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IN The Engagement night Kripa doesn't want to get engaged to a villian( prithvi ).

Kripa: Oh God kaise bhi yahan se bhagna padega mujhe nahi karni prithvi se sagai mujhe jal se jal angad ki paas pohochna padega.

Kripa: maine prithvi ko kya samjha tha aur woh kya nekla ek villian jo hum sab ke liye khatarnak hain.

Angad: Kripa!? tum yaha ? tumhare tu aaj engagement hain na prithvi ki saath?

Kripa: konsa engagement angad? agar mujhe sahi waqt par sab kuch pata nahin chal jata tu engagement ki naam par mere saath bhut bada dhoka hota.

Angad: dhoka? kaisa dhoka kripa? tum kya keh rahee hoon mere kuch samaj main nahin araha.

Kripa: Ha Angad prithvi ne mujhe dhoka deya hain use pata tha ki tumne mere liye sacrifice de leking usne mujhe kabhi nahin bataya aur tu aur party main prithvi ne he mujhe marne ki koshish ki thi kyunki tab main shaadi ke liye razi nahin thi woh mujhe pane ke liye kya se kya bangaya.

Angad: kripa tu tumhe sab kuch pata chal gaya mere bare mein.

Kripa: I"m sorry angad maine tumhe bohut qhalat samjha ( while angad shaking his head to say no) lekin sach tu yeh hain ke tum aaj bhi mere dil mein ho main tu tumhe kabhi bhool hi nahi payee . lekin bas ab hume koi juda nahin karsakta.

Angad : main bata nahin sakta main kitna khush hoon kripa aaj mujhe sab kuch milgaya I'm complete now kripa I"m complete.

Angad: lekin prithvi ki zindagi main ab ki bad koi khushi nahin bachega main use chodonga nahin usne tumpar hamla karwaya is ki saza tu use bhogatne he hogi.

Prithvi: OH tu kripa party se bhag kar yahan is angad ke paas ayee hain ise tu ek sabaq sekhana he padega.

(Angad goes to take his mobile from his car when kripa...........)

Kripa: Ahhhhhhhhh mujhe saans kyun nahin araha aur yeh gas . ANGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD ! (hohu hohu hohu)

Prithvi: kyun kripa ab maza araha hain jo dard maine sahe hain woh tumhe bhi sehna padega.

Angad: kripa? kripa ko kya huwa?

Angad: don't worry kripa main aagaya hoon na.

Angad: tum theek tu ho na kripa? kripa uthoo

Kripa: haan angad main theek ho lekin yeh gas??? yeh sab kiska kaam hosakta hain?

Prithvi: Mera . (angad kripa shocked and looking at prithvi with hateful eyes) ab jab tumhe sab kuch pata chal he gaya hain tu yeh bhi sunlo ke main aaj jo bhi hoon uske wajah tum ho kripa tum yaad hain jab tumne mujhse engagement karne se inkaar kiya tha use waqt se maine yeh promise kiya apne aap se ke ek din tum khud mujhse engagement karne keliye kahoge aur aisa bhi hua lekin angad ne phir mere mamle main taang ladayee tu maine sucha ke kyun na en sab ke jar ko he khatam karde kyun na main tumhe he khatam kardo kripa.

Angad: kya? jab tumne kripa ko hasel nahi kar sake tu use marna chaha? tumne aisa soch bhi kaise liya ke angad ke hote huwi kripa ko tum chot pohchawoge ab main tumhe nahin chodonga prithvi bose .

Kripa: aur ek baat aur sonlo prithvi main angad ke thi angad ke hoon aur angad ke rahonge tum lakh koshish karo main tumhari kabhi nahin ho sakte main aur angad ab kabhi juda nahin honge samjhay tum.

Prithvi: theek hain kripa agar main tumhe hasel nahin kar sakta tu tum kisi aur ki bhi nahin ho sakte ( prithvi takes out a knife to kill kripa that suddenly..................... mishti stops him)

Mishti ( in a loud and scared voice) : bhai! yeh kya kar rahe ho bhai pagal hogaye ho kya tum kripa ka katel karna chahte hoon?

Prithvi: chodo mujhe mishti en dono ne mujhe bohut hurt kiya hain enhe main chain se rehne nahi donga aaj tak en dono ko door karne ke liye itna sab kuch kiya ab enhe kaisa jane do.

Mishti: nahin bhai nahin aap qhalat hoon aap ko kya lagta hain yeh sab karke aap apne dil ka aag bhoja denge nahin bhai balka is se apka dard aur bhi badega jeene dejye enhe chain se aapne tu hamesha sach ka samna kiya hain tu is sach ka samna bhi karlo ki kripa aur angad ek dosri ke liye bane hain inhe juda karne ki bhool mat karna bhai please .

Prithvi: (crying) leaves the knife and crys ) tu main kya karo mishti maine apne zindagi main sab se zyada kripa ko chaha aur main uske bina jee nahin paya iseliye mai ek nayak se khalnayak ban gaya lekin tumne mujhe apne qhalatee ka ehsaas dela de thanks behna aur Angad agar hosake tu mujhe maaf karna aur please kripa ko hamesha ek bodygaurd ki tarha uska khyal rakhna tum dono hamesha khosh raho aur hosake tu mujhe maaf bhi karo chalta hoon.

( after a few days bose family go to united states with their new bahu guess who don't worry she'snot kripa she is harshini prithvi's pyaari pyaari wife and mishti finds out a husband for herself in US called karan)

With Harshini and Karan.

( again angad's popularity goes high and higher along with kripa and they get married naina aunty is happy to find a bahu like kripa and even karthik is a good man now and our beloved angad and kripa have small small cute cute shweet shweet babies after marriage one baby boy handsome like angad and one baby girl beautiful and innocent like kripa and they live happily ever after)

TOGETHER &nbs p; FOREVER

HAPPY ENDING

THE

END

Let me know guys if you like it.😊

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WO0o0o0o0o0o0oOow!!! 2Go0d saba...
G0000d Job yaar! 👏 👏
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
i love the fairy tale ending. very sweet 👏 good job
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Posted: 20 years ago
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It was awseeem ya.kaash agar aisa hi hota......to kitna accha hota
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Luv it, this is so cute...gosh u are really talented.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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awww....saba thanx that made us feel so much better! 😃...lovley happy ending!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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thanks guys just wanted to see smile on your faces and komal dear it's just a serial in reality your name will be written with amit 😉

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