KaYu Drabble- Kuch toh Hai

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys, a small drbble on Klai leaving Chaudhary House in Yug's POV😊

hope you like it😳

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She left... Without turning and looking at me once...how could she leave like this? Why was she so harsh?

"So were you Yug..." My conscience said to me... I looked at the door that separated us. I didn't have the courage to walk out of the house and see if she had left or not. I went to my room, and looked at the mirror. The reflection of my defeated expression reminded me of her smiling face. Her one cute smile and all would fall in its place. The ring, te sign of childhood's innocent relation, hung from the chandelier, swinging with the rhythm of the air. I held it, but didn't feel her presence in it like I usually did. All of a sudden everything was like a empty cave, dark and silent. The only noise I heard was flashbacks, her memories.

I didn't stop her...why? Did she really do the right thing? I know I didn't deserve her innocent love because I didn't trust her then...our relation couldn't be named, she said it was a marriage, but no one else except PishiMaa and my heart agreed with her. But at least I could have convinced her to stay back...convinced her that I trust her... Then why didn't I do so? Why was this emptiness playing a weird game with me...

I wanted her... She had filled this house with her light, but as soon as she stepped out if it, the house seemed like a room that was closed for months... Was the house filled with emptiness or was it my heart...

There was something that was missing... That something was the girl I love like crazy, Kali...

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An edit on yesterday's edit as a compensation to the bad story you just read😆



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darshana23 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really awesomely written... I love that banner which is created.. ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: darshana23

Really awesomely written... I love that banner which is created.. ❤️


thanks Darshana😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really Cute na..U Happy Right ??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks Mithi😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mr.Bhola_Bhala

Really Cute na..U Happy Right ??


Mr. Bhola_Bhala, who is the authr of the drabble? you or i? shouldn't I be asking Mithi whther she liked the drabble or not?😕😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lol @Shibu BTW can you please explain to me what some of these terms mean on IF 😆 I'm fairly new so I have no i idea: OS, FF,SS, and even drabble 😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Shibu...


Mr. Bhola_Bhala, who is the authr of the drabble? you or i? shouldn't I be asking Mithi whether she liked the drabble or not?😕😆


Did I sound I am the writer of the Drabble..Nope..I never said so..I was just trying to agree with Mithi opinion..
Your stories are just awesome..I really like them..appreciated ur work dear..no hard feelings please..:)


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mr.Bhola_Bhala


Did I sound I am the writer of the Drabble..Nope..I never said so..I was just trying to agree with Mithi opinion..
Your stories are just awesome..I really like them..appreciated ur work dear..no hard feelings please..:)



@bold,well, you did sound as if you were claiming the story yours a bit
@red, thanks😳
N hard feelings from my side too😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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the picha 👏...n the drabble as well

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