RoNakshi OS: Imperfectly Perfect [Sonakshi's Accident] - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Can I please hug you? pls pls pls? you have got magic in your hand my dear and i'm not joking. i was hoping someone would write a story on sonakshi's accident but not the way it's playing in the show, something different where rohit would change his mind and stick to her. and my goodness did you fulfill my wish🤗


what a writing i'm in awe! You just made my morning❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akshata2010

Even if in fiction, I am so glad to see Rohit gather his shi* together. 😳

Thanks for this one Mushfika ❤️


I also wish Rohit could get his shit together in the show, the way he did in this story. Divorce is really not a solution over here....he gave in too easily. we all understand the turmoil he went through when nishi and veena was blackmailing him but he could have easily come up with something later when he calmed down a bit. it's a shame how makers showed him so weak.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Rohit won my heart in this OS by all means. What a fantastic and thorough portrayal of every single emotions Rohit felt from the time he saw Sonakshi on the road till the end when he was determined to not let her out of his sight, let alone life...I don't rememebr how many times my heart skipped beats while scrolling down this os and read on....I just didn't want it to end...i wish it went on and on....but i guess all good things has to come to an end...


my heart did some weird things when rohit kissed her forehead before the nurses took her to the OT. That scene spoke so many things for me. it was not just a kiss. it was a promise. a promise to protect her from all the evil. it was a promise of love that he will be showering from now onward. What a scene my dear! Take a bow!👏👏👏


-Priyanshi❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anokhi01


I also wish Rohit could get his shit together in the show, the way he did in this story. Divorce is really not a solution over here....he gave in too easily. we all understand the turmoil he went through when nishi and veena was blackmailing him but he could have easily come up with something later when he calmed down a bit. it's a shame how makers showed him so weak.


Exactly. there could have been so many alternatives. he was never weak. i don't know why cvs had to show him like this all of a sudden. and what breaks my heart is that even the accident wouldn't make him change his mind. he would just let her go. 💔

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: JuniorAssistant


Exactly. there could have been so many alternatives. he was never weak. i don't know why cvs had to show him like this all of a sudden. and what breaks my heart is that even the accident wouldn't make him change his mind. he would just let her go. 💔


I just hope rohit becomes cold towards all the sippy members, especialy veena. He lack of emotions and response towards them will probably make veena realize that kicking sonakshi out of his life was the worst decision she has made in her life.


You know how veena said by divorcing sonakshi there's a chance to mend his relationship with his mom? well, the makers better show that Rohit doesn't have any intention to do so because he doen't care about anything anymore.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anokhi01


I just hope rohit becomes cold towards all the sippy members, especialy veena. He lack of emotions and response towards them will probably make veena realize that kicking sonakshi out of his life was the worst decision she has made in her life.


You know how veena said by divorcing sonakshi there's a chance to mend his relationship with his mom? well, the makers better show that Rohit doesn't have any intention to do so because he doen't care about anything anymore.


tumhare moo mein ghee shakkar, i hope so too

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Posted: 5 years ago
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“Sona...how do you say ‘hmm’?”, rohit tapped her cheeks as he tried to keep her awake

“Hmm...mmm”, mumbled Sonakshi.

“That’s my girl. Now keep saying that for me”

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Hang in there sweetheart. It’s going to be alright,I promise. I won’t let anything happen to you.


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Stay. the F*ck. away. from. my Sona!


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“You’re not going anywhere. You’re staying right here, with me. I promise let anything come between us ever again”,

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To hell with divorce. To hell with Nishi Sippy Kapoor. And to hell his family. For He couldn’t care any less!


These lines i mentioned above are like a balm to my aching heart Mushfika. I just read this story again and my heart breaks thinking that this is not how rohit was with sonakshi in the episode...i wish i soo so soo wish he stuck to his wife rather than his family. this is one of best stories on ronakshi in this forum. can you please continue it?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Writer ji aap suddenly itna meherban kaise ho gaye hamare upar. two OSes within 24 hours😲

Let me do my personal favorite happy dance 🥳


The transition of rohit's emotions from shock, to numb to a loving husband to a professional doctor - SO smooth. I told you this before too that I love the way you pen down emotions in your story. but today the dialogues portrayed those emotions much more impact-fully. Esp the way Rohit told his family to back off, I was like


I loveddd how sonakshi was resisting to rohit and then gave in....it was so aptly portrayed...she could be mad at him but she also needed the solace of her husband because the whole divorce thing came as a shock to her. I loved how rohit kept calming her down with his soothing words.


As always, it was amazing! Loved it❤️


🤣 don't ask yaar. I went to sleep that night but I couldn't stop thinking about possible RoNakshi encounter on the accident scene. everything I thought about that night, I penned it down the next day. yeah i could be a little crazy sometimes 🤣


Thank you so much once again for the beautiful comment🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Ravi, what part of ‘drive fast’ do you not understand? If I don’t get to the hospital in the next 15 minute, I swear to god I’m gonna burn your ass on the f*cking stove


🤣🤣🤣🤣 this dialogue killed me 🤣 poor ravi, i could imagine his round face all scrunched up in fear


LMAO🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blackwind

Must say u r such a versatile writer... every description is done so aptly be it the emotional turmoil,the medical detailing,the aguish .......everything👏


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You're a sweetheart, Thank you so much🤗

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