture. 😳

No problem bae. :*

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Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: zohasad2.0
it was amazing dear <3

Firstly they are in a relationship...eeeks...I don't know why this part excites me so much. They will actually be in a relation some time later and it already excites me...I so want them to have all these cute little moments together.

Amazing...do write more.

-----Zoha

btw what is ur name, I heard it is pari?

I think MaNan in a relationship just excites and activates the fan girl in all of us! They have a lot of potential and would such a dynamic duo😳

I surely will write more Zoha! Beautiful name by the way! Thank You SO much for appreciating and offering such sweet words! Thank You!

And yes yes! My name is Pari😃... T'was nice meeting you Zoha!

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Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: .ishqbulava.
Eeeks ! MaNan in a realtionship and Nandu being a tease
And here i thought she'll just let him do it but this girl 😒 My poor Manik when will she let him kiss her ?
You write soo well dear..absolutely loved reading it ! Do write more <33

Can I just say I louu your username

Manik is seriously so sexually frustrated, how I wish I could see this happening in the show! I would actually roll on the floor😆

Thank You SO much Greshu (I hope that's your name😆) for your amazing and sweets words!😳

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Kaay

@-.serendipity.-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Pari, that was one of the best OS's I've ever read.

Your writing style is beautiful!

Please do write more!

Love,

Kiret x

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Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Desigirl_21
This was really amazing😃.. my mind like Manik thought something else too but alas all Nandu wanted was icecream 😆
I loved the way she was teasing him, do write more on MaNan

Thank You SO much Uditi!

I just wanted to confuse everyone, so they understood what Manik was thinking at the time😎

I surely will as I find time!

Thank You again :*

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Zoha Sadaqat

@zohasad2.0

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: gujjupari

I think MaNan in a relationship just excites and activates the fan girl in all of us! They have a lot of potential and would such a dynamic duo😳

I surely will write more Zoha! Beautiful name by the way! Thank You SO much for appreciating and offering such sweet words! Thank You!

And yes yes! My name is Pari😃... T'was nice meeting you Zoha!

true...these two have that sparkling chemistry that we all even imagining them as a couple leads to butterflies in our stomachs.😆😳

Thanks, yaar.

Nice name.😃 Same here, nice meeting you.