hUm tUm pAy...... (KA Jodi To Came, Pg-4) - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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superb 👏
next part ka intezar hai
very nice good job 👏 👏 👏
NEHA
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nasir01

superb 👏
next part ka intezar hai
very nice good job 👏 👏 👏
NEHA

I dont Understand !!! User name : Nasir 01 , and Below YOur Reply NEHA😕,SOrry For interfaring but i am confused

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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW!!!! G8 FANFIC so far, it is excellent...plz continue
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C ONTINUE STORY "hUm tUm pAy maRTay hAIn" ====PART 3====
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Rajeev Is Shocked, When He Heared name "Aamna",
Cool Wind Started To BLowing , pinDrop Silence In Hall, Everyone's Eye Just On The Other Side , Then SLowly a Beautiful Girl of age 20(Who Look Sooooo Scared 😕 ), Get entered in hall, and Look at the whole Crowd.......
She Looks COnfused, Like She firstly Perform anywhere, Slowly Slowly Comes In Front Of Rajeev and Stand and Then See This Cute Inocent Guy .

Rajeev Jo Kuch dair kay liay us Larki may Guum Ho gaya Tha Starts Dialouge firstly.....

Rajeev : Kabhi Kabhi Kuch loog Pehli hi Nazar may aap kay itna kareeb aa jatay hain kay aap chahtay hoay bhi khud Ko nahi Rok Sakhtay,Dil Pehli bar may he humain ksi kay itna Kareeb Lay jata hay Khud Per bhi kaboo nahi rehta....

Max : (who is Sitting beside the Stage With Ronit and Script Writer of hUm tUm....)Sir Yea Rajeev kya keh raha hay,

Ronit : Ji sir may nay bhi Dialouges parhay thay,laiken un may yea sab to nahi tha..... Per.....

Script Writer : Ssshhhhhh ..... usay karnay do Wo Jo ker raha hay, Ab hm nay usay roka to saara play Kharaab ho jay ga.


Now Camera Moves To Rajeev and Aamna, Both stand Very near to Each others.....

Rajeev : (Continue His Dialouges) .. Hum Chahain bhi to dil per kaboo nahi ker sakhtay, Aakhir yea Kaun sa Ehsaas hay, Jo Pehli nazar may Humay Pagal Ker daita hay.....

the Beautiful Girl Starts..(Aamna): Hota hay , Kabhi kabhi koi pehli baar may he dharkanoo may Bus jata hay, Or Us say Duur Janay ko jee hi nahi chahta, hum Kisi ki Dharkanoo ko Mehsoos Karnay lagtay hain , Dil Kisi or kay liay dharaknay lagta hay..

Rajeev : Yea Tum may Kaise Kashish hay jo Mujhay Apni oor Laa rahi hay, Merie Aankhoon may Dekho, tumhay is Sachaai Nazar aay gi.

Aamna (Raj ki Aankhoon may Daikhtay Hoay) : Kisi ko jaannay kay liay Nazroon may nahi Dil may uterna Parhta hay, May Tumhari Dharkanain suun Sakhti hoon,


Then She Turns Behind and Said To Herself (Yeaaaa.... Yea Mujhay kya ho raha hay, Yea may kya bool rahi hoon, aakhir is insaan may aisa kya hay Jo may us ki aur Khainchii Jaa Rahi Hoon,nahi mujhay khud Per Control Rakhna HO ga),

Rajeev : (Comes From Behind, close to her,Caught her From her hand and turns her) Kya Hoa , Khamosh Kyon Ho gae, Yea Khamooshiaan ab jaisy chubhti hain, May is Ehsaas Ka naam Jaanna Chahta Hoon, Kyon Is Aik Mulaqaat nay humhain aik Dousray kay itna Kareeb ker dia kay hum Khamoosh reh ker bhi aik Dousray Ko Samajh sakhtay hain,

Aamna : Agar is baat ko yaahin khatam ker dia Jay to acha hay,hum Jo ker rahay hain wo bauhat galat hay, Yea Insaan Ko barbaad Ker daita hay, Aap say aap ka Sab Kuch Cheen laita hay.......

Rajeev : Kyaaaa??? Chalo Farz karo kay hum yea sab Bhool jatay hain , aaj kay baad hum shayad kabhi milain bhi naa, per kya ab tum mujhay bhool pao gi, Or Kya main Tumaray Ilawa Kisi or kay karaab jaa paaon ga ..... Nahi.... Dekho , Bhagwan bhi Shayad yea he chahta hay, Hum Aik Dousray kay kita Kareeb hain, KYa Yea Pyar hay...................... Bolo , Kya is he ehsaas ko pyar kehtay hai kay kisi kay liay jaan tak daynay ko jee krta hay.... (Thrn He Cry)Boloooo..agar is he ko pyar kehtay hain tooo Haan, Kerta Hoon may tum say pyar, Tumhay Aik Nazar may dil nay apna bana lia..... I love YOu Aamna .............. I Love YOUUUUUUU .. (this Voise BE heared in all over the Hall of Pin Drop Silence , Everyone is just involve in this Drama Presentation)

Rajeev : Kya Tum Mujh say Pyar Kerti hoo(He Comes more closer to her), Kya tum mujh say pyar kerti hooo...., Haan Ya nahi(More Closer, Just a bit far away from Lips), Haan Ya naaa,...

Aamna (Cry & Said) : Bus Karo ...... Kerti hoon may tum say pyaar , May bh Tum say pyar kerti Hoon ,Shayad mujhay bhi tumhari pehli nazar nay he deewana bana dia.... I LOVE YOU TOoOO..............................[/orange>
(then Both Of Them Hug Each other With Face Full of Tears, They are just Involved in Each Other, Dont Know that they are Presenting a Stage Drama) .....

Every One In Hall Stands and Started TO Clapping , Most Of Public in hall are Crying and having tears in eyez but smiles on faces, and clap a lot For Them...


Ronit : Abay yea kya ho gaya , apnay hero nay to kamal ker dia,

Max : Yea Drama apnay Real dialouges Per Itna Hit Nahi hota jitna ab ho ga.... We Make Our Last year memorable in College....... (and Hug With Ronit 😳)....


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So Guyz this Is Third and Romentic part Of FanFic. If YOu Like So Plzzzzzzzzz Comment...... and Guess For next,

Comming Soon......... 4th PArt(Much More Romance is Waiting For YOu)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Usman !!! How are you ..... I Finally Register my Slf.... Love Your Story For Rajeev & Aamna , I Love Them, Speacially Rajeev.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part again...good gng.... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

nice part again...good gng.... 👏

Thankxx ..... But I miss Som1 , This is Raj-Aamna Love Story , and My Teacher is'nt here, Where are You Zee di(Sweet Teacher),

Hope You Dun mind (I call YOu Teacher), Thats Sweet name , Plzz Dun mind ... Where is YOur Reply ....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nasir01 wrote:
superb
next part ka intezar hai
very nice good job
NEHA
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Lovers Ka Love wrote:
I dont Understand !!! User name : Nasir 01 , and Below YOur Reply NEHA,SOrry For interfaring but i am confused
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my full name is NEHA NASIR
and the 3rd part is very intersting i love it
NEHA
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Posted: 18 years ago
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G8 story so far!!! How romantic!!!!!
Plz continue 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Continue *hUm tUm pAy maRTay hAIn* "UPdated Part 4"


Stage Drama Finished. Rajeev is Grtting Down From Stage , While Aamna's is Giong To her way From Other side Towards Her College's Team. They are Still Watching Each Other But Continue Walking towards Their Places.....

Max(Wid His Tapoori Style and Smile On his Face) : Aray wah merie jaan 😆 , Tu nay to kamaal he ker dia, Aakhir Bana He dia tu nay apnay last year ko "History Of this COllege"

Ronit : Acha Aik baat to bata yaar, yea tujhay ho kya gya tha wahaan ja kr, Kya booool raha tha yaar tu us larki kay saamnay......


(Camera Moves To Aamna And her team, Her madam is tooo Strick 😡 & Rude, Aamna is Looking TOwards Rajeev While Standing Wid her team)

Madam : Aamnaaa ....... Aamna ...... Then she Shouts....... Aamna....,

Aamna : Jeee , Jii madam .

Madam : Yea kya kiya tum nay , Saaray Function ka saatya naas ker dia.. What the hell is this ,

Aamna : Woo madam .. mmm.... may Wooo....

(Then a Girl Came wid her naughty nature , Lovely and Cute face , answer instead of Aamna)

Sneha : Aray madam , May jaanti hoon.... aamna Zuroor apnay Dialouges bhool gae ho gi, Bechaari confuse ho gae ho gi na.... Phir bhi daikhye na , us nay apnai taraf say kitnay achay dialouges bana ker boolay or College ki izzat bacha li .....

Madam : Tum ahan kya ker rahi ho, Tumhay yahaan kis nay bulaya
Sneha : Wo Madam May TO bus aisay he , Aamna ki performance daikhnay aai thi.... chalo chalo ... theak hay, Ab tum loog chaaltay hain madam .... 😆 bye 😆 ...


She makes her madam Fooooool 😆 ,Then she Caught Hand of Aamna and Get Outside From College....(Aray chal na jaldi say)

Aamna : Sneha .... Sneha Ruk, Ruuk Sneha mera hath choor yar, Snehaaaaaaaaa 😡 .............

Sneha : Jaldi chal is say pehlay kay wo Buurhia Dobara aa jay gi 😆
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(Sneha takes Aamna To her car and Make her sit... Then She moves Fastly Drive Towards Their Home)

Sneha(in Car) : Yea Kya keya Tu nay yaar 😡 , aaj agr may waqt pay nahi aati to 😊 ....

Aamna : Thanxxxx Yar 😕 , Aaj tu nay mujhay bacha lia 😕 ...

Sneha : Waisay performance to tu nay kamaal ki dii , waisay wo larka kaun tha 😳 , Or Usay daikh ker tujhay kya ho gaya tha 😆 😃

Aamna : Pata nahi yaar...... Bus us ki aankhoon may main kho gae thi or Khud pay control kum honay laga tha.... Pata nahi kya tha yea...

Suhani : May nay Love at First Side kay baaray may parha to bauhat tha magr dekha aaj ..... Darling YOu are in love wid him....

Aamna : Nahi yaar, Hum do aisay musafir hain jo kuch dair kay liay Station par miltay hain or phir juda ho jatay hain ...... Humaari mulaaqat bhi kuch aise hi thi

Sneha : Merie jaan , Pyar may bauhat taqat hoti hay, Or wausay bhi yea dunya bauhat choti hay, Agr Wo bhi Tujh say Pyar karta ho ga to Tum Doonoo zurur milo gay,


(At the Other side at College)

(Ronit : Abay bata na.. Tu kahan khoya hay yaar....

Rajeev : Mujhay us larki ko dhuundna hay FOran,may us say milna chahta hoon, abhi ... Chalo

((Then They Both ran Towards Garden)

(Max : Kaahan hay Wo , May Canteen ki taraf daikhta hoon, Ronit Tu Doosri taraf jaa,
(After Searchin in whole college, They bcom Tired)

Ronit : Kaahin nahi milee yaar ,

Max : Haan yaar , lagta hay chali gae...... Aray yar Wo Apnay Dialouges bool rahi ho gi, Or Tu Fazool may..

Rajeev(Shouts) aisay kaisay chaali gae, May Pyar katra hoon us say , Or Wo Bhi mujh say pyar karti hay, may nay us ki aankhoon may sachaai parhi hay....

Max: Chal koi baat nahi yaar , Agar tum doonoo aik dousray say pyar kertay ho to kahiin na kahiin zurur milo gay, Love make every thing possible, Just Belive o YOur Love......

Ronit : Aray Rajeev Aaj TO Amar aa Raha hay London say apni studies Puuri ker kay.......

Rajeev : Oh Noooo... may Amar Ko kaisay bhool Sakhta hoon........ I've to go home , Mujhay 3 ghantay may Amar Ko Airport Recive Kernay jaana hay, Tum Loog bhi pauhaunch jaaana.


(On Other side In Car)

Sneha : Aray Aamna Aaj TO Malhaar or Suhaani Aa rahay hain na, We have To Go as early as Possible,

Aamna : Ohhhh nooooo..... Malhaar nay mujhay baataya That, 3 ghantay may flight land keray gi , jaldi say ghar chal , Mama Wait ker rahi hoon gi....


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So Guyz its a bit intresting but next one is more intresting , Entry of Three more Charactors, So Wait and Watch
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