For some reason i had very high expectations from today's episode though it did not happen but still i would like to share how i imagined the episode
have a look and bolna kaun sa better tha
the CV's version or mine😆
The nurse came running out 'docter patient sink kar raha hain'
everyone sitting in the corridor stood up! Dadi rushed to the nurse
'kya hua?''
'dekhiye patient ki halat bohut bigar chuki hai'' the docter comes and they both get in
everyone sees through the glass
Yug was getting on edge even the oxygen was not able to help him.
Daadi stood still seeing her grandson in such pain and the reason was there standing just beside the door still not able to stand straight...not a single line of guilt was there on her face and there she was the girl she tortured, insulted, crying her heart out holding her mangalsutra. The difference was so visible yet she avoided it.
'Gauri jao vaatsavitrti ki pooja karogi tum'' said daadi holding the drunk gauri
manjhri maa was taken aback hearing those words
'apka dimaag kharab hogeya hain?? Andhi hogeyi hain ap??'' she couldn't hold her anger any longer
'gauri thik se khaari bhi nahi ho pa rahi hain aur vo pooja karegi?? Kis hasiyaad se ??''
Daadi looked at her with angry eyes
'yug ki patni yeh pooja karegi aur vo hi apni paati ko maut ki moo se nikale gi''
daadi turned a deaf year to her words and again started telling gauri to do the puja
then the docter came out
'dekhhi patient ki halat bigar rahi hain hum mein operation karna parega..ap iss form par sign kar dijiye taaki patient ko agar kuch bhi ho tou vo hospital ki zimmedari nahi hain''
'kuch bhi ho matlaab??'' asked kaali
yeh operation risky hain unki bachne ke chance 50-50 hain''
kaali's heart skipped a beat
yug her yug he is in pain he is suffering how could she let that happen??
'daadi'' she rushed to her 'hum apke per parte hain hum mein yeh puja kare dijiye''
'naahi'' she was still strong as rock and that is what broke all of kaali's tolerance
'thik hain ap rahi yeh apne zid ghamand aur joot ke saath hum ne bohut izaad de di apko apki faisle ko ab aur nahi apki jhoot aur ijazaad se zyaada hummari liye zarrori hain yug ki zindagi ...ajtak hum nei bohut sabut aur gava dhundne ki koshish ki apne sachayi ko saabit karne kiliye likin aj humari ramji humari gava bunenge aur humari bhakti humari sabut yeh pooja saari duniya ko batayi gi ki ek patni ki shaakti kyaa hai!!'' saying that she goes away from there
Manjhri couldn't be more proud.
Kaali arrives at the temple and meets the purohit pandit.
'panditji hum ei vaatsavitri ki pooja karini hain'' and with that she start her pooja
The jaap goes on and kaali keeps praying...on the other hand yug's operation starts
kaali is saying all the verses nonstop even the pandit is amazed seeing her dedication.
In the hospital daadi is pacing up and down the corridor looking all worried and praying.
'chinta ho rahi hain??'' asks manjhari 'maat kijiye kaali apne paati ko zaroor bacha legi dukh tou sirf iss baat ka hain ki ramji ne apke paap o ki saaza yug ko de di''
'aisa maat bolo'' daadi bursts out crying
'rokar kya fayeeda apko kya lagta hain yeh sirf ek hadsa tha?? Yeh ramji ka sanket tha kuch aur na saahi tou unki keher se daariye''
daadi seats down on the chair. Manjhri leaves from there
Daadi keeps staring ...all the memories coming back to her..yug getting hurt every now and then eversince she did that thing and today he is battling with death..what if he loses?
her whole body shivers
she looks at gauri standing there all drunk least bothered about her husband
and then there was kaali praying without any pause
what was more important the society or her grandson?
the docter comes out
daadi stands up looking at him with all the hopes
'mera laalla??'' her voice was trembling.
Kaali is saying the verses without any pause she is all sweaty and tired
Someone puts a hand on her shoulder...she opens her eyes and sees Manjhri maa, she is all teary.
Kaali gets up..her heart in her mouth
'manjhri maa yug''
Manjhri maa smiles and hugs her 'teri prarthana kaam ayi''
kaali rushes to the hospital
yug was fine...her yug was fine ..
she was running towards his room and was almost near the door when daadi stands infront of her
'daadi yug'' her voice was shaking..
daadi was looking into her eyes
for the first time kaali felt that there was something different about her look.
'yug se milne ka haak sirf uske ardhangani ka hain''
kaali go disappointed all the hope she had shattered but within a second it returned...
daadi opened the door of yug's room
'aur vo tum ho...yug ke paas jaane ka haaq agar ab kisiko hai tou vo sirf tum..yug ki ardhangani''
kaali sighed ...tear rolling down her cheeks
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZjrSyb4YGyQ (please click the link)
kaali walks in the room
the whole room is quite the only noise is the beeping of the machines
there was her love lying on the bed unconscious
she sits near him and takes his hand in her palm and caresses it with her other hand, then gently gives a deep kiss on it.
slowly he moves.
Yug slowly opens his eyes.
kaali gasps.
'hum doctor ko bulake laatei hain'
but he holds her hand tightly...kaali looks at the grip
'hum yaha rahenge?''
yug blinks
Kaali sucks in her lips
she gently brings his hand closer to her face and rests her face on it.
'jaab se humari hsaadi huye hai tabse hum ajnabee ban geye yug pura samay hum mein apko vishwaas dilanei mein hi beet geya... apna pyaar ki pariksha dete dete thak geye hum yug...
tears roll down her face
he keeps staring at her
ap ka pyaar humarei liye ibadaaat se kaam nahi hain jitna hum ramji ko mante hain utna hi apke pyaar ko tou phir voh biswaas apko kyun nahi hai?? '
she looks directly into his eyes and says in a trembling voice
'jaab ap humare zindagi mein aye the tab apne hum mein pyaar paar vishwaas karna sikhaya aur andh bishwaas ko mere zindagi se mitaya aj hum apki jaga khare hain aur apse kehte hain humare ankhon mein dekhiye yug apko pyaar kea lava aur kuch nahi dikhega''
yug stares at her and takes away his hand from her grip.
then taps her cheek and then his chest.
she smiles and puts her head on his chest and puts her hand around his waist...yug places his hand on her head ...
kaali looks at him
yug removes his oxygen mask
i...i...love..you...kaali
kaali closes her eyes and burst into tears
she places the mask back and kisses his cheek and then goes back to is cheek
I love you too yug
tears drop down but this time from yug's eyes.
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