A short fanfiction based upon previews

Hi guys, I'm a fairly new member at this group. I read over here that Angad and Kripa are supposed to marry two different people. Though I'm against them getting married right now, I prefer them getting married to each other and pine for each other rather than them getting married to different people. If Kripa gets married to Prithvi, it'll be just like kahin tho hoga where Prithvi will be another Piyush… And that'll be unbearable..
In the setindia preview, it is given that Prithvi wants to propose to Kripa & so he calls he to a place. At the same time, Angad also decides to tell Kripa that he loves her. So after nearly five extra hours of sleep due to a flu, which I have got, and some really weird dreams, I came up with this scenario. Kindly ignore the mistakes as I'm too tired to read through this again. Feedback either positive or negative will be highly appreciated.

Disclaimer- Kripa, Angad and Prithvi are all property of Ekta Kapoor, Balaji Telefilms and Sony Entertainment Television. I have just borrowed the characters. Infringement is not intended


Kripa is waiting at Devi ma ki temple for Prithvi to come. She is still thinking about Angad filling her maang with lipstick. She is so engrossed in her thoughts that she doesn't notice that Prithvi is standing right behind her. Prithvi is about to hug her from the back when she turns around. She realizes what he was about to do and is annoyed. She asks him "Prithvi, yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?"
Prithvi is embarrassed and he stutters "Wo Kripa main…."
"Wo main kya Prithvi?"
Prithvi is surprised with this reaction of Kripa's and says "Itne gussa kyun ho rahi ho Kripa… Main tumse pyar karta hu aur tum bhi mujhse pyar karti ho…hain na…"
"Pyar... mujhse?…Prithvi main tumse pyar nahi karti… aur tum tho Harshini se pyar karte ho…"
"Harshini aur main…tum paagal tho nahi ho gayi ho…Kripa, main tumse pyar karta hu…aur maine apne pyaar ka izhaar us letter main kiya tha…jiska jawab tumne mujhe diya tha…aur usme tumne apne pyar ka izhaar kiya tha…"
Kripa's confused and says, "letter, wo letter tho tumne Harshini ko diya tha, mujhe nahi… aur who jawab bhi Harshini ke taraf se tumhare liye tha…"
"Ye baar baar tum Harshini ko humare beech mein kyun laa rahi ho…" He holds her tightly by the elbows and tells… "Main sirf tumse pyar karta hu…aur tumse shaadi karna chahtha hu…Harshini se nahin…" "
Prithvi, mujhe chod do, tum mere liye sirf ek dost ho, us se badkar kuch bhi nahi…" "Nahin Kripa, tum jhoot bol rahe ho…"
"Prithvi, leave me…you are hurting me"
Prithvi is holding her by the elbows and shaking her, while Kripa is begging him to leave her. Just then, Angad's voice booms out, "Prithvi, Kripa ko chod do…." Prithvi turns and sees Angad standing on the first step with fire in his eyes. Prithvi shouts at Angad, "Angad, yeh mere aur Kripa ke beech ka mamla hai… tum isse door raho."
"Prithvi, tumne suna nahi ke maine kya kaha, Kripa ko chod do…"
"shut up Angad and stay out of this…"
"Prithvi, main tumse aakhri baar keh raha hu, Kripa ko chod do…" "
Varna kya…Kya karoge tum Angad…Arre tum kya Karoge… Main hi kuch karta hu…" he pushes Kripa out of the way and goes to Angad and holds him by the collar. "Yeh aakhri baar hoga Angad, ab tum Kripa aur mere beech interfere nahin karoge…
He is about to hit him, when Kripa yells, "stop it Prithvi, Angad ko chod do…"
Angad smirks while Prithvi says, "Nahin Kripa this will be the last time, Angad comes between you and me…"
For which Angad says, "First of all, there should be a you and Kripa, for me to come between both of you…"
"What the hell are you going on about Angad, Kripa loves me…"
Angad sarcastically tells him, "Love my foot, Kripa doesn't love you Prithvi, and you better accept that…Moreover, how can she love you when she is mine…"
Prithvi is surprised, "What…what the hell are you talking about…"
As Angad is about to reply, Kripa says, "Haan Angad, what are you talking about?…Kissi ki maang ko lipstick se bharne se who tumhari nahi ho jayegi Angad…Arre tum kya jano pyar kya hota hai Angad, shaadi kya hoti hai…Meri maang ko lipstick se bharne se tumne socha ki main tumhari property nahi ban jaungi Angad…Shaadi koi gudda guddi ka khel nahin hai Angad jo gusse mein aakar, possessive ho jaakar kiya jaaye…Shaadi tho do dilon ka Milan hai…wo saath phere jo shaadi ke waqt liye jaate hai…wo un saath vachano ki nishani hai jo pati patni, ek dusre ko agni ko saakshi maankar karte hain…Who sindoor jo pati apne patni ki maang mein bharta hai, wo patni ke liye pati ka pyar aur commitment ki nishani hai…Arre tum kya jaano, commitment kya hota hai, Tumhare liye kissi ladki ki sharer par lipstick se apna naam likhna commitment hai hai na…par mere liye nahin Angad…Mere maang mein lipstick bharke, nahi main tumhari patni hu aur nahi tum mere pati…"
Just then, wind blows and her hair which had parted sideways, settles along her middle partition and the line of sindoor which she has applied is clearly visible. Angad sees this and smiles sarcastically. Kripa now knows that there is no use pretending so she just turns around, her back to Angad…
Angad, "Wah Kripa Wah, you really amaze me you know that… Kitni achchi tarah se tum apne feelings ko apne aap se hi chupa rahi ho.. tum apne aap se jhoot bol sakte ho, Lekin mujhse nahin… tumhari maang mein wo sindoor hi is baat ki gawah hai ki tum dil se mujhe apni pati maanti ho aur apne aap ko meri patni…Main jaanta hu ki tum sirf mere ho Kripa, sirf mere…. Maine tumse usi din kaha tha ki Prithvi tumhare liye kuch bhi nahin lagta, aur main theek tha…tum sirf mujhse pyar karte ho Kripa…sirf mujhse…Aur agar baat rasmon ki hai, tho main wo saari rasmein abhi pura kartha hu… He takes Kripa by hand to the agni kund of the temple and takes saath phere with her… He then takes a mangalsutra from Devi ma ki murti and puts it around her neck… He fills her maang with sindoor and looks her in the eye and tells her, "Kripa ab maine tumhe un saari rasmon se apna bana liya…Tum abse sirf meri ho Kripa sirf meri..."
He looks at Prithvi who was standing there silently and tells him "Romeo, ab tumhare Kripa ki zindagi main koi ehmiyat nahi hai…Tum Kripa se door rehna samjhe…"
He takes a still shocked Kripa by her hand and leads her to his car…

So what do you guys think, should i continue or not...
please review...

Cheers
Mru

nice work........totally filmi, i know ekta will never show ne thing like this😡😡 but do continue the rest of the part.

😛What a mindblowing story please continue what is the end😛

what will happen next please tell !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃

Awesome. Loved it. I hope ekta does this story.0

Loved every part of it. Good going

thanks for the feedback guys, its really appreciated... I'm not well rite now and can't sit in front of the comp for a long time... ill try and post the next part by mon or tues...
I'm really sorry for the delay

Cheers

that's fine mru. u just take care of yourself. we can wait until monday to read u fan fiction. let me tell u it was great. i was very excited while reading it. loved the part when angad sees sindoor in kripa's mang. keep up the excellent work.

btw i love gilmore girls. that's my favorite soap along with roswell and one tree hill

thanks, loking foward to the nect installment