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Posted: 20 years ago
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hello folks!

aap sab log mujhe jaantay hain( i guess😆).....i just thought keh main apni fantasy aap logon keh saath share keroon jo keh SUJAL,KASHISH keh hawalay se mere mann main hay!

i hope u'll like it!

comments r most welcome!!!!!

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Itni taiz raftaari se shayad uss ne kabhi gaari nahin chalaye thee
160 mph kee riftaar se woh apni gaari highway per chala rehaa thaa
kisi bhee waqt kuch bhee ho sakta thaa magar uss waqt uss keh zehan
main kuch bhee na thaa siwaye aik baat keh,aik jazbay keh,aik insaan
keh,,,,woh aik jaani pehchaani kashish kee dorr se khincha chala jaa rehaa thaa
woh jaanta thaa keh dorr ka aik sirra uss keh saath hay tau agla
sirra uss kee mohabbat keh saath bandha huaa hay!!!woh jaanta thaa keh AAJ
agar woh waqt per na pohancha tau woh apna sab kuch kho baithay
gaa,shayad apni jaan bhee!
usse apnay dil kee dharkanon main sirf aik awaz sunayi day rahi thee KASHISH KASHISH KASHISH......kashish jo uss kee mohabbat
hay,deewangi hay,junoon hay,zindagi hay,,,aaj wohi
zindagi uss se door hoti jaarahi thee...woh apni zindagi se doori kaisay bardasht ker sakta thaa..
woh baar baar palat ker pichli seat per behosh parray uss wajood ko daikhta jiss keh honay se Sujal ka
hona qayam hay!..Sujal aur Kashish,naam do hain magar pehchaan aik
hay!!!!jism do hain magar rooh aik hay!!!dil do hain magar dharkan
aik hay!!!Sujal baar baar apni ankhon main aaye paani ko saaf kerta
aur accelator per uss ka dabaa'o barh jaata!!!

Sujal(uss kee awaz band ho jaati hay ronay kee wajah se): Kashish!
main tumhain kuch nahin honay doon gaa!,,,kiay tum yeh nahin janteen
keh jab tak meri sansain chal rahi hain tab tak tumhain kuch nahin
hogaa

Sargoshi: Sujal!

Sujal: Kashish! abhi tum ne mujhe awaz dee hay naa! main jaanta
hoon! tumhain kuch nahin hogaa!,,,bus hum pohanhcnay walay hain
(
yukdum khush hotay huay)

magar jab woh palat ker daikhta hay tau Kashish keh neelay partay
jism ko daikh ker uss keh ander ka darr aur bhee barh jata hay,,,,,,

abhi manzil door thee aur Sujal kee soch kisi aur hee dunya main safr ker rahi thee!!

woh un beetay lamhon main khoya huaa thaa jab uss ne kashish ko pehli baar daikha thaa!!

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Kashish: ACP SUJAL KHANNA!maana keh aap shehr keh bohat hee eemaandaar police officer hain magar kiya kisi ne aap ko yeh nahin bataya keh aatang waadiyon keh ilaqay main AKAILAY ghussna koi aqal mandi nahin hay!!

kashish Sujal keh baazu kee marham patti ker rahi thee kiyon keh Sujal keh bazu ko aik terrorist kee goli laggi thee!

Sujal keh honton per dabbi dabbi see msukaan thee kiyonkeh aaj woh pehli baar

kisi keh lehjay main apnay liye fikr daikh rehaa thaa!

Kashish:ACP sahab! main aap se baat ker rahi hoon,dewaaron se nahin!

Sujal: waisay kiya aap apnay her patient ko issi tarah daant'ti hain?(masoomiyat se poochtay huay)

Kashish(thoray se ghussay main): kiya matlab hay aap kaa?main aap ko daant rahi hoon,aik tau aajkal kee dunya main koi kisi ka bhala na hee

keray tau acha hay!!

woh uss keh baazu per patti bandh chuki hoti hay aur ab injection laga rahi hoti hay jab

Sujal bohat ghaur se usse daikhta hay!!

seedhi maang,ghannay kalay baalon kee lambi see choti banaye huay!!

white overall keh neechay se navy blue color ka dopatta jhank rehaa thaa!

baby pink colour kaa kurta aur navy blue color ka choori daar pehnay huay,

payron main kolahpoori chappal pehnay huay,ankhon main kajal aur

honton per natural color kee lipstick lagaye huay woh ankhon keh rastay dil

main utar janay kee hadd tak haseen lag rahi hoti hay!,,,Sujal uss keh coat

per lagga huaa badge daikhta hay!!

Sujal: Excuse me Dr.Kashish Mehra! kiya main aap se pooch sakta hoon keh

mujhe kab tak yahan per rehna hogaa?(bilkul bachon walay style main bolay

huay)

Kashish: ACP sahab! jab tak mujeh yeh yaqeen nahin ho jata keh aap aindah

aisee bewaqoofi nahin kerain gay tab tak aap yaheen rehain gay!!

Kashish leaves!

Sujal: tab tau main aisee bewaqoofi her roz keroon gaa!

Kashish kamray keh darwzay se jhaankti huee : kuch kaha aap ne?

Sujal: ji,,nahin bus kuch nahin!

He lies down and goes to sleep!!!

Kashish kuch dayr ba'ad kamray main aati hay aur Sujal ko sota daikh ker uss

keh paas baith jaati hay

Kashish: kitni masoomiyat hay iss keh chehray per! aisa lagta hay jaisay barso'n se safr ker rehaa hay aur ab aaker usse apni thakan mittanay ka moqah mila hay!!


woh Sujal ko bus diakhay jaarahi hoti hay,, kisi anjanay ehsaas keh saath,

kisi anjanay rishtay kee kashish usse Sujal keh paas baithnay per majboor ker rahi thee...

Sujal keh maathay per uss keh kalay baal bikhray huay thay,left baazu per

patti banchi huee thee aur right bazu per drip laggi huee thee!sufaid rang

kee chadar orhay woh so rehaa thaa aur Kashish ko lag rehaa tha keh jaisay koi

farishta so rehaa ho!yuk dum Sujal ne karwat badli tau kashish ne ghabra ker

apna barha huaa haath rok liya! aur uth ker chali gayee!

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to be continued!

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KinshukLuvsDina thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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yar sum1 help i don get u u ave written in a bit confusin way 😳

m confused 😕

mehraal thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hehehehehehe

what didn't u get?

i guess i wrote it in urdu that's y!

but i am alwaysthere to clear things up!

KinshukLuvsDina thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hmm..... lol didnt got even a word 😳

don mind........ nai yar its not abt urdu m a paki n i can understand urdu

quite welll............but tumhari dunno y samajh nai aaye 😕

waise fanx 4 being soo polite n understandin u ppl tolerate me too much

but ma sis uffff she gets hyperrrr at me sumtimes 😳

but naiii i'll once again goo over it shaid samajh aagaye

n if not den i'll let ya know 😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
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its nice but the 1st half..... i dont get it
KinshukLuvsDina thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hmm now got ya yaar sorry to disturb u before

but da story is soo cute n its different toooo acp n dr. 😆😆😆kool

waise mei bhi phd ker rehi hoon on rajeev lol rite breathing_irony 😉😃

KinshukLuvsDina thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
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sangi same ere 😊help needed mehraal 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow ...gud work 👏
mehraal thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#9

okz ji

me back!

heheheh

dina! friends dun tolerate each other,they live for each other!

well the first half talks about PRESENT!,,when SUjal is driving rashly coz h ewants to reach sumwhere ASAP!and kashish is on thebakc seat,,,,,second half talks about their first meeting where Sujal gets shot bya terrorist and kashish is in that area too with a mdical camp!..hope the things r clearer now! and as far as my lang goes .i'll try to use simpler words but the thing is that my plot needs stronger emotions and quite comprehensive explanation of them!

i'll post the next part tonite,theni think u'll get me more clearer!

its basically a journey of self-realization where Sujal travels back n forth between present n past!

so folks!

hope i am clear now😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
#10

Sheela_misspk@Hotmail.com😆yeh hai kya koi samja bhi doo agar app ko samaj aye to maire id per batadena Sheela_misspk@Hotmail.com okay i am sheela rajeev ki fan no 1😃

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