Anugun OS/TS part 3 uploaded

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Anugun SS:


I am going to continue from the Hospital scenes, because weneed some Anugun romance and maybe an outburst from Anu and since all of us arefed up with the current track.

The story follows from when GC gets GG to meet Anu.

GC along with Yug and Ankit gets GG to the ICU room to meet Anu, BP, and Akriti stops them from Meeting Anu.

GC: BadeBhaiya why are you Stopping her from meeting Anu, she is the one who saved your Anu, if she would not have come on time, we would have lost Anu forever. And,GG has right to be with Anubhav he is her husband you will never understand this but they both love each other, and you always taught us never to separate two people in love because that is the purest bond anyone can have, and you are only going against your teachings?

BP: (fuming) Golu, you remember my all teachings then I also taught you to stand against wrong and stand by the righteousnessand now you supporting GG is supporting wrongness, Akriti is Anu’s wife not this woman who claims that she is.

Akriti: Look at Her Bade papa she so shameless that she is still standing here and listening to all of this, you (pointing fingers at GG) I told you before also get away from us and you are shameless that you still standing here. I am warning you last time get away from my husband or else, I will not spare you.

GG stands firm with her decision to meet Anubhav and replies to Akriti: I will not go without meeting Anuhbav I told that before too and now also I am telling you now too, you want to taunt me, go ahead but I will not leave without meeting Anu and you will not be able to stop me.

RKC (going to call Akriti this from now on coz she deserves it), she gets incredibly angry and slaps GG fuming in anger and looks at GG with her Big- Big eyes which does not scare me anymore, frankly, speaking she looks like a ghost with those eyes (comment if you also feel the same)

Sorry went away from the topic, let us get back to it. Everyone is shocked by her reaction expect BP. Meanwhile, the nurse comes and try to diffuse the situation and ask the family members to meet him as he is awake, everyone goes in expect GG, who is standing out still in shocked as to what happened?

Anubhav looks at everyone and his smiles fade when he sees that the person, he is looking for is not amongst them, his sadness is seen by GC, Yug, and Ankit but they stand there with their heads down, BP goes near Anu and sit on the stool next to him.

BP: Anu beta, how are you? Is it your shoulder wound not paining much? We were so scared for you, when Golu told us about you getting shot, everyone in the house is so worried about you especially your mom and Badi Maa. Anu was not answering just sitting ideally because he was still in his thoughts about GG. BP shakes Anu several times to get him out of his trance. He breaks his chain o thoughts and looks at BP who Questions him about what he is thinking.

Anu: Nothing I was just reliving what had happened in past few days, and nothing more than that. I was just thanking God about saving my life (and thanking someone else too…. the lifeline of my life)and small Smile Creep on his face.

Anu looks at GC face and GC intuitively know what he wants to Ask but he cannot answer in front of BP and Akriti because he didn’t want to create more drama and wanted him to rest. GC looks at the door and back at Anu who understand that whoever is he looking for is outside waiting and not gone yet. Anu Smiles internally and take a breath of relief. GC looks at others and goes out to plan to let Anugun meet each other but saving them from BP and RKC. They excused themselves and went out and RKC looks at them and wants to go behind them but surprisingly Chandru stops her and makes her stay with him.(You surprised as to why chandru stops akriti so let us go to back a bit, when Anu is looking at GC and when GC looks at the door, Chandru understands that he is talking about GG, so when he sees Anu’s eyes and sees the peace in his eyes, he decided to help them silently. Anyway, let us get back to the present) GC and Gang goes out and see GG, who sees them, gets up from the bench, and goes near them and Ankit lends his hand for support to GG who ask GC about Anu

GG: Round chachu, how’s Anu, Is he fine? Nothing to worry about, right?

GC: He is fine, and he is awake and is asking for you, sowe need to make plan for you two to meet but without BP and Akriti but how? He looks at Yug, Ankit and GG and they all are thinking, as to how to make it possible they hear a voice “I can take bade bhaiya and Akriti with me for sometimes to get changed and eat something meanwhile GG can meet Anu” theyall look at the voice and they are surprised to see Chandru standing behind them.

GC: But bhaiya, how will you be able to be convinced BadeBhaiya you have seen that he does not even move from the corridor, And Akriti she will get very curious, you have seen how she behave when GG is even in the hospital corridor.

Chandru: Do not worry I will think of something but becareful, not to let them see you, I will call you when we are leaving and then be in touch for further details.

Yug, Ankit, and CG nods their head and smile a bit looking at GG’s face.

GG: Moon name wale Uncle, thank you so much for helping me, but you hate me still allowing me to meet your son? Why?

Chandru: I don’t hate you in fact I am very grateful to you for doing everything to save Anu and have seen my son how he was searching for you in the room and I have seen you begging to be with him, and taking all the insults from BP and Akriti,I may not be able to support you openly but for my son’s happiness I will always stand by you. He rises his hand and blesses GG and goes from there.

This is my first attempt I will write more in the next chapter, I wanted it to be an OS but I guess I exceed more then I thought so lets me make it a TS.

Will appreciate all the comments and suggestion from anyone and even complaints since I have not proofread it, wrote it on my night shift because I was not able to take the anger of past few episodes and didn’t want to remove on my patients.




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Posted: 3 years ago
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I've read today's WU early in the morn...n i felt sooo

N end of the day, i read your version of today's episode, n i'm 😊

You added honey to the karwa chakriti episode.

You wrote Chandru's loyalty shift quite beautifully. He stayed in character. He was outright sincere that he can't go against his elder brother, but is moved by Gungun's perseverance to ensure Anubhav's safety n he thawed on seeing the longing in his son.

Its a very well done attempt for a first try. keep it up!

I'll look forward for the next part.

Big big love to you

Mehr

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I love this Chandru! I wish we get a similar scene in show pretty soon❤️

Lovely OS.🤗 Tag me when you update😳

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Originally posted by: smriti25

I love this Chandru! I wish we get a similar scene in show pretty soon❤️

Lovely OS.🤗 Tag me when you update😳

Done deal i will i am half way on the chapter will be done and will post it

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wow thank moon wale uncle.

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Part two:

Anugun OS/TS




Part Two:

Chandru goes back in the room, and sees that Anu is trying to ignore whenever Akriti tries to talk to Anu. Chandru looks at his son and realize where his happiness is he looks at his son and realized that his happiness lies outside to the one who standing on outside of the door.

Chandru looks at his brother and says: “Bhaiya I think we should let him rest, and even we should get something to eat and get freshen up and then come back when he is up.”

Akriti insists that she wants to stay with here, but BP convinced her that maybe we should let him rest and we will come back once he is up. Akriti Unwillingly gives a nod to BP and they go out of the room.

GC gang and GG hide seeing them coming out of the room aschandru walks out and gives a thumbs up to GG and she looks at him and smiles. GC gang wait for a minute or two until to make sure that the path is clear before they let GG go in the room and meet Anubhav. Yug and Ankit waits outside near the entrance of the hospital while Rickshaw wala bhaiya and GC waits outside in the corridor to make sure GG path is clear.

GC: GG you can go in and meet Anu, but you don't have much time remember that We will give your signal when we see a danger coming and make sure you run from here and go and hide back where we were hiding before so that they do not see you.

GG nodes at everyone and goes in the room , She steps in and see Anubhav sleeping, she says a small prayer and walks towards Anubhav, she tiptop’s as to not wake him up. She sits beside Anubhav on the bed and caress his hair. Anu open eyes slowly and sees GG sitting next to him. He is so happy to see her and his happiness is just elected to see her, he tries to get up and sit upright when GG stops him and makes him lie down again and she holds his hand and sits there looking at him so lovingly.

GG: I am so happy to see you I can't describe how I spelled when they told me that you did not have much time to live. Please do not scare me again and please do not do any stupidity again. I'm sorry you got in trouble because of me and you got kidnapped because of me if I would have opened the door that day nothing of this sort would have happen I am sorry that I did not believe in our relationship you said you needed time and I should have given you that you said you were ready to fight the whole world whole family for me and I should have stood by you but I didn't do any of those things.

Anu looks at her crying face and he wipes her tears and says: please do not cry, I'm OK look it's your love and your blessings that has brought me back from death, the nurse told me about you going to the temple and how you donated blood to save my life. when I was kidnapped all I was thinking was about you all I wanted to do was be with you in Mumbai, sorry our vacation got spoiled because of me, I should have picked up GC phone that day and I should have try to know what they were trying to tell me, I should have known that they were going to come to Mumbai I should have done everything right that day instead I chose to switch off my phone and be with you.

They sit like these holding hands for a long time until GG speaks again: anyway, I don't have much time GC, Yug Bhaiya and Ankit are watching the door to make sure BP doesn’t come back I just wanted to spend some time with you but BP was not allowing me to come and meet you so we had to make this plan.

GG tries to lighten the mood a bit, she gets up from the chair and sit next to Anu’s head and kisses him slowly as to not hurt his shoulder. Anu has a huge smile on his face (like I have right now while writing this) he closes his eyes to savor this moment.

GG: so how does it feel to be kidnapped? That day in the cafe you told me to ask my father and I couldn't so I thought this time I will ask you because you really got kidnapped? So how does that feel to be kidnapped? I'm sure it was fun you know I feel they treated you well for few days at least, right?

Anu remembers the cafes day when they talked how he feels when someone get kidnapped. “Frankly speaking it is no fun to be kidnapped, there were moments when I thought of giving up because I could not take it anymore but your face and the way you were fighting for me outside, I knew I just can't give up I just can't stop loving you and I have to fight for it. when the terrorist ask me the formula to make the rocket, when they threaten me that they will kill you if I don't cooperate with them I got scared but when I saw you on the news that no fighting for me I knew I had to talk to you and so I called you I'm sorry I asked you to go away from here but I just wanted to make sure that you were safe I just don't want you to get in trouble because of me but you were asked as you were before but you never give up you did not go back so how should I have given up?” I even had a nightmare that you got shot when I woke up from the nightmare, I was so confused I wanted to give up but your face your love your strength the movements we spend in Mumbai or reminded me that I must fight for you I have to stay alive for you. Promise me you'll never leave me again promise me you will stand by me when I fight for our love with the family, family is important to me and I know the value of family but you are my family please I beg you to be with me I can't live without you please do not go away from here.

GG looks at Anubhav and says: Fine I will stand by you, I will never leave you and now the whole world knows that you are my husband and I am your wife, but how will you be able it by yourself, have you given a thought, I know half of the family members ae still on Akriti’s side and legally she is your wife, how will you try to make that go away? I know this is not going to be easy for you and for me but we will have to find a middle ground for everything I love you and I will always love you.

Yug Bhaiya gives a signal to GC and GC immediately comes in and says: GG, you need to go hide now BP and Akriti are on their way, they are in the parking lot, you will need to leave again,

Anu looks confused as to why she has to leave and ask GC: But Chachu, why does GG has to leave, she is my wife, and she has right to be here”

He holds onto to GG hand refusing to leave. GC looks at GG and Anu and remembers that Anu doesn’t know whatever happened outside of the room and in Lucknow. He Looks at Anu and says: I will explain you once she hides and before Akriti comes here. GG go and hide in our hideout place fast, and do not come out until we tell you too.

GG kisses Anubhav hand and run from there but stop at the door before giving a last look and smile at Anu. Yug Bhaiya, and Ankit comes in as soon as they see GG getting out of the room and they tell everything to Anubhav about what happened in Lucknow, how family is supporting Akriti and when GG called Dean mam and told about you being missing, Akriti thought you guys were enjoying here in Mumbai, how Ankit and Yug Bhaiya convenience BP to let them come to Mumbai to search for you, and all the scenes she created in Hospital to humiliate GG, and how BP had asked GG to leave the hospital and not come back, how GG travelled to go to the temple to pray for you and how they were searching for blood and when GG tried to Donate Akriti stopped her but was unsuccessful. How BP and Akriti stopped GG from meeting you even after going on her knees in front of Akriti to let her meet you but she stood her stance and didn’t allow her to meet you.

Hearing all this Anuhhav anger rose to a point of no return and was getting so angry at himself and was about to do something stupid when BP, Akriti and Chandru returned and seeing BP and Akriti he recalled everything that GC told him and was about to Shout at Akriti, when BP spoke “ Beta Anu, everything okay? You look disturbed and not too well, I think we should all leave and have you get some rest, okay?”

“BP, said Anubhav I am okay, but I need to clear few things out with you so that furthermore we don’t have any problems, firstly I was kidnapped because I left the hotel at night not due to GG, but because of your so dotting daughter-in-law, and would you care to ask her the reason of me leaving? Or would you (looking at Akriti) like me to tell BP about what you said in the room, because I will and I have no fear about anything, Secondly GG is my wife, Akriti and I married due to family pressure but we do not share any relation, I married GG in the temple, when I was missing at my own Baraat, whatever may be the reason She is my wife.”

Sorry exceeded more than needed will continue on too next chapter. Do let me know how this one turned out?

Edited by Suhani2 - 3 years ago
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Loved it!🤗 I am happy that Anubhav knows how Akriti stopped GG from donating blood. Chalo he has cleared it to BP what he wants! ❤️

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Part 3:

Shifts to Kulshrestha House where Anubhav is going to have a huge monologue and will reveal the truth about his wedding with GG and has twist in it.

Anubhav along with his family returns home and at the same time Garima Bua along with Akriti’s father and GG also enters, Anu and GG look at each other’s and GG has a very surprised looked as she sees Anubhav has a blank face and is not displaying any emotion on his face, she looks at GC who assures her not to take any tension, she will know everything in some times. All the K house ladies comes to welcome Anu and does the Arti and all, Anu holds GG hands and takes her to the living area and everyone else follows them, Akriti seeing Anu holding GG hands starts he daily dose which we all are feed up of, but promise won’t be long “What the hell are you doing here (she looks at GG)? I warned you in hospital itself not to be near my husband, and still shamelessly you are here in my house, Get out of here". She Screams with anger.

Before GG can answer, Anubhav slightly tighten their hold and GG looks at him, and he nods at her in No and she stays Quiet, “I asked her, Bua, and your father to come here as I want to tell everyone something important?” Everyone looks at him and he sits down along with GG as he is unable to stand for very long time and makes GG sit down too as she is hurt. “The pre wedding party, it wasn’t GG who spiked my drink and had anything to do with the insults, it was the handy work of Dr Maya and your daughter-in-law’s. Akriti along with Dr Maya planned to separate Me and GG, Dr Mays’s to behave nice with us and having the pre-wedding party and everything was all their plan.” Everyone looks Shocked except GC, Yug and Ankit, “She met Dr Maya outside and told Dr Maya that her and I love each other, and the family is pressuring me to get married to GG. On the day of the wedding, I got a call for RV saying that he I also getting married to GG, so I called Dr Riddesh who denied everything and Me along with Dr Riddesh went to the temple where RV was marrying GG forcefully, to save her I married her in the temple. Akriti and I do not share any relation because I love GG and GG loves me.”

“If what you are saying is true, then why did GG agree to marry RV?” Asked Sargam. “Because RV was blackmailing her, for marrying her otherwise he would have destroyed, he has a pic of me and GG marrying and if she didn’t agree then he would have destroyed, so to save me she said Yes, and on the day, she tried to commit suicide because she didn’t want to marry RV as she was already married to me.”

GG looks at Anu because she hasn’t told him about blackmailing part, then how did he come to know about it? (There Is a flashback story), in Mumbai when Akriti came to know the truth she asked the ultimatum and GG knows how much I love my family that she was ready to sacrifice our love for It, he tells everything about what Akriti told in the room about being her Ghulam, and how he left the room and how RV kidnapped him for the money and gave him to the terrorist and all the fiasco that happened when GG was trying to donate blood and everything. GG along with all the family members was shocked as how can someone stoop so low and Akriti knew her time was up and she blurts out the whole truth, “ yes, I did all this because Anubhav is my obsession and I could not take it that he was going t marry such a girl who is so ill-mannered, I love him and how can someone just come and take him away from, GG always took what was mine, always my mother left me for this girl and rich family, GG took away Anubhav from so I recorded the conversation between GG and Anuhbav and then met Dr Maya and told her a cooked story and that Dumb Dr really believed me so she showed fake concern and love towards GG, and in the party it was mine, who insulted you all and you are so foolish that you guys believed me and accepted the proposal and got me married to the man I always wanted to, I really thought that it will be difficult for me, but Anubhav you being a scientist of the year, believed me so easily and got ready to marry me, and didn’t trust your fiancée.”

THUD!!!!!!! A slap landed on her face which was given by Garima Bua; “How dare you? I didn’t leave your father for the money, I left him because he was having an affair with his on sister-in-law, you don’t believe methen ask your father itself.” Akriti looks at her father and sees his head lowered down.

“Akriti, Akriti, Akriti you really though I was that naïve,I got to know the truth, before I left for Mumbai, I wanted to tell this to the family after I told GG about it, but we didn’t get any chance” Akriti looks at him surprised. I also got our marriage annulled and you already signed the papers, and GG and I also registered our marriage so technically, our marriage is annulled, and GG is my legal wife.”

Akriti looks shocked including the family who has been getting bouncer on bouncer from both Akriti and Anubhav. “Remember I told you that you must sign some paperwork our visa for Switzerland, and you fool signed it in excited in front of the whole family without even reading anything.” Said Anubhav, GC, Yug and Ankit smiled as they knew everything beforehand ,the whole family cursed Akriti, and BP lowered his head and folded his hand and asked Akriti’s father, to take her away from their sight, Akriti pack her bag and Bye, bye Alvida to her.

BP looked at GG, and ask for his forgiveness as he behaved rude with her and she forgave them, as she was not angry with them, she looked at Anubhav and asked “how did you know about the blackmailing? I haven’t even told bua about it?”

Flash back time: when he was in hospital, he got a call from Lucknow police and told them the truth why RV was involved in kidnapping for money and also that he had blackmailed GG, asking for money and how he wanted t marry GG for her wealth and Dr Maya knowing about the wedding of his and GG, Anubhav calls Dr Maya and threatens her and she also opens her mouth and tell everything to Anubhav about her and Akriti, He feels so ashamed of himself how he behaved the day he went to return the ring and also the phone convo when he says that he hates her and GG was right the day he comes to know the truth, he will be sorry. He tells everything to GG, Yug, and Ankit about it.

He explains his family that GG is his wife and has already accepted her whole heartedly and request them to please consider her as daughter-in-law and they all feel sorry and ashamed about their behavior towards her, and she forgives everyone. BP declares GG as his Daughter-in-law and blesses both and they decide to have a small wedding with close relatives. Everyone gets so happy, and GG and Anubhav hug each other and he gives her a forehead kiss and the GC original gang teases them, they smile and say I love you to each other simultaneously and he again kisses her forehead.

The End.

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Lovely! 🤗 After seeing the pathetic upcoming storyline this soothed my heart! ❤️

Do write more👍🏼

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