Kripa, This poem is for you

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Best Friend

When the clouds breeze through the sky and

The Heart waits for the first drop of rain;

When the hopes of seeing my friend disappear

I wish the Death was my best friend

When the fresh air passes between the leaves

The chirp of the birds bring music to my ears

When the voice of my friend is no where to be heard

I wish the Death was my best friend

When the memories haunt my heart even in dreams

When darkness covers the vision of my eyes

When there is no friend to hold me from falling

I wish the Death was my best friend

When desires of the heart sink in themselves

When the tears of the eyes dry in themselves

When the past memories of happiness bury in themselves

I wish the Death was my best friend

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow good job 👏
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very nice
and it actually brought tears in my eyes
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Awesome Stranger 👏 👏 👏 I loved the poem.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Welcome to IF Stranger, great poem 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Amazing Poem Stranger and Welcome Aboard. This poem i think aptly describes Kripas plight!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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A beautiful poem by a beautiful Stranger.It aptly describes Kripa's present plight and her future agony as well.For now, Zeb's proximity, his small gestures, his looks, his hot-cold behaviour is killing her.....and tomorrow, when she comes to know that she mauled Angad's innocence and that he always loved her and stayed true to her, she won't be able to face him or even herself...perahps then, she'll actually wish death was her best friend.

"Heaven in their eyes and stars glittering through their souls........"

Edited by nitica_82 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: nitica_82

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A beautiful poem by a beautiful Stranger.It aptly describes Kripa's present plight and her future agony as well.For now, Zeb's proximity, his small gestures, his looks, his hot-cold behaviour is killing her.....and tomorrow, when she comes to know that she mauled Angad's innocence and that he always loved her and stayed true to her, she won't be able to face him or even herself...perahps then, she'll actually wish death was her best friend.

"Heaven in their eyes and stars glittering through their souls........"

No body would have said it better than you, Nitica.

That is exactly what I meant. Kripa will come to this situation as you said. But Angad's pure love will protect her.

On the other hand by accepting this starnger's views you are all making my YESTERDAY A DREAM; TOMORROW A VISION. I am really enjoying you all gals, your innocent comments, warm company. Thanks for making me feel so homely. Thanks for accepting this starnger in to IF. This is not addiction. This is ANANDA; the extreme happiness. Hope this relationship with IF will continue for many many years to come.

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