RoNakshi OS- Will You Be My Girlfriend? - Page 2

Originally posted by: KhayalonKiMalik

Current scenario is pretty interesting if you’re taking suggestions 😆

And since long there are no oneshots on the forum😆

If you have any suggestions/ ideas please DM me. I'll probably elaborate on it and turn it into a one-shot. I only write simple, cute stuff. More than romance, I like to write a conversation between two people, who are already in love.

Any ideas are welcome.

Love,

Mayu

Super like, so beautifully written!! Can't we send this to KHKT producers 🤔..? We want to see Rohit and Sona like this only,in love, with each other. We want Rohit to confess his feelings slowly and gradually, he should miss sona's in his life now. He should realise PAST is past and doesn't have any existence in present and future and Why this Raima is coming out from coma so soon😒

Originally posted by: shalzy1234

Super like, so beautifully written!! Can't we send this to KHKT producers 🤔..? We want to see Rohit and Sona like this only,in love, with each other. We want Rohit to confess his feelings slowly and gradually, he should miss sona's in his life now. He should realise PAST is past and doesn't have any existence in present and future and Why this Raima is coming out from coma so soon😒

Thank you!

Sure you can send. I really want to see this phase, the sexual angst, tension and slow realization about love. I guess he is already way deep in love but is not admitting. Well Raima coming is perfect right now. This will give him the much needed push to understand what his feelings are, what does he exactly want.

Love,

Mayu

Aaaah - with every story, you get a little better. Honestly, I get surprised every time.

What I absolutely loved about this OS was the hesitancy with which Sonakshi reacted in the beginning. That's only natural, especially after seeing the way Rohit was acting with Raima. And the fact that she accepted it and willingly distanced herself from them - that speaks volumes about her character. I think you've shown that so well in this OS!

And Rohit - what do I even say. I love how he brings the clarity that Sonakshi clearly needs atm. He truly needs to absolve himself of that guilt - once he does that, he's going to be able to love Sonakshi with all his heart. I'm glad you added that bit in - I hope we get to see that in the show itself too!

And lastly, my favourite part of this OS...

Rohit: “Don’t you think I am more lively, more enthusiastic and happier Sona?”
... She made him happy, she made him enjoy life and she made it joyful.

Amazingly written. I absolutely loved it! Thank you so much for the PM love 🤗 Please do keep writing :)

Originally posted by: basket_101

Aaaah - with every story, you get a little better. Honestly, I get surprised every time.

Blush blush ☺️☺️ Thanks so much again:)

What I absolutely loved about this OS was the hesitancy with which Sonakshi reacted in the beginning. That's only natural, especially after seeing the way Rohit was acting with Raima. And the fact that she accepted it and willingly distanced herself from them - that speaks volumes about her character. I think you've shown that so well in this OS!

Yes, this is what I will be expecting. Sona really needing that assurance that he has clearly moved on from Raima and does love Sona. Sona is an emotional girl, but she is also a strong woman who knows how to fight her battles. Yes, she will be heartbroken in the process but she will eventually walk away with her head held high.

And Rohit - what do I even say. I love how he brings the clarity that Sonakshi clearly needs atm. He truly needs to absolve himself of that guilt - once he does that, he's going to be able to love Sonakshi with all his heart. I'm glad you added that bit in - I hope we get to see that in the show itself too!

Yes, he needs to move on, if he wants Sona in his life and make it clear to her. He has to explain her things, his feelings and I am sure that phase will come soon.

And lastly, my favourite part of this OS...

Rohit: “Don’t you think I am more lively, more enthusiastic and happier Sona?”
... She made him happy, she made him enjoy life and she made it joyful.

That's what she has done to him, make him happier and joyful. I know you are a sucker for one-liners. 😆

Amazingly written. I absolutely loved it! Thank you so much for the PM love 🤗 Please do keep writing :)

Thanks once again. Your welcome. Keep them coming, I will.

Love,

Mayu