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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part 22
"What are you looking at??" asked Harshni. Whew. I let out a sigh of relief. "They're here," I whispered to her. "Who??" she asked, looking over my shoulder. "SechsKies." "Oh. So you want to go serve them??" I shook my head 'no" quickly. Harshni laughed. "Okay. Don't get so worked up, Kripa. I'll do it." She took a waitress pad and headed over to their table. I remained in the corner watching them.

"Hi, my name is Harshni and I'll be your waitress today. May I take your order?? All the SechsKies members looked up to the pretty, young girl who just approached them. Instantly Prithivi made the 2 girls on his lap move. He looked up at Harshni, giving her his best smile. "I don't know what I want for dinner, but you want to be my dessert??" The other 5 Kies members laughed while Harshni rolled her eyes. "That's so cute. Must have took you all day to think up that one huh??" "Ooh," shouted Josh. "This one has a mouth." Prithivi just smiled.

"Feisty. I like it." Then he pinched Harshni's side playfully. She moved away, glaring. "Hey don't touch me!" "Come on babe. Go out with me. I'll show you a good time." "Hell no!" Harshni shouted back in his face. Then Angad stood up. "Don't talk to my friend like that," he said in a low threatening voice. "Or else I'll have you fired." Angad's glare made Harshni move back a little bit but she answered back anyways.

"You can't fire me! I quit!" She handed Josh her apron and pad and stomped over to me in the dark corner. "Stupid, lousy jerks, she whispered to me. "I know," I whispered back, patting her shoulder. Suddenly, I caught Angad staring at me. I didn't know what to say or do so I just left.

See ya guyz after 2 dayz. bye
Edited by su_x3 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#52
That was great, awesome...plz continue soon...
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Posted: 20 years ago
#53
Ya....pls continue. I cant wait.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#54
that was awesome, awwwwwww poor kripa always misunderstanding angu 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 20 years ago
#55

You guyz are soo sweet.. so i'm posting.. even when i'm in vacation.. Anyway NEW TWIST TO THE STORY.. HEHEHE
Part 23

Angad stared at the girl who was talking to Harshni. 'She looks like Kripa, he thought. 'But can't be." "Dude, said Prithivi. "Why are you looking at??" "Her," said Angad, pointing in Harshni's and Kripa's direction. "You like my waitress too??" asked Prithivi, pouting.

"No," said Angad, shaking his head. "Her friend. Doesn't she look like Kripa?? Prithivi glanced at the person Angad was pointing to and watched her walk away. "No..." said Prithivi slowly. "That girl's hair is much longer and Kripa has a nicer body. That chick looks like a stick."

Angad *bleep*ed an eyebrow at Prithivi. "How do you know Kripa has a nice body?? Prithivi's eyes widened. "I dunno....just guessing. Josh's calling me. I'll go see what he wants," Prithivi said quickly and ran over to Josh right away. Angad began to chase the girl who just left. I heard some footsteps following behind me. I quickly turned a corner and entered my room.

Angad ran after her as fast as he could. He saw the girl turn a corner and he continued chasing her. He saw a figure up ahead and he grabbed her by the shoulder. When the girl turned around, she had a surprised expression on her face. "What do you want??" Angad looked at the strange girl. She looked nothing like Kripa. "Wrong person." The girl walked way. Angad sighed. 'Maybe it's cause I miss Kripa so much that I'm beginning to see her." He began to walk back to the lobby, disappointedly.

From my hotel room, I was watching Angad with the little hole in the door. I saw him pat a girl and then walk away with him head bowed down. I went over and sat down on my bed. I let out a sigh. Angad doesn't miss me. He has too many girls with him already. He probably forgot who I am by now. Tears fell down my face and I didn't even realize it. I quickly wiped them away. I wanted to tell myself that I hate Angad but I couldn't because then I'd just be lying. There was only one thing left for me to do. I stood in front of my bathroom mirror.

I can't be with Angad as Kripa, but I wanted to be by his side to watch over him. I thought about it for a while and remembered they were recruiting new members for Black Kies. I looked at myself. Hmm…if my hair is short and put into a cap, I wear sunglasses more, darken my skin with make-up, and lower my voice…I can pass for a guy. So I did it. Within an hour, I had transformed myself into a guy.

I checked myself over. As a guy, I didn't look too bad. I smoothed out my new short hair and tucked it into a cap. Guys wear earrings too so I didn't have to worry about my earring holes. I wore a couple of T-shirts under my flannel and 2 pairs of boxers under my baggy jeans so I would fill out more and wouldn't look so scrawny. I checked my make-up, making sure I was well-covered. I put my sunglasses on. Perfect, I thought. Now all I have to do is have to pass the test to join the gang.

Preview: Will she pass??? Wat will happen during the test??

Hm.. i still have to write that.. so Chao for now.

Edited by su_x3 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#56
hey guyz... how does the name.. KARAN suit for angad??????
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Posted: 20 years ago
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i wanted sujal... but karan will do the job...by the way kripa changes into a boy?????wont any1 kno evn eid the makeup and all?????anyway ur story is cool.....very touching...
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Posted: 20 years ago
#58
sujal is nice.. but i needed sumthing with "K" cuz of the intitial in his back
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Posted: 20 years ago
#59
IF YOU GUYZ WANT TO READ THE STORY ALL TOGETHER.. You guyz can go to the first page's and the 1st post has all the parts to far..

ENJOY

-su-
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Posted: 20 years ago
#60
i think karen is fine...and plzzz continue soon your story is just like woaaahhh awsome i am in love with it it is sooo sad and touching and all!!! plzzz do continue soon!

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