Kripa n Prithvi Kidnapped Fan_Fic

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Posted: 20 years ago
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It's my first time to write this so plz b a little suportive.👏

Kripa goes to Joshs' house.-Josh...! Josh! Angad.....!? Prithvi, yaha to koi nahin hai. Ek kam karo, Josh ko phone karo. (Phone rings) Are, Josh ka phone to ya ha hai. To Angad ko phone karo. Nobody Pickes up. I hope he's alright. Somebody calls Kripa in Angad's voice but it' s not Angad.

K: Hello!

Caller:Kripa mujhe bahao! Mein usse factory mein hoon jo tum thi. KRIPA...............!?

K: Angad.....?! Hello....? Angad?

Prithvi: Kyun Tha?

K: Angad!

P: Kya? Le kin kaise? Uske phone par to koi nahin utarahai. Phir se usse number pe phone karo.

K: Okay! Hello!

C: Hello! Oh, Kripa-ji, agar tu Angad or Josh ko pirse dekna chate ho to ya ha aa kar bacha.

K: Kyun bol raha hai?

C: Kidnapper! (forgot the name) (he hung up)

Hello! Kyun tha? Kidnapper. Uske paas Angad or Josh hai. Kaha hai? Usse factory jisse mujhe kidnap hua tha.

They went to the factory. Then somebody played the tape that Kripa recorded for Angad. But they didn't noe it was a trap. And they also didn't noe Angad heard everything when Kripa was talking to Prithvi. So he went to the factory too. So he heard the tape too. He was trying to reach up to Kripa and Prithvi but somebody already tied them up.

K: Bacho............?!- Will Angad b able to do anything b4 something real bad happens?

So... do yall like it? If you do I'll wirte the rest. If you don't I'll stop. So how was it tell me!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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I got a bit confused... But it was good 😛

Please PM loonytunes and give her the link to this fanfic so that she can add it to her list.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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yea it was cool it was funny.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was great, plz continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Okay.
So they took Prithvi and tied him up. They took Kripa to a place wit lights and music. But soft music. Angad was still lookin' fo them. He found Prithvi.

P: Angad, tum ya ha kya kar raha ho?
A: Woh tumhe baad me boloonga. Phele, Kripa ko dhundo!
P: Tum waha jao, mein idar dekta ho.

Angad followed da music. He saw da lights n quietly entered da room. He saw the kidnapper tryna touch Kripa. So he had to say it.

A: Hey! Don't u dare touch her!
Kidnapper: Kyun! Yeh tere koun hai? Girlfriend, Mangnetar(fiance), ya Biwi? Tu kya uske boyfriend? Nahin, boyfriend to nahin, liken tu ek wannabe-boyfriend.

A:(looking at Kripa)- Koi nahin woh.....
KN: Koi nahin to usse bacha na kyun chata hai? Pyar kata ho usse? Pyar karo ya na karo, mujhe kya. Mein to sirf mera kam kar raho.
A: Usse haat lagaya to acha nahin hoga!
KN: Kya karlega? Kuch nahin kar sakta tu.

So he was touchin Kripa's face and Angad ran and pushed him. They started a fight. Then KN(Kidnapper) took out a gun and took Kripa.

KN: Koun marna chata hai phele? Kripa ya tu? Bol na, mera paas zayda waqt nahin hai.
A: Teek hai, Kripa ko chordo.
KN: Ok! Tum kaho to chor du. Yeh Lo Cho diya.

Kripa ran to Angad. Then KN was pointing the gun at Kripa, but accidently it hit Angad. Angad fell on the ground. Blood dat wouldn't stop. Prithvi came running hearing the gun shot. Then they took hin to da hospital. -Will Angad be able to survive? 😭


I'll have to write later.


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