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Posted: 20 years ago
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If I was Kripa, this is what I would be feeling right now:

Kyun kiya tumne aisa? Itna pyar karte ho mujhse ke mujhe meri hi nazron mein gira diya. Tumne to wo saza payi hai jiski khata tumne kabhi ki hi nahi. Aur main? Main to gunah ke samandar mein itni door ja chuki hoon ke khud ko bahar aane ke kabil hi nahi samajhti. Kash us din jab maine hamare pyar ki nishani khoi thi. Kash us din main tum par yakeen kar leti Angad. Apni bikhri hui zindagi ki zimmedar main khud hoon. Par main tumhen ab aur dukh nahi de sakti. Aur tarapte hue nahi dekh sakti hoon tumhen. Meri zindagi ka sabse acha din wo tha jab tumne mujhe apnaya tha lekin ab us se bara din wo hoga jab tum mujhe maaf kardoge aur main tumhari bahon mein sar rakh kar zindagi ke sare gam bhula doongi. Ho sake to mujhe maaf kar do Angad (That's all she can say now😆). Please mujhe maaf kar do.

Tumhari zindagi,

Kripa

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Posted: 20 years ago
#2
If I were Kripa, I would slap myself. 😡
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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was so nice jaan. Hope Kripa says something like this and runs into Angad's arms.
Okay wait up, let me try now. 😛
Edited by happe - 20 years ago
Selina thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Wow, kya dialouges hain!! 👏 😆 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was awsome fari jaano! now send this to ekta so she can rite it in her script.....
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Okay I wrote this while back. I even posted it along with a small part of wat I want to see. I don't want to write it again. 😆



je maine kya kardia

Uski ankhon main aanson laa deay

Uski ankhon main, jise main jee jaan se bhi jaada pyaar kia tha

Mainse usse thukradia

Kaise samaj liye maine ke wo mujhse pyaar nahin karta

Kyon main uski sachai samaj na saki

Kitni koshish ki thi us ne

Kitni baar usne mujhse baat karne ki koshish ki thi

Kyon maine uski baton par yakeen nahin kia

Kash wo aaj mere samne hota

Toh main usse bata sakti kai main usse kitna pyaar karti hoon 😳

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: Evee

if i was kripa... i would kidnap angad and marry him!!



aap ka idea bhara hatke hai. 😉 par aap ko sharam nahin aati apne jeeju par hamla karte hue. apni happe ke baare mein bhi soch liya karo, har koi uske pati ke peeche pari hai.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: Evee

lol that is if i was kripa... but i am evee sup i am after IQ! anyways Happe lovely lovely lovely words!!!! man u guys are sooooo good at writing! main kabhi propose karoon gi to i would be like "haata sawan ki ghaata....chal Doli uthaa😳" lol



je sun ke woh wahan se baag jayega aur kisi aur ki gali jayega aur uski doli uthaye ga. 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
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If I were Kripa, I wouln't have left Angad at all..
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Posted: 20 years ago
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dil jalta hai toh jalne de
hum pyaar se
o hum pyaar se
hum pyaar ke
gale lage hi rahein

dil jalta hai toh jalne de
hum yaar ke
o hum yaar ke
rahe bhi na rahein

dil jalta hai toh jalne de
uski ankhon mein
o uski ankhon mein
pyaar ki ghehrayion mein
hum doobte chale hi gaye
hum doobte chale hi gaye

dil jalta hai toh jalne de

sorry its not good but I just wrote it in 3 minutes. It suppose to be like a ghazal, very slow.
Edited by happe - 20 years ago

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