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Posted: 18 years ago

k soooo finallly i read ur whole fic(matlab abhi tak jitna uve wrote)....nd i must say its more dan de word awesome.....i mean its fantabulous👏 de way uve wrote adi-metz chem its just gr8!😳cont sooon....nd yeah congo 4 ur new house😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks so much for all your patience and comments
first of all i'd like to congratulate everybody...Adi's back!!! in KGGK and he LOVES MAITHILI!!!!
i just hope he dosen't turn out to be another Suyeash Mehra just standing there admiring Maithili and Supporting her...i wish he confesses his love to Maithili and she runs into his arms 😍 😍 😍
lol and if that does not happen in Kggk then it'll happen in my fanfic!
Ok i'll stop my nonsence and start with the chapter...

i have to fix things... her chain of thoughts were broken by Adi's frustrated groans as he failed to open the door. She looked at him lovingly...he looked cute when he was angry. her hands moved towards him and on to his hands...
"adi..you can't..."
"yes..i can't..you've made me into a bloody looser! even Pranay's better off than me..." i hate you!!!...but i can't stop loveing you..
She lowered her eyes and took her hands away. Tears trickled down her face and she didn't bother to wipe them. .Didn't he know it hurt her to...didn't he know she still cared about him...
her trail of thoughts were once again broken but this time by the door swinging open and a very "un-friendly" head popping out from behind it
"Aaadi...." Maithili glared at the "unwanted" presence of her new found "arch enemy"...Barkha...
"adi, come out...your all wet and here's a dry shirt for you." Barkha handed him a shirt an dadi smiled at her. Maithili burned in flames when she saw adi and barkha together...she wanted adi back and she decided that!

"i don't see the point in celebrating Barkha's birthday!!!" she muttered to tannu as she frustratedly paced through the hallway
"i mean who the hell is she!!!!"
" i...you know..."
"no!!! don't say anything tannu!! don't 'you' start praising her!!"
"but..."
"NO!!!"

"Get dressed!!!" a thrid voice boomed from the corridoor.
"janki dadi...i.."
"look maihtili i see your not too happy with barkha but she is the daughter of this house just like you are and she gets treated the same way as you!...plus i don't see why you have to get jealouse!!! you left Adi yourself!!"
saying so janki left and tannu followed
maithili felt angry and sad she felt ashamed for being jealouse but it was a feeling she had no controll of it what so ever. Janki dadi's words were true...
Maithili went to her room to get dressed

she shuffled her way through the crowd looking for god-knows who!
i deffinately DON'T want to see janki dadi..not adi...not barkha...not mayuri mamma...not pranay...where the hell i tannu!!!
she felt guilty of leaving adi when he needed her now Barkha had him...the thought sunk right through to her soul where it stung...
she needed to get Adi back but not just pounce on him..she needed to do it slowly...for the "effect"
She would avoid him throughout the party and everyone else...she didn't want to even be in the party! she only came because of what janki dadi said
But it was inevitable! she was going to see adi because he was standing on the stage wiht a mike!

"...so all you beautiful couples out there come on to the dance floor and dance!" she heard his voice..she closed her eyes the flashes of him an dher dancing on the day their engagement "would have" happened and she hated to speak in the past tence but before she could moan about herself anymore a hand gripped her shoulder...
"want to dance.." she turned to look at pranay...
she felt guilty again...she was using him an dshe hated that.
"um...i..." but he was aldready guiding her to the dance floor...

a soft beat started playing, the music lifted her soul but the lyrics soon started piercing through her heart

Har Ghadi Badal Rahe Hai Roop Zindagi
Chaav Hai Kahhi Kahhi Hai Dhoop Zidnagi
Har Pal Yahan
Jee Bhar Jiyo
Jo Hai Sama
Kal Ho Na Ho


Pranay and maihtili swayed to the music...he twirled her round and she landed closer to him...
he looked at her but her eyes searched for adi...

Har Ghadi Badal Raha Hai Roop Zindagi
Chaav Hai Kahhi Hai Dhoop Zidnagi
Har Pal Yahan
Jee Bhar Jiyo Jo Hai Sama
Kal Ho Na Ho

she found him! but he was dancing with Barkha...almost as if God heard her wish, Pranay turned her round and she found herself in Adi's arms.

Chaahe Jo Tumhe Poore Dil Se
Milta Hai Woh Mushkil Se
Aisa Jo Koi Kahin Hai
Bas Vahi Sabse Hasin Hai
Us Haath Ko Tum Thaam Lo
Woh Meherbaan Kal Ho Na Ho

She looked at him longingly and he looked down at her. A slight smile entwined her lips but he showed no responce

Har Pal Yahan
Jee Bhar Jiyo Jo Hai Sama
Kal Ho Na Ho


His hand gripped her waist tighted and her hands moved up to surround his neck

Palko Ke Leke Saaye
Paas Koi Jo Aaye
Lakh Sambhalo Paagal Dil Ko
Dil Dhadke Hi Jaaye
Par Sochlo Is Pal Hai Jo
Woh Dastan Kal Ho Na Ho
Har Pal Yahan
Jee Bhar Jiyo Jo Hai Sama
Kal Ho Na Ho

He distanced himself from her and twirled her round

Har Pal Yahan
Jee Bhar Jiyo Jo Hai Sama
Kal Ho Na Ho


She was back in Pranay's arms and looked upon him sadly.

everyone clapped as the song ended. Adi kissed Barkha on the cheek and she clung onto him. MAithili couldn't take it anymore and she ran upstairs to her room.

Barkha and adi smiled at each other...
"well done!!"
"the whole bathroom idea..did it work???"
"yes...she said sorry and cried and i think she's realised.."
"she's realised she can't let you go adi... she loves you far too much..."
"yes but will she say anything...i mean 3 months is almost up...just got 2 weeks left!!"
"wait till Sunday...thats the last part of our plan!"
"OUR plan???"
"buddhu!!!ok..i had to plan the finishing touches...alright!! i mean if it were just 'your' plan than it would have ended here!!"
"i and see her in pain!!"
"i know...but just some time longer"

Adi sighed and smiled a sad smile.

MAithili sat in her room removing her jewellery she cried a lot during that...
she felt helpless for the first time in life... when Pranay was with mallishka she felt like this but when Pranay shouted at her she fired up...it just wasn't the same with Adi..why was she not feeling angry?? why did she feel sad?? i guess i just love adi too much...
adn if he's happy wiht out me and happy wiht barkha then...then...
she couldn't finish...she burst out crying again...
i have to go away from you Adi..

"adi..right now she'll be thinking of leaving you because she wants you to be happy...she thinks you'll be better off wiht me"
"..but i'm not!!! god she is sooo......"
"Adi!! thats just how she is!! she is sacrifycin gher love!!!...what we wnat is for her to get angry and CONFESS her love!!"
"when will she do it??? when she's married to PRANAY!!!"
" don't worry!! she will on SUNDAY!!!"
Adi smiled and held barkha's hand..
"thank's barkha...thak you soooo much"
Barkha smiled and held his shoulder..."go upstairs and rest adi..."
"by the way...happy birthday Barkha..."
barkha smiled at him as he accended the stairs

Adi sat in his bed thinkin gof how he upset maithili..all her tears brought tears in his eyes...god i love you so much!
he closed his eyes and remembered her from the party tonight...
she wore a simple white and red churidaar with bangles and light make-up, her hair was cliped with two thick strands falling on either sides of her face.
he loved hte way she pushed them back as they fell on her face.

maithili sat in bed with tears in her eyes...remembering adi...he looked handsome tonight..black suited him so much...she remembered dancing with him and more tears flooded her eyes

music playes in the background...

Tum Ho Gham Ko Chupaye
Main Hoon Sar Ko Jhukaye
Tum Bhi Chup Ho
Main Bho Chup Hoon
Kaun Kise Samjhaye
Ab Dooriyan Itni Hain To
Milna Yahan Kal Ho Naa Ho
Ab Dooriyan Itni Hain To
Milna Yahan Kal Ho Naa Ho

Maithili remembers Adi and how she hugged him..how she kissed him how she left him...tears drip from her eyes and she burries her head in her lap

Sach Hai Ke Dil To Dukha Hai
Hamne Magar Socha Hai
Dil Ko Hai Gham Kyon
Aankh Hai Nam Kyon
Hona Hi Tha Jo Hua Hai
Us Baat Ko Jaane Bhi Do
Jiska Nishaan Kal Ho Naa Ho
Har Pal Yahan Je Bhar Jiyo
Jo Hai Sama Kal Ho Naa Ho


Adi sits in bed in thoughts of Maithili...
don't worry maithili...just wait till Sunday...you and me will meet... he smiles and lays down
Edited by tsamhita - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow thts a gr8 part!! 👏 👏
i feel so sad for matheli 😭
plz continue soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

awwwwww wht a lovely part😳....feel sad for metz....do cont soon!

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Posted: 18 years ago
I just caught up on a million parts!..gosh..you added my fav!..BARKHA!..😃..& please, if she's gonna get a "him"..can it please please please be Neil😳..Love the part!..Naughty Naught Adi & Barkha😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg! such an awesome part!!!! i think this one of your best parts yet 👏 👏 and the way u put the song in was just brilliant! 👏 . poor maitheli 😭 don't worry maitheli, adi is coming to get you 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww dat was realli gd
jus luved it!!
👏 👏
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
can't wait to read the next part!! 😆 😆 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
poor maithilli 😭
please update the next part also 😳 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
poor maithilli 😭
please update the next part also 😳 👏

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