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Posted: 19 years ago
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Very Cute story Nishu.. great job!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 2

In a big city far on the country side there was a huge house on there hills and fields filled wit flowers. And a beautiful river. There lived a gurl she woke up got ready for school.

Kripa lived with her two sisters pooja divya. Divya was 14 and pooja was 16 and Kripa was 20. Kripa went to divya's romm she was awaken.

Divya: hi di im ready for school

Kripa:good go eat breakfast

Kripa went to go and wake up pooja she was already awake to

Pooja: hi di im awake

Kripa: oh crap im getting late for class

Kripa got ready went to university met up wit her friends jenna chantelle tyler eric.

Jenna: hey gurl

Kripa:sry I woke up late

Chantelle :its k

Kripa had boyfriend it was eric

Eric:sweety missed ya

Kripa: sry give me a hug

Eric:aww anything for my gurl

Chantelle:hey you forgot about me

Kripa: sry

Eric: got any plans honey

Kripa:nope

Eric:we are going our 2nite the four of us (whispers in his ear) I will dres sexy and give you a surprise Kripa gives eric a wink.

Eric: your bad

Kripa:yes im your naughty gurl

Kripa jus pulled eric's shirt and gave him a kiss

Kripa:was that good or what

Eric: mind blowing

Chantelle jenna tyler:get a room

Chantelle's boyfriend was travais and jenna's was james

Jenna:I miss james

Kripa:aww honey call him

Jenna: he is coming back tomorrow

All four of them went to class and a test

Eric and Kripa went to his place

Kripa: no one is home

Eric:babe you want anything im getting a beer

Kripa:ill have one

Kripa and Eric were watching foot ball

When kripa's cell rang it was divya

Divya: goin to friends place

Kripa:k have fun

Eric:sister

Kripa:im bored

Eric: oh k ill turn off the tv arite

It was kripa's time to leave

Kripa:bye hun ill cyah 2nite

Eric: byee luv ya

Kripa:give me a hug and kiss

Eric:you know I don't want to you go

Kripa:me too

Eric:stay then

Eric gives Kripa a hug and kiss

Kripa: ok luv ya

Kripa left eric's sister Kayla came she was mad

Meanwhile Kripa went shopping wit chantelle and jenna

Chantelle: so do you think this out looks good

Kripa: ya

Back at Kripa;s house

Divya and pooja were wit there boyfriends

Kripa: hey guyz goin out 2note arite

Pooja:k di

Kripa changed she wore a halter top blue skirt and matching jewellary

All they went to a party

Kripa was really partying drank like 2 vodka'sshe was really enjoing her self

All:we are tired

They went to the hotel and went to there rooms

Eric: baby you look hot

Kripa: aww so do you

Eric fell on Kripa they starred into each other's eyez slowly eric kissed her on the lips and then the neck slowly as the night is young is our lovers.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#13

greatttttttttttttttttttt 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice

awesome!!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey just read the whole thing!! its tooo good....wow kripa is a bit wild lol....and hey apparently kripa's sis' name is the same as mine haha..continue soon

luv lots,
pooja 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pooja922

Hey just read the whole thing!! its tooo good....wow kripa is a bit wild lol....and hey apparently kripa's sis' name is the same as mine haha..continue soon

luv lots,
pooja 😉



haha...same here finished reading ur fanfic!!..its gr8..and i agree kripa is a bit too wild!!..haha...plzz continue soon!!..+

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Posted: 19 years ago
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me too. just read the whole thing. its good. i got confused at first i read another fan-fic which was also given the same title.anyways, continue soon

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