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Posted: 20 years ago
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I didn't see any fan-fictions today so I thought I'd write one… it's my first time writing so it's probably won't be as good as some of these are... My hindi isn't that great soo it might sound a little weird…

It begins where Kripa has fainted on the street….

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Kripa is lying on the street… and Prithvi comes into the picture…. He sees Kripa lying there in the middle of the street and takes her to the outhouse where she lives. He sees that she has a feverso he puts her on her bed and calls the doctor. When the doctor comes and checks her out he says that she is pregnant. Prithvi is in shock….. but is still very supportive towards Kripa.❤️

Prithvi: Doctor ab ye kasi hai?

Doctor: Abhi to ye teek hai par ise apne aap ka kiyal rakna chaahiye… Ise hosh thodi der mein aajayega…


Prithvi: Thank you doctor…

Prithvi leads the Doctor out and Angad sees the Doctor leaving. He isn't able to control himself so he goes over there. Prithvi is shattered… but decides that he should stay with her no matter what. Then our Angad comes and sees Kripa lying on the bed and Prithvi by her. He gets mad and goes rushing toward our sweet Prithvi.😡

Angad: Tum yahan kya kar rehe ho?

Prithvi: Mein to ghar jar aha tha jab maine Kripa ko deka road par. To main isko utakar yahan le aaya.

Angad: Aacha natak kar lethi hai ye…..

Prithvi: Tum ye kya keh rehe ho? Tumhe patha hai ki ye tumse kithna pyaar karthi hai?

Angad: Pyar? Ha Ye kaho ki pyar ka natak karthi hai!

Prithvi: ANGAD! Tumhe koi galathsaimi hoi hai! Ye to tumhaari bache ki ma bane wali hai!

Angad: What? Main nahin accept kartha is bache ko! Ye to tumhaara ho ga!

Prithvi: Kya? Kripa to sirf meri dost hai… hain ye sach hai ki main ise pyar kartha hoon. Lekin Kripa ne to sirf tumse pyar kiya hai. Vo mujhe sirf apna dost samaj thi hai.

Angad: Acha… to usne jooth kyun bola tha? Jab maine Nanital phone kiya tha to usne aisa kyun kaha that ki tum waha nahi ho?

Prithvi: Kyun ki maine use kaha tha ki vo tumse kuch na kahe. Tha ki tumhare beech koi galathsaimi na ho!

Angad: Whatever Prithvi… main kuch nahin suna chaatha. Main ja raha hoon… tum raho iske paas… Aur ek baat… main tumhe warn karna chaatha hoon ki ye tumhe use kar rahi hain… paise ke liye…

Angad leaves and Prithvi is surprised that Angad could ever think anything like that…

He turns around to go back to Kripa… and sees her standing right there. 😭

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Ok guys… I'm tired… I don't know if you guys will like it or not. It just came to me when I saw her faint in yesterday's episode.. so tell me if you guys like it and if I should continue or not….

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Posted: 20 years ago
#2
dat waz exellent....i think u shud rite more
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Posted: 20 years ago
#3

very cute and very good...plz continue......

~sweta~

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey nice story👏

or rather a fan fic😆

keep it up😉

love KP😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Thanks guys....... I'll probably have the next part up ina couple of minutes....
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Posted: 20 years ago
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amazing yaar. 👏 Please continue.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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please go ahead and never think you are wrong please continue
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hahaha

damn good

but it is galatfaimi not galatsaimi ok

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