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Liana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: ArishaDeepz
amazing start...continue soon:)

thank you soo much dear🤗

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Liana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: aishu3003
res for nw

you need to res again.. as I'm gonna updating 2 new chapters today..😛😆

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Liana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Hi guys,

I will update today... Not 1 chapter.. I will update 2 new chapters today.. :DDD

Stay tuned! ;)

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aishwarya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

i said i'll comment above d update so here i'm🤣🤣

i'll post d comment for one chappy here and d nxt n my other resd comment🤣

m crazy know😆😛

u shld bear wit me u don have any choicewa😎

now coming to d updatee😊

very short😡😆

but was amazinggly written👏

nandini feeling for manik😊

interestingg😉

*runs to read d nxt part*😛

Edited by aishu3003 - 10 years ago

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Liana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Z a r o o r a t

** .T.e.e.n.a.g.e.r. .L.o.v.e. **

Chapter 2 : In the party! <3

Nandini's POV

When we were at the party, Navya said that we have to change. As I came to Mumbai to visit Navya, I had some clothes to wear.

Nandini : Navya, how do I look now?
Navya : Nandini, what happened with u? You never worried about your clothes. And yes, you are looking gergous.
Nandini : I am fine and I too don't know what happened with me.
Navya : In love ?
Nandini : No, never!!

We went downstairs to the boys. Some people were around them , I think it's their friends.

A girl was sitting near to Dhruv and they were holding hands, I think it was his girlfriend.

Manik came near to me, Navya went to meet Dhruv's girlfriend.

No one's POV

Nandini was wearing a blue saree (like Deepika Padukone in Yeh Jaawani Hai Deewani) she was looking very beautiful. Everybody were only looking at Nandini and she got a little nervous and shy. Manik was wearing a black suit. He was looking soo handsome in them, that Nandini couldn't look at someone else than Manik.

Manik : You are looking beautiful!
Nandini : (she was nervous and couldn't only say) ehmm.. thanks

She smiled but then Navya suddenly holds her arm and brings her to a girl.

Navya : This is Aliya, Dhruv's girlfriend.
Nandini : Hi, nice to meet you.
Aliya : Hey

She looked strange at Nandini and went to Dhruv.

Navya : she is bii...
Nandini : eehhmm.. Navya ?? You don't know her.
Navya : you are right.

Nandini's POV

Navya went to flirt with some boys as usual and I was sitting alone.

Manik : why so alone?
Nandini : I dunno, I am not a party girl.
Manik : Me too, Dhruv did do the party for me.
Nandini : It's your 20th birthday, so party is a must!
Manik : yeah.. you are right.

He comes near to me.

Manik : Thank you.
Nandini : for what?
Manik : You made my birthday th best birthday ever.

I smiled.
It was too late and Navya and I had to go and Navya was drunk.

But then Manik said that we could sleep upstairs in a room. We didn't have any other choice to sleep there. I couldn't sleep and was always thinking about Manik.
What happened with me ?

Is this love?

For Next part check next post ! =]

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Liana

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Z a r o o r a t

** .T.e.e.n.a.g.e.r. .L.o.v.e. **

Chapter 3 : Manik and Nandini sitting on a couch .K.I.S.S.I.N.G.! <3🤣

Nandini's POV

In the morning, I woke up very early. When I went downstairs, I saw Manik putting down all the decorations from yesterday.

Nandini : Hey

Manik : Already woke up so early ?

Nandini : ehm.. actually I couldn't sleep.

Manik : why?

Nandini : Dunno, forget it.

Manik : I too couldn't sleep .

Nandini : Why?

Manik : I think I am in love with someone.

Nandini : Can I help you by putting down all these decorations?

Manik : If you want to.

Nandini : Ok. I will take off all the ballons .

Manik : Ok. But please be careful.!

Nandini : Don't worry.

I am standing over a chair and want to put down all the ballons but suddenly I couldn't stand and was about to fall , I closed my eyes and shout. But I didn't fall down. Someone catched me.

Manik : Nandu.. Now you can open your eyes.

I opened my eyes and saw Manik looking at me. He catched me from falling and I am on his arms. I smiled at him . When I saw him I couldn't say anything, we both are quiet and we just look at each other. I was like enchanted. He brings me on a couch and sits near to me. Suddenly he starts shouting.

Manik : I said that u should be careful!! Agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh ??!!

Nandini : Now I am fine na, thank you!

Manik comes near to me, I am leaning on the couch and he still comes closer that I could feel his breath. I closed my eyes and was busy listening to his breaths. Then suddenly I felt his lips in mine. I opened my eyes and saw him soo close to me. He has his eyes closed...

Manik : Maine kaha na, I am in love. I love you Nandini!

I was surprised and couldn't say anything for sometime then

Nandini : I love you too.

I hugged him while I said the 3 magical words. I was like in heaven.

He gets up and goes after a while he comes again and sits near to me.

Manik : Do you want to be my girlfriend?

He brought roses for me.

I was soo happy.

Nandini : Ha.

He kisses me but then Navya and Dhruv came in . They saw us kissing and they looked shocked and surprised to us.

Next part coming soon ! =]

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