Unknown Feelings and Undefined Connections - a MaNan OS

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"Who was it?" she pondered for the hundredth time, as she sat in front of the jar of fireflies, seeing them light up and then off again.

"Who was the person who saved the jar of fireflies from falling?" she thought again as her mind drove in answerless circles.

But she knew one thing for sure. She had felt an instant connection with whoever he was. There was a spark at the brief moment their hands slightly brushed against each other. But who was it? This was the question that she couldn't answer.

She turned around to go to her brother, when she spotted her pen, the pen which her dad had gifted her. Her mind unconsciously, drifted back to the nasty incident where the Fab5 had almost destroyed it.

"They are so sick! Kitna mean hai voh log. Especially that stupid Manik!" she thought, as she lovingly held the pen in her hand.

As soon as she uttered the word Manik, the fireflies seemed to light up, unnoticed by Nandini. That was when Nandini remembered that it was one of the Fab5 who had saved fireflies, because she distinctly remembered the sign on the back of their t-shirts that day, matched with the stickers they had used while ragging them.

"Fab5! No ways! They can't be so human enough to save my fireflies!" she exclaimed, as she recalled the incident where that unknown person saved her fireflies.

Suddenly, her thoughts fell on Dhruv. Dhruv had always taken her side. He had always helped her out, even though he had to go against his friends.

"Kya voh Dhruv tha?" she asked herself. Though she was quite sure that it was Dhruv, something seemed missing. The feeling which she felt when she thought of Dhruv was happiness. But, it was not just happiness she felt when she thought of that "Mr. Unknown" as she called him. She thought of that incident again, trying to relive the incident, or at least try to recall the incident.

Suddenly, she was gripped with confusion and agony as she thought of the next possibility. Surely, it was not Cabir. He had nothing to do with guitars, as she clearly remembered the guitar which he carried in his back. If it were not Dhruv and not Cabir, it had to be... Manik!!!!

"What? Manik?!!! No ways. Nandini, tu pagal hai. Tu aise soch bhi bhi kaise sakti hai?" she told herself as she frantically tried to push that thought out of her mind.

The more she tried pushing that thought out of her head, the more that thought evaded her mind. It was not because Manik might have saved the fireflies, but it was because of that connection or an unknown feeling she felt that time.

"No Nandini! You don't get that same feeling around Manik." she said, as she tried convincing herself.

She knew that Manik did affect her. Some corner of her heart wanted to see through that tough nut Manik had formed around himself. She wanted to see beyond that arrogant, spoilt-brat Manik because she knew that there was more to him and it was her right to see through it.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Writer's Note

Hola people! I'm sure most of you would know me. And for those who don't, I'm Niru, a die-hard fan of Manik/Parth and MaNan. This is my first try on MaNan. Infact, this my first try in the KY2 forum. I know that it was not up to your expectations. If I have disappointed anyone, I'm sorry.

As far as I've seen, most of the OS on MaNan revolve around Manik's point of view. I wanted this to be different. That's why I wrote his from, Nandini's point of view. Do read and give your honest comments.

Love... Niru

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Posted: 11 years ago
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niru first of all ur first attempt of writing is beyond awesome i loveddd it i m also a diehard Parth aka manik and Manan fan so sweetheart keep writing such awesome OS 😊
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This is amazing! I loved it! It was an interesting idea!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing post dear! Hats off! 👍🏼
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Hey Niru 👏 you r a ⭐️ dear ... Beautiful ... Nandini realised her feelings about Manik ... Wow you wrote it very well ... When she was thinking ke Kya wo Dhruv tha she was not felt the same ... Hey r u going to continue it or just an OS dear ... Plz-2 update it na ... Mujhe aage Bhi chahiye ... You know ye dil maange more ... So plzzz dear continue it sweety 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome one :)
Hope you will write more about Manan <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajkumarioni

niru first of all ur first attempt of writing is beyond awesome i loveddd it i m also a diehard Parth aka manik and Manan fan so sweetheart keep writing such awesome OS 😊



thank you so much!
will surely write more😃
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Originally posted by: -MyMy-

This is amazing! I loved it! It was an interesting idea!



thank u very much
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: N_Niya

Amazing post dear! Hats off! 👍🏼



thank u so much fr ur precious comment😊

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