'Haqeeqat': MADI ff,p.30(utd 10/05) END

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Giah

@Giah

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Posted: 18 years ago

#161

absolutely fantastic.. written with well tohught and laid out aswell.... i wonder who was on the phone.... continue soon 😊 😊

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72968

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Posted: 18 years ago

#162

amazing!!! i sill have goosebumps up my arms...wonder how the next part will be... 😳 😃 great update 😳

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shazeena

@angelic shaz

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Posted: 18 years ago

#163

omg wow wat can i say 👏 👏
i still have goosebumps after reading it
cnt wait 2 hear more
continue soon 😃

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Pretz

@Pretz

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Posted: 18 years ago

#164

WOW dat is beautiful. 👏 👏 👏
U have the most wonderful imagination
Even without the details u were able to convey the passion btw them so well... ave u though about writing a book or short stories? I bet u cud make gr8 sales on them 😉

Eagerly waiting for the next part
Cheers

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 18 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes
dii...

simply wonderful..

reserved for my comments once i re read the part~!

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Thanks sweetie... I'm glad u enjoyed. @ the applause, *bows humbly*

Cheers,

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 18 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: Robin_M
wow
that was incredible! amazing yaar! i have goosebumps! lol just dying for more! really wanna see adi and mets face each other after their night of passion! but it was sooo beautifully written, perfect!
Goosebumps? lol... Yeah, wonder how they will react when they see each other after that encounter😳 Thank you so much.
im not sure ive asked you before, but are you a writter? cuz you seriously write like an author!

Writer? You're kidding hun!😆 No... You need to go back and re-read, they're so many mistakes I bet!... But your words are priceless, *bows humbly*
you have to update soon ok! at least dont make us wait too long!

Hmm... okes... koshish karne waalon ki haar nahin hoti?😆

Cheers,

dc

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Robin

@Robin_M

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Posted: 18 years ago

#167

^^^^ lol hun your too funny! and i ment every word of it! your writting rocks!!!!!!!!!! and i have re-read your updates many times and have yet to find any mistakes! sooooo, dont sell yourself short!

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72968

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Posted: 18 years ago

#168

YOU ROCK!!! THSI FF ROCKS!!! its acctually a relief...since they're not showing Adi on tv right now 😡 😕
please continue soon
waiting patiently 😳

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 18 years ago

#169

Hey guys, sorry for the delay. Just letting you guys know I'm still here, and I hope you're all still with me. I will update tomorrow or the day after for sure. Thanks for being patient with me!

Cheers,