***LUV SHUD BE A CRIME***

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Posted: 19 years ago
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if this is wat u get for falling in luv then why fall in luv????????/

i mean angad hurts kirpa

kirpa hurts angad

and so forth

it neva ends

heres a peom i wrote

hope u like it

You said that you loved me,
Then why did you break me heart?

You said that you would hold me together,
Then why did you tear my world apart?

You said that you would never hurt me,
Then why did you cause all of my tears?


You said that you would protect me,
Then why did you expose all of my fears?

You said that you would never leave me,
Then why did you leave me here to die?


You said that you would always be truthful,
Then why did you have to lie?


You said that you would always be here,
Then why do I stand-alone?


You said that I was beautiful,
Then why do I feel like a crone?

You said that you would set me free,
Then why do I stand here in chains?


You said that you would always be by my side,
Then why do I walk alone through the lanes?


You said that you would never be late,
Then how come you're never on time?


You say that you love me,
But baby, if that's what u call love…



Then love should be a crime..

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fading_smiles thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
i totally agree. but there are some good and bad things about love..

good job on the poem 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwww...u got a point there sharu.... 👏

Btw: awsome poem.... 👏 you got skills! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sahruu meri jannu..
agg gayi tum..
ajj paheli baar sad..poems leke aee ho tum..
but dey r g8..
luv
niva 😃 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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lol thx guys
u rock

aur nive di men kya karo

these epi;s r so sad i get sad to


ekta likes to make us forget all about tru luv naa
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I disagree...love isnt a crime..even though they hurt eachother the love never stops...Love is something we charish...If we calll it a crime it would be degrating the whole meaning of love....A crime is something you do on purpose but love is something that just happens

Nice poem dear 😛
Edited by dadhich - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Me agrees love is a CRIME😃...arranged marrige better..

Luv ya..

Ouma

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amazin nd hot!

Me agrees love is a CRIME😃...arranged marrige better..

Luv ya..

Ouma

lol ouma tum bhi naa

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow Sharu... you wrote that?? Great Job!!! 👏

You're our new Sharu shayar!! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Selina

Wow Sharu... you wrote that?? Great Job!!! 👏

You're our new Sharu shayar!! 😆

haila!!!!!!

sharu sharabi

sharu shayar

wat were my parents thinkg when they named me???????😆

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