YEH KAISA PYAR HAI - A-K

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YEH KAISA PYAR HAI

A new fan-fiction by me, titled Yeh Kaisa pyar hai.

Yeh kaisa pyar hai, has a total different direction of the story, with Angad, Prithvi and Kripa, in totally dissimilar lights, from the serial.

Here are the important characters:

Angad: IS THE SON OF MR & MRS SHARMA

Angad is born of a middle-class family. Angad is a person who takes values and morals very seriously, he is a person who never supports lies, believes that one day he will meet the girl of his dreams and will marry her. Angad is a very self-respecting person and doesn't like to hurt anyone. Angad is a family man; he loves his family and can do anything for them. Angad hates people who use money to get way around things, He one day wants to go to Mumbai and make his parents name proud and become a singer. Angad hates parties, drinking, cigarettes, he is basically the "good" guy. Love is everything to him, if there is love there is life, and if no love no life!

Kripa: IS DAUGHTER OF NAINA & DILIP KHANNA

Kripa is the hottest superlative singing star. She is a rich, spoilt child. She always gets what she wants. Kripa is a person who does lives her life in total freedom, she doesn't care about anyone but herself. Kripa loves parties and comes home everyday in the wee hours of morning. Kripa drinks alcohol and even smokes cigarettes. Kripa thinks that money and fame is the only important thing in life and nothing else. Kripa doesn't believe in love and thinks it's time pass for a short fling with different guys.

Prithvi: IS THE SON OF DAMINI BOSE

Prithvi and Kripa are best friends. Both Prithvi and Kripa are exactly the same. Prithvi lives life to the fullest. He only helps someone if there's something in it for him. Prithvi indulges in alcohol and cigarettes. Prithvi is an overtly possessive person and doesn't like for anyone to come in his way or he'll ruin them.

Mishti: DAUGHTER OF DAMINI BOSE AND SISTER OF PRITHVI

Mishti is a quiet girl, who doesn't like to be part of crowds. Mishti is a caring and gentle girl. Mishti's waiting for her prince charming. She is a person who is the total opposite of Kripa and Prithvi, Mishti is simple and loving, but the problem is that's she is very clumsy, she always does everything wrong and she's always stammering after clumsiness.

Harshini: ANGAD'S BEST FRIEND

Yes, Harshini is Angad's best friend. Angad and Harshini share all of their secrets with each other, and Harshini knows that Angad wants to become a singer and wants to go to Mumbai, and Harshini too wants to join him. Harshini is basically like Angad's sister.

Anita: OLDEST DAUGHTER OF NAINA AND DILIP KHANNA

Anita is Kripa's sister, which makes her so upset. Anita is jealous of Kripa's success, that her mother always gives more attention to Kripa than to her. Anita, loves making fun of people.

Karthik: NAINA'S SISTER'S SON

Dilip Khanna, adores Karthik, since he doesn't have a son of his own, so he considers Karthik to be his own son. Karthik is an uptight businessman, he is the CEO of Soul Music Academy and also MD of Khanna insustries.

Naina: MOTHER OF KRIPA

Naina, is an blatantly go-getting person. She's always around the rush, for a good fore-front image of Kripa and the family, she runs the family business. She desires for her daughter Kripa, to marry her friend, Damini Bose's son Prithvi.

But, Kripa although she agrees to Naina on everything, does not agree that she should marry Prithvi, since Kripa does not want to get married, Kripa always changes the topic by saying that Prithvi is only kripa's friend.

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SONI

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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏wow what a twist. Great introduction. Please continue👏
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that was gr8 just lovfed it plez frame it properly n start the story i cant just wait
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wow...what a great story...plz continue...


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Posted: 20 years ago
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SO COOL!😛

DO CONTINUE...

TAKE CARE

ANOLI

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Part One

Nainital

Nainital is a beautiful place, with beautiful mountains, sceneries etc.

This is the city where Angad and his family live.

Sharma residence

At the top of the stairs, down the right side of the hall, lies a small room, where a person lies beneath covers. The person sleepily turns off the alarm that is ringing in his ears and get's up. The person turns on the shower, showers, brushes his teeth, dresses and goes downstairs, and greets his loving mom in the kitchen.

"Angad, Angad," someone comes in gasping for breath.

Angad smiles when he sees who it is

"Arre, Harshi, kya hua, ithna dhor kyu rahi thi?"

Harshini calms down and sits down on a chair.

"batha thi hoon, Angad tum Alia ko tho jaanthe hi ho na?"

Angad (impatient): haan, usse kya hua?

Harshini: usse kuch nahi hua, woh haina woh shaadi karahi hai, Mumbai mai, Harshini slyly out of the corner of her eye, tries to see Gayatri's reaction and then winks at Angad, Angad grins at her.

Angad: acha, tho kyat um jarahi ho, mai… mai toh nahi jasaktha, par tum Alia ko meri tharafse mubarak zaroor dedena, okay

Gayatri falls for it: Angad, tum kyu nahi jasakthe?"

Harshini: Haan Angad, tum kyu nahi jasakthe, Harshini risks a quick look at Gayatri, waise bhi saath hi saath tum Soul… Music… Academy bhi deksakoge, hain na?"

Gayatri pulls Harshini's ears,: acha tho yeh sajishe horahi thi, tum dono ke beech, tehr jaa, abhi, tum

Harshini: par aunty, issme galath kya hai, agar Angad Mumbai jaake sangeeet sikhna jaatha hai, tho aap usse jaane kyu nahi dethi, please aunty

Angad chimes in: haan maa, mai Mumbai jaake apna sapna poora karna chahtha hoon,apka naam roshan karna chahtha hoon, please maa, Angad pleads.

A loud, taut voice speaks up: kaha jaane ki baatein horahi hai?"

Suryabhan Sharma walks in, sets his briefcase down and places his hand on Angad's shoulder.

Angad looks at his dad fearfully: woh papa, mai… mai

Suryabhan" yeh kya, mai mai, bakri ki thara bolre ho, tumhe Mumbai jaana hai, teek hai, jasakthe ho"

Angad still has on a gloomy expression on his face, he didn't quiet get what his dad said, Angad gets up miserably, then he get it, what his dad just said, in a moment his face lights up and he jumps up and down: papa, aap sach kehre ho, really mai Mumbai sach mai jasaktha hoon

Suryabhan: nahi, tho kya mai joot bolra hoon

Harshini goes over to hug Angad.

Everyone is happy, Angad, Harshini, Angad's little brother, Suryabhan, But Gayatri still has a cheerless expression.

Suryabhan notices this: kya hua, Gayatri tum khush nahi ho?

Gayatri: kaise hongi mai khush, mera beta mujhse ithna door jaara hai, batha nahi kaha rahega, kaayega teek se ya nahi, usse waha koi thakleef hongi ya nahi, woh hum sabse door usse shaher mai akela rahega

Angad places his hands on his mother's shoulder: par maa, mai akela kaha honga, waha Khanna uncle aur sab tho hai na, aur Harshini, bhi arahi hai, aur maa, don't worry mai apna poora khayal rakhunga

Hearing the Khanna's name, Gayatri looks at her husband: Khanna

Suryabhan: don't worry, mai Dilip se aaj hi baath karoonga

Gayatri (still tense): par, aaj thak unhone kabhi humme ek phone thak nahi kiya, aura b

Suryabhan: woh tum mujhpar chordo

Angad and Harshini go out, excited and high five each other

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Mumbai

Khanna Bungalow

Khanna bunglow, is a magnificent manor, it is a triple story house, with a huge terrace on the top. On the back side of the house lays a gigantic swimming pool, with a gazebo, a bar, and chairs. This is an area, where many parties have been situated.

On the front side, a beautiful fountain lays, where water cascades out of it, to fall in the pond beneath it, the sun reflects different colors of the rainbow in daylight and at night, the moon casts it's spell in the fountain.

Inside, the stairs are decorated with gold carpeting and elegant lighting along the stairs. The furniture is set elegantly or rather so perfectly arranged, that it seems like the house is adopted right of a movie set.

Going up to the third floor, two rooms lays on either side, inside the left lies a crumpled up figure sleeping away.

Hours wheeze by, and twelve clock comes, but still the person does not make a move to get up.

Naina mounts up the stairs briskly, she walks up to the third floor and walks in to the room on the left and is irritated to see a sleeping form at this hour of the day.

She goes over and pulls out the covers from the person.

The person groans and rolls over the other side.

Naina taps the person: Kripa, utto, utto

Kripa wakes up grumpily: mom, mujhe sone dona na, she says so cutely.

Naina: Kripa, it's twelve o' clock, you've got to go to the studio, rehearsals hai, come on get up, this is your fault, raath ko dehr se athi ho, phir subhe utt nahi sakthi,

Naina gets up, come on I want you ready in half hour, saying this she walks out of the room.

To be continued…

Preview of the next part: Angad and Harshini make their way to Mumbai, Angad enters Khanna mansion, will he be able to meet Kripa or will he face someone he dreads?

I know this part was very boring, but I couldn't start off with something good immediately.

Lots of love

Soni

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👏 good job. Please continue.😊
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great story...keep it up...plz continue....

~sweta~

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plz continue dis is soo good...
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loved it soni. you're teriffic. can't wait for the next part.

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