KaYu FF: Hit and Miss Part 20 Page 16 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3
That night was first step of storm which was going to thrash in Kali's life again. Nandu's efforts were fruitful and Devri opened his eyes after long wait.. "Brother wake up ... Wake up brother.. look at me.." Nandu screamed in happiness. Jamuna was shocked to see Devri opening up his eyes but same time relived as Devri didnt respond to Nandu's shout. Nandu run nearby and brought local doctor to check Devri. He confirmed that Devri is not fully recovered yet. But its first step to his recovery. Nandu was happy but Jamuna was not. She feared what storm is going to land in Kali's life now.

Kali was restless. Soon Devri opened up his eyes, Naina and Pavitra both strated crying in her room. Window suddenly barged open and strong wind flow started coming in. "What's all this. What's new trouble now" she was afraid. She was all trying helplessly sometime go calm down both girls and some time to close window. But her efforts were baseless. Manjiri rushed to her room hearing Naina and Pavitra both crying. Manjiri picked up Naina and Kali took Pavitra. They both tried to calm down little girls but wind didn't stop flowing in from open window and both girls kept crying. Yug rushed to Kali's room this time. He realized the whole scene and quickly went to shut down window. He managed to close window somehow. Manjiri had sigh of relief. But Kali was worried. "Whats this new storm now" Kali said sitting helplessly on bed. "Don't worry Kali everything is fine" Manjiri said trying to console Kali. "Nope Manji ma, i dont why but I am feeling scared at this moment. As if some new storm is going to land in my and my daughters life" Kali replied in worried tone. Manjiri tried to assure Kali nothing will go wrong. Yug said in heart looking at closed window "No new storm Kali. I won't allow any new difficulty to step in your life"

After 5 years,

It was new start with new day. Sun showered all his rays on asleep Kali Naina and Pavitra on same bed. Kali woke up and thanked Ramji for this beautiful life with her daughters. She slowly moved Naina and Pavitra who was glitched to her from both side. "Naina Pavitra get up. It's good to wake up early in the morning". Kali said getting up from bed. "Mumma, please let me sleep. It's my school vacation now. Why to getup early." Naina gave up excuse cuddling Pavitra in her arm and both girl slept again cuddling each other. "Naina it's your result day and we need to go your school. Come on get up" Kali reminded Naina. "Mumma please .. Let us sleep some time" Naina was in no mood to listen. "Ok. I have to go to temple. But by the time I return back you both get ready" Kali warned them in her sweet tone. "Ok mumma" Naina said covering her and Pavitra in quilt again. Kali smiled looking at them and she recalled her and Gauri's bond in childhood. She wished if everything is still same today but that was not the case.

Leela was doing aarti. Kali and Manjiri came and informed Leela they are going to temple. Leela reminded Kali that she had to go Naina's school to attend the function. Kali assured Leela she will be back on time. Leela was happy today as Naina ranked first in her class and she is going to be rewarded. She knew its all Kali's upbringing which had made Naina so much different from real mother Gauri. Leela still cursed herself for the day she played game with Kali and brought Gauri in Yug's life. She wished if Kali still changes her decision and come back to Yug but with so much time it was big impossible.

After some time Naina woke up. Being elder sister she took care of Pavitra like mother. She made sure Pavitra gets her brush and bath done in Kali's absence. After getting her sister ready, she got herself ready too.

"Mumma.. mumma" Naina came out shouting all the way. "What happened" Gauri came and ask her. "Where is my mumma." Naina asked. "She had gone to temple. " Leela came and informed. "She is not back yet. Who will make my plates now" Naina asked. "Come Naina, I will do it for you." Gauri said. "No!! I only like my mumma combing my hair" Naina was rude to Gauri. "It's ok. She will be here in some time. Then she will comb your hair" Leela said. "Where is Yug? Is he not ready yet" Leela asked. "He is there in room playing with Pavitra" Gauri replied. Leela took Naina away with her. "Both mother and daughter have made my life hell. Naina is stuck with Kali and Yug is with Pavitra" Gauri thought to herself.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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So devri is back.
Good to read the sisters bonding unlike the show .
U changed the title Darshu. ,
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Rupa I am hating the way they portray children in serial... They are stubborn at a times but not cruel as they are trying to depict...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: darshana23

Rupa I am hating the way they portray children in serial... They are stubborn at a times but not cruel as they are trying to depict...

Exactly Darshana. I hate the way they show torturing of kids .. Kids will be innocent and may be stubborn not like this harming the other. 😡
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Posted: 8 years ago
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And one more thing they have ruined is Kali Naina bond to show Pavitra is as good as Kali... And Naina is like Gauri...
They are trying to prove that good upbringing doesn't matter... All that matters is whose blood you are...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 4

Kali and Manjiri came back from temple. "Handle her now. She can't stay away a minute without you." Leela said to Kali looking at Naina

Gauri came to her room and saw Yug is busy in playing with Pavitra. "Yug your tea" Gauri said. "Keep there" Yug said without looking at Gauri. He was busy playing with Pavitra again. "Yug you have to get ready. We have to go to Naina's school for function" Gauri was trying to distract Yug. "Kali has not returned from temple yet. So there is still time for it" Yug replied busy playing with Pavitra. Gauri lost her cool due to ignorance by Yug. She pulled Pavitra and asked her to go out. "Gauri is this way to talk to kid" Yug scolded. "Then is this way to talk to your wife Yug" Gauri replied back.

Till this time their voice reached in hall. Leela was irked. "They started again. No single day in house is peaceful." Leela said annoyingly. Pavitra came down crying.

"Don't start the topic again Gauri" Yug was angry. "Why I should not start. Tell me. Tell me about single day you pay attention to me. Tell me about single day where you treat me as your wife. I have been just given tag of being your wife. Just a tag of being daughter in law of this family. But you and your family still treat like Kali is everything for you people and I am no one." Gauri took her heart out. "Gauri why we discuss that thing again and again. I have told you..." Yug replied. "What you have told me Yug. You need time. How much... tell me... 7 years is that not long enough. Whom you are trying to make fool. Me or yourself. It's fact that you don't want to accept me. You still think about Kaali" Gauri accused Yug. "Yes... " Yug shouted in higher tone. "I still think about Kali. I still care for Kali. I still...I still love Kali. No matter what Gauri no one can take that place in my heart. Not for seven months, seven years and not for seven lifetimes" Yug said firmly and left the room more angrily. Little he knew Kali was standing outside of his room over hearing their conversation.

Gauri was devasted. Kali came inside to console her. "Don't touch me" Gauri shouted. "Are you happy now? Are you happy to see me this way? Why are you here now. Want to see how I m breaking down" Gauri took her anger out. "You are taking me wrong Gauri. I promised you that Yug will be yours. And I did same." Kali tried to explain. "Really! You really wanted Yug to be mine. Then why don't you simply go away from our life kaali." Gauri fired back. "Gauri you know very well I cant live without Naina" Kali said helplessly . "Don't give excuse of Naina to hide your real motive. You are using my daughter to snatch away everything from me. My daughter don't treat me as mother. My husband doesn't treat me as wife. I am just for namesake in this house. Everyone just wants you" Gauri continued her rant. "Gauri you are taking me wrong" Kali tried to explain. "Is it? Then prove I am wrong. Will you able to give a respect as mother in my daughter's eyes. Will you able to give me my rights in husband's life. Will you able to give me my real status as daughter in law of this house. Tell me Kaali. Will you do it? Everytime you tell me I am your sister then tell me will you do it for me?" Gauri put up big question mark in front of kali. "I promise. I will try my best to give all happiness in your life and I know what I need to do" Kali was firm this time.

Yug was standing in balcony all upset. He wished he really would have ended his life when he broke his marriage with Kali. But it was too late now to think what could have not happened. He had faced consequences of doing things without able to judge what is right and what is wrong. And today whatever pain he was going through it was all his mistakes and no one else. "What did you tell to Gauri, Yug?" Kali's angry tone distracted Yug. He turned to face Kali. "What happened Kali?" Yug was puzzled. " What happened? One more time you broke my trust Yug. One more time you gave space to everyone to put finger on me." Kali started and Yug kept looking at her puzzled. "I have told you not to repeat things again to the cost of our friendship. But you don't want to listen to me" Kali shouted. "Whats wrong I have done Kali" Yug was still puzzled. "What did you tell Gauri. that you dont want to accept her as wife as you..." Kali left sentence incomplete and Yug understood through her eyes. "Kali i dont want to hurt you. but this is the truth and it will remain till end of my life" Yug said calmly. "What truth. What useless things you are talking about" kali was angry. "It's not useless things" Yug shouted this time. He held Kali tightly by her shoulder and lock her near wall. "Do you ever understand how I feel when every moment I see you in front of my eyes knowing you cant be mine. Do you ever understand how I feel when you keep rejecting my love. Do you ever understand how I had live my life without you Kali. Do you ever understand how much I love you." Yug said so much passionately and Kali lost all zeal to defend back. "But i know Kali now.. love is not all about having someone with you all the time... Love is about how you still be with someone without being his or hers. Love is about giving Kali and not having something. And you know what this love you have taught me Kali" Yug said trying to be little soft with her. "I know you won't be come back. But my love is still waiting for you Kali" Yug said looking in Kali's eyes. Kali was choked up. She felt like his words are throwing out all those dust which was spread over there relation for these years. It was emotional moment for Yug as well. Finally those words came to his mouth which he never told her fearing he will lose her friendship. They both kept looking at each other. Kali feared for a moment realizing something pulling her towards him again. "Yug leave me" Kali said it in shaken words. Yug didn't wish to force her. He released his hold on her and turned to leave. He walked few steps and turned again. "You don't want to come back to me, that's your right. And I will keep loving you its my right. I am not forcing you to do something against your wish. You also don't force me either!" Yug left from there leaving so many puzzles in front of Kali.
Edited by darshana23 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Gauri will never change Her insecurities never end.
Good Yug opened his heart out.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks Rupa... There is lot more coming in terms of KaYu and Kali Naina as well...😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: darshana23

Thanks Rupa... There is lot more coming in terms of KaYu and Kali Naina as well...😛

Darshu r u planning to get kayu closer here?😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Beautiful...

Darshu r u planning to get kayu closer here?😛

😆 u know me very well

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