AM/FF~Tumse Hi~ pg15 Ch8 Countdown begins - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
wow sam, i just caught up, and its wonderful! so sad and touching! but way to much suspence! hahah i really wanna know what happend!!!!!! so please continue sooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: sp79

Hey sam,

Thanx for the pm😊 Okay loved ur double bill thoda chota tha but next part better be a bigger one okay.hehe oh di...will try!😆

So Chaya still hasnt Sudhrofied😡 no 😆thankfully Mayuri has, yeah! i didn't chane mayuri's character like ekta did 😃warna when Adi comes back who wants another round of Saas-bahu trouble yaar,lool😆 poor Adi will get too busy sorting it out which will eat into AM moments and we soooo dont want that right😆nope!😃😆

But seriously Loved that Mayuri and Mets are bonding well and what has Om done??? Cant wait to find out. thoda aur intezaar karo didi😉sabre ka phal meetha hota hai😉😆

👏

Shwetha

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Posted: 17 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Robin_M

wow sam, i just caught up, and its wonderful! so sad and touching! but way to much suspence! hahah i really wanna know what happend!!!!!! so please continue sooon!

lool yep yep...i'll continue as soon as possible😳glad to hear you liked it😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
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Originally posted by: *angel94*

Hi 😊
I just caught up with ur FF its wonderful! 👏 👏 👏 thankyou😳
Adi's dead!!!!!!! 😡 Hope to see him back soon.😊 yes you'll see him back very soon😳
Loved the Mayuri Maithlli bonding. (But I still hate her 😆 ) hehe i' hate her too😃
I guess Chaya will never change, she will always remain the same .... yup yup! lmao😆obnoxiou* .... evil.. umm.. I don't why but I always at a loss of words for her cause "Kisi Zabaon Mein Bhi Woh Labaz Hi Nahi
Ki Jeene Mein Woh Hai Kya Tumhein Mein Bata Sakun" 😆haha true true😆
Loved the Flashback specially when Adi said "toad-face sand"😆lool 😆

Wonder what Om has done? you'll find out soon😉
Please try to update sooner. wil try to😳
Anjali 😊 btw...nice name lool😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#55

here's ch. 6!😆its because i'm free today😆 i have no coursework to hand in till next week, which i have already finished😛 (im so proud of myself)😆

ok ok...i'll stop with my life stories nad just post the part😆 jeez..im turning more and more like kasturi these days😕😆

Chapter 5

Everyone was silenced as the music played through the halls. Adi held out his hand to maithili…

"dance?"

She smiled and took his hand.

They swayed to the music and he looked on at her…

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Tum se hi din hota hai
Surmaiye shaam aati hai
Tumse hi

Tumse hi

Twirling her round, he hugged her

Har ghadi saans aati hai
Zindagi kehlati hai
Tumse hi

Tumse hi

She smiled as he lovingly hugged her

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Lifting her chin with his finger, he stared at her

Aankhon mein ankhne teri
Bahoon mein baahein teri
Mera na mujhe mein kuch raha

hua kya

Baaton mein baatein teri
Raatein saugatein teri
Kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya
hua kya

Turning her round, his hand rested on her soft cheek

Mein kahin bhi jata hoon
Tumse hi mil jata hoon
Tumse hi

Tumse hi

His nose touched hers and she smiled at this cute gesture

Shoor mein khamoshi hai
Thodi se Behoshi hai
Tum se hi

Tum se hi

Continuing with the dance, his hand brushed her strands of thick black hair

Aadha sa wada kabhi
Aadhe se zyada kabhi
Jee chahe karlu is trah

wafa ka

Chode na chute kabhi
Tode na tute kabhi
Jo dhaaga tumse jud gaya

wafa ka

Parting from her slightly, but pulling her back into his arms, he smiled at her

Mein Tera sharmaya hoon
Jo bhi mein ban paya hoon
Tumse hi

Tumse hi

Once again he twirled her round

Raste miljate hai
Manzile miljati hai
Tumse hi

Tumse hi

Na hai yeh pana
Na Khona hi hai
Tera Na hona jane
Kyun hona hi hai

Looking at her lovingly, he kissed her forehead gently… "I love you Maithili"

"…joy and sorrow are inseparable… together they come and when one sits alone with you… remember that the other is asleep upon your bed."

- Kahlil Gibran

~~~

"Shivaniiii!!!! Shivani!!!" shouts were heard from a tall man in the Singhania Mansion.

"Shivani!!!jaldi aao!!!" the shouts continued as the man opened drawer after drawer in what looked like his bedroom.

Clothes scattered across the room, pens lying lidless on the desk and cupboards open…

"Shivani!!!!"

The room door flung open…

"kya hai!!!"

PS...Sid, i bet you liked this part😉 you just loved shivani's intro didn't you😆

Edited by tsamhita - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
SAM ki bachi!! 😡............. 😆 😆
Kya yaar you know how much I "like" her....and Singhania mansion?? You have my complete attention now.

Loved the first part of course 😳 👏 👏 Totally makes up for who came in the second part. 😆
Update soon yaar. this has become very interesting and plz a longer update next time. 😳
Edited by sidsk - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
Hi di!
Loved the flashback. And the song "Tum Se Hi" suits them so well. 😳
Ughhhh!!! 😡 You had to introduce Shivani.😡 🤢
I have a MAJOR disliking for her. 🤢
And Singhania Mansion???? I Hope he hasn't lost his memory or something and thinks that he is Raunak or someone else and loves Shivani.

Please update soon this FF's getting really interesting.

Anjali
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
wow sammi awesummm 👏 👏 👏
loved song wow i cud actually imagine the dance happeneing 😳
cnt wait
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
No PM again!😡...Next tym,I'll give u nice eggs and tamatars😡😆...

Koi baat nahin,humne tumhe maaf kiya 😎...

Beautiful chapter,Sammie😳..The beginning was just soo😍😍😍...but the ending bit was🤔...I mean "phir Shivan?"😕..**Arghghgh**😡...Raunak se zyaada,u're obsessed with her😆😆...

Pleeeeeeeeeeeejjjjjjj cont.soon!!😳😳


Luv,
Amina😳...
Edited by ~*~A~*~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
sam im glad you upated, but kya yaar, so short!?! ok fine i wont complain, at least you updated! is this the same shivangi from the show!?! i hope the guy calling her is adi!!!!! ohh im so excited! please continue soon!

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