One evening at Hrishiksh: Completed!!!!!! - Page 2

Originally posted by: flygirls

Fab!! I really eager to know whts going to happen!!! Awww, cute scenes...

I'm glad you liked it!!! I'll be completing it today itself. Just a few hrs to go😳

Originally posted by: Jia_444

hahahahahahaha! OMG! It's really very nice! please keep going!

The wait will soon be over😊...............

Originally posted by: r@m$h@

mei batao look i m jokin just dun take seriously age ye hoga kyunki raj ne aamna se pucha kis ke sath flirt karo jis bat ko aamna ne taal diya so is ke age ye ho sakta hai
Raj:aamna..tumhari ankhein
aamna:(Sharmati hui)KYA???
Raj:tumhari aankhein bata rahi hai k tum JAL rai ho
HA HA HA HA HA
plzzz dun take seriously dimagh mei age dialogue aya likh dia!!KAISA LAGA 😉

Great suggestion!!! Why would I mind??? Your suggestions are always welcome😳!!!!

Originally posted by: coolgirl_13

👏 👏 👏 ITS AWESUMMMEE!!!
wow!!! itsh shooo cute 2 read dat.....RA ROXXX!!
plzz jaldi continue karo kyhati! 😳 😳

All I can say is, "Thoda intezaar kiya hai, thoda hai baaki....."😳

Originally posted by: kashishdabest

awwwwwwwwww khyati jaanu luv u sooooooooo much,soooo sweet wah wah kya part hai, i can't wait 2 read the next part, yeh kal kab aayegi, waise yeh tho aamna aur rajeev ko mail karni paregi after its complete thaakay dono red tomato's banjaen 😆 once agen fabulous jaan and sooooooooo sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!! , luv u sooooooooo much 😳

I love you too di!!!!🤗Love you soooo much!!!! Aur dhaan se, Rajeev-Aamna ko ye mail kar diya aur vo tomato ban gaye to hume next serial me Tomatoes ki love story dekhne ko milegi kya????😆😆😆 Vaise it would be interesting!!!! JUST JOKING!!!! Next part to this is on it's way..............

Originally posted by: Adildagr8

😆 LUVED IT 👏 continue soon..... 😳

Thanks...........I'll try that you like the next part to this too!!!

Originally posted by: amasin girl

awsome 😆 👏 cont soon.

Thanks!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Gujji_babe

Can't wait 2 c n hear more of dis happenin 😉

I'm equally excited to write further after such a great response!!!😳

Originally posted by: starbellz_21

ah 😆 😆 😆 , khyati bahot hi badhiya...
kisi aur se flirt karne ke liye bhi rajeev aamna se permission lete hai... 😆
waise me too eager to know ki aakhir rajeev aamna ki aankho mein kya dekhte hai, ofcourse apne aap ke alawa 😉 😆 😆 😆
btw nice imagination !!! 😊 😛 😊

Ab di kisi aur se flirt karne ke liye Rajeev ko Aamna ki permission to required hai he!!!! Nahi le to vo naraaz ho jayegi naa, aur Rajeev can take anything but his sweetheart's naraazgi😉 Kyun??? Sahi kaha naa? Aamna ki aankhon ka raaz bas khulne he wala hai!!!!

Originally posted by: sun_423

khyatu yaar..tum tho totally zabarsast ho.. kya likha hain yaar tumne... Rajeev ke flirt karne ki baat par Aamna ka jalna.. the scene between them was really shoooo shweeett... honey se bhi meeta tha yeh scene... & i could not stop smiling... mujhe bohat zyada hasi aa rahi thi.... sach mein very good.... 👏 ab please jaldi continue karo..kyunke me very eager to know Aamna ke aankhon ko kya hua... 😆

Awwwwwww di..........!!!!!!!! Aapke comments to bas!!!! I'm glad that you liked this FICTIONAL scene between these two REAL LIFE premis.😳

Hey all you Jodi Fans!!! Check out the continuation and do comment!!!!!😳

Originally posted by: krazy_khyati

For all you wonderful jodi fans out there!!! Rajeev-Aamna Hrishikesh to pahunch he chuke hain, imagine ki unki pehli evening kaisi rahi hogi??? Ok so here I present my romantic cum comic interpretation of their first evening………

Rajeev: Aamna aaj mausam kitna acha hai naa!!! Kuch khaas karein?

Aamna: Kya khaas? Don't tell me tum mere liye chaand taaare tod ke lane waale ho!!!

Rajeev: Look Aamna, I can best answer this by singing, "Chaand mera dil, chaandi ho tum, chaand se hai dur, sitaare kahan!!!"

Aamna: Very funny!! Vaise tum kuch khaas karne ki baat kar rahe the!!

Rajeev: Hum dono, media ke stupid questions se dur, yahan itni khoobsurat jagah pe, akele hain, is se khaas kya ho sakta hai?

Aamna: Kuch to sharam karo!!! Vaise mai tumhe yaad dila doon ki tumne abhi tak officially ghutno pe aakar mujhe propose nahi kiya hai!!!

Rajeev: Abhi kiye deta hun. Isme kaun si badi baat hai? Aaaaaachuuuuuuuuuooooooo!!!!!!!

Aamna: Satyanaas!!! Ab cheenk aa gayi!!

Rajeev: To?

Aamna: Arre apshagun ho gaya!! Ab propose karoge to gadbad ho jayegi!!!

Rajeev: Kaisi gadbad? Tum mujhe chod ke Gurpreet ke saath bhag jaogi????

Aamna: Stop it!! Kya ootpataang baatein kar rahe ho?

Rajeev: Acha Aamna!! Mai Shweta ke saath flirt karu ya Priyanka ke saath?

Aamna: Kisi ke saath nahi!!! Filhaal hum humari baatein karein???

Rajeev: Haan!!! Aamna tumhari aankhein………

Aamna: Kya??

Rajeev: Tumhari aankhein………

Aamna: Kya??? Kya hua meri aankhon ko?

Rajeev: Tumhari aankhein………

Aamna: Tumhara tape atak gaya hai kya???

TO BE CONTINUED……………………..

Sochte rahiye Aamna ki aakhon ko kya hua??😆 I'll finish it off tomorrow!!!😳 I hope you liked it!!!!😉

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So the time has come to reveal the secret of Aamna's eyes...............Let's see ye dono kya kar rahe hain!!!!!

Rajeev: Tape ki kya majaal Aamna mai to khud he atak gaya hun!!!

Aamna: Kahaan?? Meri aankhon me??? (Looking romantically at him)

Rajeev: (Coming closer to her with each dialogue) Haan Aamna!!! Mai tumhaari aankhon me atak chuka hun...tumhare pyar me latak chuka hun...aur tumhare dil ki galiyon me bhatak chuka hun!!!!

Aamna: (A bit surprised at his behaviour) Tum theek to ho na Raj?

Rajeev: Aamna!!! Ek baar tum bhi kaho naa..........(Tabhi wahan park ka watchman aa jaata hai)

Watchman: Saab!!!

Rajeev: Haaaiiiin!!! Tumhari aawaaz ko kya ho gaya Aamna?

Aamna: Stupid ye mai nahi vo hai!!!

Rajeev: Lekin hum dono ke beech me ye VO kaun aa gaya darling???

Aamna: Kabhi watchman ka naam suna hai???

Rajeev: Maine to sirf AAMNA ka naam suna hai!!! (Looking naughtily at Aamna)

Watchman: Saab!!! Park band karne ka time ho gaya hai!!! Aapko jaana padega!!!

Rajeev:(To himself) Ise kabaab me haddi ban na zaruri tha kya??? (To the watchman) Tumhari shaadi hui hai?

Watchman: Haan saab!!! Hui hai.

Rajeev: Par meri to nahi hui na yaar!!! Situation ke nazakat ko samajh aur nikal le yahan se!!! Samjha???

Aamna: Tum kya khusar-pusar kar rahe ho watchman se???

Watchman: Kuch nahi memsaab!! Apun chalta hai.

Aamna: Kamaal hai!!! Tumne kya kaha use jo vo chala gaya?

Rajeev: Maine bas itna kaha ki dil ka maamla hai!!! Vo to samajh gaya, jaane tum kab samjhogi!!!!

Aamna: (Very innocently) Mujhe exaclty samajhna kya hai??? Zara elaborate karenge aap??

Rajeev: Aamna!! Bas karo ab bhaav khaana yaar...........bachche ki jaan logi kya???

Aamna: Romeo ban ne chale ho, itne se nakhre nahi seh sakte to jaao........jaakar kisi aur ko dhoondh lo.......I'm not interested!!!

Rajeev: Pakka???

Aamna: Aise kyun pooch rahe ho tum???

Rajeev: Nahi actually mai soch raha tha ki now that you're no more interested to Esha, Misha, Nisha ka raasta clear hai naa???? I mean I can................

Aamna: (Naughtily being angry at him, holds his collar close to her) Agar mere alaawa kisi aur ladki ke baare me baat ki, ya socha bhi, to mai.............

Rajeev: (inturrupting in between)..................vo jo Esha hai naa, uski naak thodi choti hai, Misha thodi moti hai aur Nisha ki aankhein thodi left-right hain!!!! Tum karogi???

Aamna: Kya?

Rajeev: (Very sweetly, like a little innocent kid) Mujhse shaadi???

Aamna: Dekhoongi....sochoongi....kal parso kuch kahungi!!!!

Rajeev: Jo kar doge inkaar, to jee na payenge.............jo kar doge iqraar, to mar he jayenge!!!

Aamna: To phir mai kahun kya???

Rajeev: Kuch mat kaho!!! Bas directly mujhse shaadi kar lo!!!

Aamna blushes. Rajeev picks her up in his arms and they went-off celebrating their love!!!!

To ye thi humaari favourite jodi ki pyaar ki ek lammmmmmmbbbbbiiiiii daastaan ke kuch pal...............DIRECT DIL SE!!!

Hope you all liked it! - *Do comment*

Thanks di!!!! I hope others like it too!!!😳

Originally posted by: krazy_khyati

Thanks di!!!! I hope others like it too!!!😳

Originally posted by: farislove

WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW Khayati, ek dum zabardast story hai yaar 👏 😃 😳 , I love ittttttttttt so much 😃 😳

Waise I am waiting for Rajeev and Aamna to admit that after they return from their trip together 😃 😆 😳

I love the linessssssss u used, and the style, wowwwwwwwwww, very well done Khyati 👏 😃 😳


Regard
Rajeev and Aamna jodi's biggest admirer and supporter forever and ever Zee....