DHRUNI OS: AM THERE WITH YOU

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AM THERE WITH U:)
Nandini was sitting in her room with rishab, duo were chit-chatting on some matter,suddenly nandu's phone rings.
nandu: rishab, wait a sec. its dhruv's mom.
dhruv's mom(dm): hello nandu beta, how r u?
nandu:aunty am fine,hw r u? how's dhruv?is there any prob?
dm:am fine n ya even ur dhruv is fine. bt there is one prob?
nandu: wat prob aunty?
dm: dhruv is not ready to meet doctor suggested by ur chachi. i explained him how important it is n even manik explained him bt he is not ready listen. he is not even ready to listen his best buddy. so his gf is the only way now. u know dhruv's treatment is compulsory otherwise we will lose him.he has only got 6months time.
nandu:(tears rolled from her eyes)er..er aunty u dont worry. i will talk to him. he will agree. nandu in her mind(he should agree). bye aunty.
dm: bye beta.

NANDU'S HOUSE
Nandu was lying down on sofa,her chachi comes
chachi: oye, tuje kya hua? itni chup kyon hein?
nandu: chachi(she starts crying)
chachi: aare batana kya hua? tu roo kyon rahi hein? chal, mera accha baccha roo mat. bata kya hua? dhruv se jhagada hua?
nandu: chachi dhruv ne na doc se milne se mana kiya hein. chachi mein kya karu? ye ladka na kabhi bhi baat manta hi nahi hein.
chachi: bt uske liye woh treatment bohaut zaruri hein. warna woh thik kaise hoga? rishab ko dekh. he is fine now.completely normal.
nandu:haan chachi. lekin dhruv na kabhi meri ek jhatke mein manata hi nahi hein. kabhi kabhi toh mujhe lagta hein, mein uski gf nahi mamma hoon,jo hamesha uski peeche dhande leke bhagti hoon. usne manik ki baat bhi nahi maani.
chachi: tu thoda sa saas le. dekh use na pyaar se samjha. samaj jayaega. bada pyaara baccha hein woh.
nandu: use samaj na hi hoga.ok mein dhruv ke ghar chalti hoon.bye
chachi:bye. samja use.
DHRUV'S HOME
Bell rings n its nandini.
dm opens the door
dm: welcome beta.
nandu: hi aunty.
dm: aao baitho.
nandu: kaha hein.
dm: apne kamre mein. gusse se baitha hein.
nandu: u dont worry i will speak to him.
dm:(smiles) he is lucky to ve u.
nandu: am lucky to have him.
DHRUV'S ROOM
Nandu enters his room. his room is fully messed up. dhruv is standing near window n thinking something very deeply.
nandu: kisine sahi kaha hein,ladke ke room na bohaut gandha rehta hein.
dhruv: nandu, tum kab aayi?
nandu:jab tum ye,window se kisi ladki ko stare kar rahe the na tab.
dhruv: shutup nandu.
dhruv comes to her n hugs tightly. nandu's one hand on his wrist n another on his head.
nandu: kya hua dhruv?
dhruv:nothing.
nandu:u wont tell me?
dhruv:i love you.
nandu:i love you too. abhi batao kay hua.
dhruv:nandu am fed up.
they break their hug. nandu keeps her hand on his shoulder.
nandu: fed upp? of what?
dhruv: treatments. always meeting a new doc. its really irritating. is it necessary to meet?
nandu: dhruv( tears rolled from her eyes) its necessary. why dont u get it? i dont want to loose u.
dhruv: what if, this time also its same case. this time also no improvement.why dont u accept the fact? i cant be normal. why dont u accept the fact that...i ve only few days left.
nandu: dhruv pls dnt u ever say like that. i will never lose hope n if u go no...u ve to take me also.
dhruv( keeps his hand on her mouth) sshh u ve long way to go. dont say that.
nandu: i ve long way to go with u.
dhruv:(smiles) are u ashamed of me?
nandu: dhruv,how could u even think am aashamed of u? u are only thinking of urself. u r fed up. bt have u ever thought abt aunty? wat is she gonna do without? have u ever thought abt manik? how he is going to lead his life without you? have u ever thought abt fab 5? have u ever thought abt me? how am i gonna live without my life line( tears rolled from her eyes) dhruv i will die. i bet u i will die.
dhruv: nandu pls. stop using the word die always. i love you n i dont want to see u suffer all ur life bcoz of me. dats it.
nandu: even i love you!!! i dont want to lose you. you are world to me. why dont you understand dhruv?
dhruv: ok fine. last time only for ur sake.
nandu:(she's the happiest person now). i love dhruv❤️
dhruv: i love you more❤️.
dhruv kisses her cheeks n they hug each other😊.
DINNING HALL
dm n manik sitting n worrying. then they just watches dhruni coming.
dm: maangaya
dhruv:haan maa. am ready for treatment.
manik: saale, dost se zyaada gf ki important hogayi.
dhruv: aisa kuch nahi hein.
manik:tu maan gaya, yahi bohaut badi baat hein.
dhruv: manta kaisa nahin. head office se joh order mila.
manik n dhruv will laugh.
nandu: stop making fun of me both of you.
dm: yes,stop making fun of her.
manik:chal buddy sham ko milte hein. doc ke yahan
dhruv:ok.
manik leaves.
nandu: even i will leave. bye.luv you.
dhruv: luv u too.
they hug eachother.
nandu: dhruv leave i ve to go
dhruv: naah,i wont.
nundu: *blushes* dhruv leave me i ve to go.
dhruv:ok,bt one condition.
they break a hug.
nandu:wat condition (*blushes*)(bcoz she knew his condition)
dhruv:(smiles,keeps his both hands on her face) dont u know my condition?
nandu:*blushes* *crimson red*
dhruv comes closer n they kiss each other passionately❤️
TO BE CONTINUED...
P.S- IF ANY MISTAKE,PLS CO-OPERATE. CRITISIMS ARE WELCOME. SO PLS GIVE YOUR FEEDBACK DAT HELPS ME TO WRITE MORE.

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IlaTanwar thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its cute u have scared me by writing 6 months hope dhruv gets well
ArshiR thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww this is adorable i wonder y u talked rubbish earlier ?!!
u have all those cute elements yeah the wordings are simpler but this is awesome yaar u need to write more
ANd Beyondwords was rights u hav...wat was the hindi wrd she used plz gather it
i forgot the word 😛 do write more plz

heh got the words ur ideas are Hatke 😉
Edited by ArshiR - 10 years ago
Arieltabi thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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U scared me girl with 6 months. My cutiepie 😭 .
It was really sweet. I love it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is wonderful yaar 👍🏼
truly awesome
nd plz pm me when u update it
Loved it seriously 😳
Ohhh bichara Manik nd Nandu-head office😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhruvika1991

Its cute u have scared me by writing 6 months hope dhruv gets well

thanku😊. bt u will ve towait for the story. u will get to know.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArshiR

Awww this is adorable i wonder y u talked rubbish earlier ?!!

u have all those cute elements yeah the wordings are simpler but this is awesome yaar u need to write more
ANd Beyondwords was rights u hav...wat was the hindi wrd she used plz gather it
i forgot the word 😛 do write more plz

heh got the words ur ideas are Hatke 😉

thanku😊. sure i will write some more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arieltabi

U scared me girl with 6 months. My cutiepie 😭 .
It was really sweet. I love it.

thanku😊. wait for the story to unfold.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: malavikajoshy

this is wonderful yaar 👍🏼
truly awesome
nd plz pm me when u update it
Loved it seriously 😳
Ohhh bichara Manik nd Nandu-head office😆

thanku😊. sure i will pm u.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing os
Was scared for a minutes when you said only 6 months..
Hope Dhruv will get well soon...
Please pm me when you update it..
Keep writing

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