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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part 14
Meanwhile back at the Khanna mansion?"Just because you're making this wedding for me and Kripa doesn't mean I owe you anything! Angad yelled angrily at his dad. Mr. Khanna grabbed Angad by the collar of his shirt. "Angad! You listen to me. Once you and Kripa get married, your grandpa's will gives you all of his businesses. Sharing part of it with your dad isn't asking for much is it??" Angad pushed his dad away.

He began to laugh. "The only two people grandpa will give the businesses to is me or uncle. He won't give it to you because you'll spend it all on those *bleep*s! I bet all your money is gone now." It was true. Mr. Khanna was in serious debt and he needed Angad to get married because Angad's grandpa was going to give Angad his inheritance once he gets married. Angad had just turned 18 and his dad had planned the marriage months ahead. His dad got on his knees. "Please son. Please do it for me".

Angad rolled his eyes. "You're so pathetic dad." He sighed. Living with Kripa taught him compassion and sympathy for people. "I'll see what I can do dad". He went into his room. Just then his cellular phone rang. He picked it up, thinking it was Kripa. Using his sexy voice, he whispered, "Hi Kripa." A weird high-pitched giggle came from the other end of the line. "Ooh" said the voice. "Hi to you too sexy." Angad rolled his eyes. "Oh shut up Prithivi."

Using his real voice, Prithivi began to laugh out loud. "Gross man, That's how you talk to Kripa! Ew! It gives me the chills!". "Hey Prithivi," said Angad seriously. "Is everything set and ready to go??" "Yeah man," said Prihivi. "Good," said Angad, smiling. "Meet me at the docks tonight. From there we can sail to the mainland airport and get away from Bombay to start a new life in Japan." "Yeah," said Prithivi. "But did you tell Kripa about it??" "No," answered Angad, sighing. "I'm afraid she won't leave her family. I'm planning to just kidnap her and take her along.

It's easier that way and no hassle." "Right," said Prithivi. "At least the three of us will still be together"."Yeah," said Angad. "Meet you in an hour. Get everything ready. I got our money too." "Okay," replied Prithivi. "Bye." Angad clicked off his phone. Angad's dad didn't know it but his grandpa had given him $10 million in advance, along with hotel ownerships in Japan and Bombay as his wedding gift. He planned to leave his dad $5 million and live off the rest with Kripa and Prithivi. He smiled thinking about how he would get away from everything and just be with the one he loved the most, Kripa.


Edited by su_x3 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#32

hey guyz later on... i hav to change all three of their names.. ANY SUGGESTIONS????

Angad =

Kripa =

Prithivi =

Edited by su_x3 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#33

Part 15

Back at home I was so excited I couldn't sleep. I know I was still young to be thinking about marriage but I know Angad is the only guy for me. I held my teddy bear close as thoughts of Angad drifted me to sleep. It was midnight now. Angad snuck out of his house quietly without making a noise.

He carried his backpack full of money on his back. He planned to go to Kripa's house to grab her and leave. Then it would be just him, Kripa, and Prithivi leaving together. He was almost to Kripa's house when he realized that he was being followed. It was his uncle's men. They came to get rid of him. Angad was smart. He knew the streets too well. He made it through the alley and those men end up losing him. But when Angad reached Kripa's house, about 10 men had surrounded her house. They all saw him approaching.

Angad began to run as they chased him. He made it to the dock. He saw Prithivi on the boat. "Angad! Hurry! The boat is leaving!" Angad threw his bag onto the boat first and made a high jump. He landed safely onto the boat. His uncle's men couldn't chase him anymore. Angad and Prithivi started cheering until Angad realized what was missing. KRIPA. He had left her. Angad fell to his knees. "What's wrong??" asked Prithivi. "Kripa! We left her! We have to go back!" yelled Angad.

Prithivi opened his mouth in shock because he just realized it too. Then he shook his head sadly. "We can't. If we go back, we'll just get killed and we'll be putting Kripa's life in danger too". Angad moved away from Prithivi, knowing that the darkness will cover his face. And for the first time in his life, Angad cried... -_-
😭 😭



Edited by su_x3 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Oh!!!!!!!!!!That's sooooooooooooo nice
Continue soon pls. i just cant wait.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#35

To Angad

Frm: Kripa

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Posted: 20 years ago
#36

Part 16

I woke up the next morning with this strange feeling inside me. I don't know why but I find it disturbing. Then I remembered that Angad and I are going to get married soon, it subsided. When I went downstairs, my stepmom was holding that wooden stick I haven't seen in years. I began to panic. She whacked me with it. I fell down surprised.

"Where's Angad??" she screamed at me. I was so confused and surprised I didn't know what she was talking about. She kept hitting me and telling me to answer her. But how can I answer when I don't even know myself? Then something unusual happened. My dad grabbed the stick away from my stepmom. "Stop hitting her! Can't you tell that she can't think straight through all that pain" My stepmom was shocked and she kept her mouth shut because my dad never did that to her before. "Kripa," my dad said to me, holding my hand. "Angad ran away from home again.

He's no longer in Bombay and the wedding's canceled. "He left??" I asked blankly. My dad nodded his head sadly. "How can he leave me??" I asked standing up. My stepmom's next words hit me hard and cold like ice. "He probably left because he didn't want to marry you." I sunk to my knees and fell to the floor. I began to sob to myself. My parents left the room, leaving me alone. 'How can you leave me, Angadddddd????"

Were all those promises of taking care of me lies?? I loved Angad so much. All I ever wanted is to be with him, even if he did only consider me as his sister. I needed to know why he left. Being with him all this time, I knew where he went. I'll search all of Japan if I had to!

One year later....



Edited by su_x3 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#37

Part 17

One Year Later...

During this year, my life of hell had return. I managed to save up enough money for a ticket to Japan and money to spend. I had to work odd hours so my stepmom wouldn't find out or she'll take the money from me. I also had to sell some of Angad's gifts to me. He was a really generous brother who would buy me a lot of expensive clothes, jewelry, perfume, and just about anything that I wanted.

I figured he wouldn't mind because they're just material possessions. They were a big help because I managed to trade them in for a lot of money. I finally had enough money to leave. It took me a while to go because I knew chances are low of finding Angad right away. I needed extra money for my search and I had to pay double for a fake I.D. You could say that I have almost everything planned out.

I got a pretty good amount so I planned on leaving today. It's been a little over a year since Angad left me with no reason or explanation. I've gotten so much thinner because I couldn't eat or sleep and I missed him so much. The problem I still had facing me were my parents. I know they were not going to let me leave. I was only 17. Damn!!. Still a minor. This year had been total hell for me and I can't stand another year of it. I had to leave and I had a plan.

I was going to fake my death. It was all so perfect. My family had to go out to Goa with Mr. Khanna. He still keeps in touch with us. I guess it's because he thinks I might know where Angad is. Truth is, I have no idea except I know Angad's somewhere in Japan. I planned to fake a drowning. Because of my heart failure, it helped me close off my air circulation for up to 4 minutes.

This time I am using it to let my family think that I have drowned and the tides drifted my body to sea so I will never be found. But before I go I had to say goodbye to my father. I hugged him hard. He looked at me surprised. "What was that for??" he asked. I shook my head. "It wasn't for anything dad. I did it because I love you." My dad had tears in his eyes. "I'm so sorry Kripa.

I'm so worthless as your father." "No you're not but you have to do what's right dad. Don't let anyone stop you and stop putting yourself down." He nodded his head. I hugged him for the last time. "I'm going for a swim okay??" He nodded his head and watched me head toward the ocean. The plan went perfect.

I stayed underwater for a while and swam myself to the other side of the beach where they couldn't see me. All my belongings were there. I got on the dock and sailed to the mainland airport leaving Bombay forever.+.+.+.+.+



Preview: Hmm... IF SHE FINDS ANGAD.. will he be the same Angad that she knew & luved?? or with time has he changed alsoo.. ?? Hmm. donno guess u guyz hav to wait to find out.

Edited by su_x3 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Kya mystery hai... good one though, I am enjoying it.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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i just read ur fan fic itz gr8 man
i thought u wanted suggestions for da names
here are some if i am little help
kripa=k
angad=a
prithvi=p

continue soon 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
#40

Part 18
Angad traced the 'K' scar on his back. 'Damn," he thought. 'I miss Kripa so much. He sent out one of his men to retrieve news about her and if they could, get her here to him in Japan. Angad had it all. Money and power. The only thing that was missing was Kripa. So much had happened to Angad as he remembered back. Angad and Prithivi made it to Tokoyo, Japan.

With Angad's leadership skills and Prithivi's smooth talking, they end up getting a lot of businesses and putting others of out business. Money was not enough for Angad. He needed power so he created Sechs Kies, where he was the leader and Prithivi was his 2nd-in command. He and Prithivi managed to eliminate the group Quiksilver on their own and gained the respect and loyalty of the two members Mannan and Kartik. Along the way, they found Josh and Dhruv wandering the streets. Dhruv proved to be a genius and Josh was handy in finding information.

Angad knew they were enough. They had hundreds of men under them but Sechs kies were the main leaders with Angad as the head. They committed a lot of crimes but no evidence was ever found to convict them. Just then there was a knock on his door, interrupting his thoughts. "Come in," said Angad. Josh came in. "I have news for you, boss," he said. "Well what is it? What did you find out about Kripa??" Angad asked. Josh looked down and hesitated to reply. "I'm afraid it's bad news." Those words made Angad panic. "Josh, you answer me now!" yelled Angad with rage. Angad's yell scared Josh, so he blurted it out. "Kripa Sharma is DEAD.

She drowned while she was swimming in the ocean. Her body has not been found and is still missing." Angad fell back in his seat in shock. 'Kripa's dead..... No, anyone but Kripaa," he thought. Josh knew it was a good time to leave so he left Angad in his office. "Kripaaaaaaaaa" Angad screamed out of his window in pain. His cries echoed throughout the city of Tokoyo.



Preview: Will Angad move on... by the time Kripa finds him??

Edited by su_x3 - 20 years ago

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