If i was in Ekta's place then.....

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Posted: 19 years ago
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If i was in Ekta Kapoors place, i would have ended KTH in this way.

The story till the Piyush's bharsi will remain as it is, but the only change is Kashish will not send Sujal to jail in the wine case and also there is no Swayam in my story line.

After Piyush's bharsi, Kashish finds those saboots in Sujal's farm house and decides that its high time to send Sujal to jail in Piyush's murder case.In the meanwhile Rishi who is already behind Kashish gets clues that Kashish is the one who opened the new company on Sujal Garewal's name.

He comes with Kashish's lawyer and exposes Kashish in front of all the family members. Kashish agrees that she was the one who was doing all this.(here same scene of Rishi & Kashish when Rishi exposes Kashish)Vasu files the complaint against Sujal.

Sujal is in the office in a meeting , Akshat is also present and the police comes there and arrests sujal.

Kashish leaves R&G and Vasu promises Kashish that she is with her and she feels very sorry for not understanding Kashish.Veena is hurt by Kashish.

Kashish goes to jail to meet Sujal (here the same scene when Kashish goes to jail to meet Sujal).

Akshat fights the case in favour of Sujal, he asks Sujal exactly what has happened on that day and all the details.

During the trial Kashish is called into the witness box and she tells the judge why she suspects Sujal , she starts telling how Sujal ruined Piyush & Kashish's life, how he destroyed their bussiness ,Kashish tells how Sujal planted Saniya to seperate Kashish & Piyush.She says that Sujal wanted her to comeback in his life and so he killed Piyush.She presents all the saboots she had against Sujal in the court.

Akshat asks Sujal about who Sanya was , Sujal tells the story of Sanya .Akshat doubhts, may be Sanya is involved in Piyush's death and during the next trial Sanya is called into the witness box.

Akshat brings out the truth and Sanya agrees that she has done all this for money and Archie is behind all this, and in between the trial all the misunderstandings created by Archie between Sujal, Piyush & Kashish also comes out.Now Archie is been suspected.Kashish is shocked but still not convinced .Next Archie is called into witness box, She agrees that she used Sanya to get Sujal, as she loved him too much but she refuses to be involved in Piyush's murder.

Then Akshat with help of Rishi goes to dabha and finds out the truth and finds the man who was with Sujal , while Sujal was taking Piyush to the hospital.That man comes and reveales the truth and tells how desperate Sujal was to save Piyush and also tells that Piyush gave a ring to Sujal while he was dying.

Akshat proves that the saboots that Kashish got were planted by Archie and Archie has no way but to confess that she was behind all this.

Archie abh sab kuch saaf saaf batha dethi hai, jab Sanya ke wajah se Sujal & Kashish ke beech misunderstandings badi, mein bahut kush thi ki abh mere aur sujal ke beech koi nahi aayegha.Jabh Sujal sach jaanne keliye Saniya ke paas gaya tha, Sanya mujhe bachane keliye Piyush ka naam lekhar meri koshish ko aur bhi aasaan kardhiya.Sujal abh Piyush se nafrath karne laga tha.Aur jabh use ghar se nikaal diya gaya tha , Piyush ko barbhaath karne ke liye Sujal paison ke liye mujhse shaadhi ke liye raazi hogaya.Lekhin usne saaf saaf kehdiya tha ki woh mujhse pyar nahi kartha aur zindhagi mein kabhi bhi mujhse pyar nahi karega aur woh mujhse sirf paison ke liye hi shaadi karna chahatha hai.Mein phir bhi kush thi ye soch kar ke ek na ek dhin mein Sujal ko paaloonghi.

Sujal, Piyush ko tho barbhaat kar raha tha, lekhin Kashish ke liye pyaar kabhi kam nahi hui.Jabh Piyush & Kashish ek contract ke liye Banglore gaye the, ye contract paana Piyush ke liye bahut hi zaroori tha, kyunki ye R&G ko bachaane ka aakri raastha tha.Sujal bhi ussi contract keliye Banglore gaya hua tha aur mujhe ek aur mokha milgaya tha Kashish ke dil mein Sujal ke liye nafrath badane keliye.

Maine Piyush ke naam se rishwadh dekhar woh ilzaam Sujal ke upar dalkar apne plan mein kaamyaabh hogayi. Sujal ,contract se bahar hogaya lekhin woh kudh ko saabhit karke ,phir se contract ke race mein aagaya aur contract jeethgaya.Contract tho jeeth gaya tha lekhin Kashish ko khodiya, Kashish ,Sujal se abh bahut nafrat karne laghi thi.

Banglore jaane se pehle Sujal ne mujhse Engagement karne ka wadha kiya tha, aur hamara engagement fix hogaya.Tabhi R&G ko bachaane ke liye Piyush ko 200 crores ki zaroorath thi, aur sujal ke paas R&G ke saare shares te

Thabi kuch log ne Piyush par hamla kiya tha aur Kashish Sujal ko galat samajhi, lekhin Sujal bekasoor tha aur woh choot gaya tha.Tabh Kashish ke paas R&G ko bachane ke liye Sujal ke saath 2 years as a assistant kaam karne ki contract sign karna pada, bina ghar mein kissi ko bataye bagair.

Sujal aur mere angagement ke baad, Sujal ka Music company innaugration function ke liye Sujal ke saath Kashish bhi Delhi gayi thi.Aur ye baath mujhe bilkul achi nahi lagi, Mein darr gayi thi ki Kashish mujhse Sujal ko cheen leghi.Maine vasu aunty ko yeh baath batayi aur Piyush ye baath jaankar Kashish ko wapis lene Delhi pahunch gaya tha.Maine, Sanya se milkar, Kashish ko maarne ki plan banayi, Break oil ke pipes cut kardhithi.Maine socha Piyush ke saath Kashish bhi hogi, lekhin bechara Piyush mar gaya aur ye Kashish bach gayi.

Meri insecurity bhad thi hi gayi aur jabh Sujal ne sabh ke saamne Piyush ke thervi pe Kashish ko propose kiya mein bardhash nahi kar payi aur Sujal ko Piyush ke murder mein pasane ke liye Sujal ke kilaaf Saboot ko plant karna shuru kardhiya tha.

Every body are shocked and the court is adjourned till lunch.

Every body feels guilty of suspecting Sujal.

In the court after lunch Sujal is declared innocent.Kashish leaves the court and starts walking on the road.Sujal thanks Akshat for trusting him, Sujal meets everybody, his eyes searching for Kashish.

R&G family apne ghar chale jhathe hai.Sujal & Akshat stays back in the court for some formalities.

Sujal goes to his home and searches for Kashish, asks Veena about Kashish(same scene when Sujal goes to Veena and asks her about Kashish)

Kashish chalte chalte flash backs mein chali jhathi hai,She feels guilty.

Sujal goes to Prof sinha's house but he doesn't find Kashish there.Sujal , Kashish ko doondne Wahi jaga jatha hai, jaha par Sujal & Kashish milthe te.Thabi bhaarish shuru ho jhaathi hai.There he finds Kashish crying,Sujal goes near Kashish, they look into each other eyes,Kashish is about to say something, but sujal stops her.

Kashish mein tumse humesha kuch kehna chahtha tha, lekhin keha nahi paaya, aur jabh kaha bhi tho tum ne kabhi suna nahi.Aaj mein kehta hu Kashish, "mein tumse bahut pyaar kartha hu, bahut pyaar kartha hu aur tumhare bina jee nahi saktha "

Sujal & Kashish hug each other( song) and Sujal takes Kashish to R&G house.Every body is happy and Veena also forgives Kashish.

"After 10 months" on the television screen.

Twins are born to Sujal & Kashish( boy & girl).Akshat & Charu get married to each other.Rishi , Sanjana ko apna letha hai.Aman joins Bissiness.May both Kanan & Mouli also get their life partners.The serial ends with a beautifull scene with Sujal. Kashish & with their little kids.

Sujal: He is a perfect lover.Loves his mom & Kashish to death.Never believes in relations but when he is into a relation he gives every thing( may be its for friend, brother, mom or wife).Follows his instincts.He never lies, lekhin jabh bhi koi galat kaam kartha hai, uss galthi ko maanne ki himmat bhi raktha hai.

Kashish: Kashish's first love is sujal.After marrying Piyush also she still loved Sujal but was always loyal to Piyush.Kashish consumates her marraige with the hatred on Sujal and not with love on Piyush( because of the contract in banglore) and consumates her marraige with Sujal with love on Sujal forgetting Piyush's bharsi.

Piyush: He is a true gentleman , very honest and caring .But when time came to choose between friend & love , he chooses love knowing that Sujal & Kashish still love each other very much and that was the only mistake he makes.Sujal ye boltha bhi hai "Piyush, jho mere sabh se acha dost tha, jisse mujhe chot lagne par mujhse jyadha dard usse hotha tha, woh Piyush, mere zindagi ke sabse bade mod par mujhe hi dhokha diya hai".

From starting in KTH, They showed that Sujal was not in good equations with his father and when they introduced Reeva , Swayam and Akshat as CG's past , it didn't look like that the twist was forced into the story line.And also the scenes when Sujal comes to know about CG's past( naajayaz scene),the scene where sujal darr jhatha hai ki agar Veena ko patha chelega tho kya hoga , the interraction scenes between Sujal & Akshat on the bridge , the scene where Sujal asks Veena to sign divorce papers where brilliant and also gelled into the story.

But after that what, Both the families would fight, the only source being destroying the bussiness or bringing another woman into Sujal's life and creating misunderstandings again( this will not suit sujal's character).And after this KTH would have turned into another Saas Bahu serial.That's the reason why Swayam is not in my story line.

As this is a love story , if u drag it , it looses its flavour.So i think this would have been the best ending.If Ekta would have ended KTH like this, KTH would have remained as her best of best serials of all time.What do u think ?

Iam not that expert, but if u think that there can be any changes to be done, u r most welcome.Please add ur views and ideas .

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Barnali thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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if yu give me the option then as ekta.k, before doing anything i'll go and get an appointment from a psychiatrist. that wuld me the first thing i'll do if i'm ekta.k and forget abt all these k-series.


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Posted: 19 years ago
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I think no one liked my ending. Please u can criticise, go ahead.
romaila thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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vinnu u 2 r using da same tricks of ekta in da climax
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Vinnu ur story is good..but somehow it seemed like Ekta's story...
Don't mind...but i would like to see Kashish repent for her sins!!
the serial didn't show it..but u can show naah? 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I didn't tried anything new from my side, i just thought it would have been better if they ended KTH with out dragging.So, i just cut some points and ended.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Iam not that talented yaar, so please add anything and make it intresting taking the outline of the story.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thats why if u were ekta.......(god bleesed u man.. thax to god 😉 )
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Vinnu ur good anyway...atleast u gave us a bit of happiness...only if it really WUD have ended this way
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Life for Rent

thats why if u were ekta.......(god bleesed u man.. thax to god 😉 )

I agree they are so many flaws in this story line also.But now KTH has become a crap.So i thought Ekta would have ended it, may be in this way.But Ekta wouldn't as we r seeing that she will not end KTH in near future.

May be the title i used for this topic is not right. "Kaash Ekta ne KTH ko iss tara end karthi" would be bether.I just dont want to see anybody in Rajeev's place.

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