HeartBreaker [KaYu OS]

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950842

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sabihaa.
I've been reading (devouring) your writing, and all I can do is just sigh in awe. Your writing is so clear and concise; I can absolutely feel every emotion while I read this.
The storyline itself is au, and yet in a way it still works as something that could happen in the show - if of course half the leads weren't such idiots of course.

Thank you for such a wonderful OS, and all the best for your exams!

OMFG. Appreciation from a professional writer herself. Thanks a tonnn!! I genuinely loved your story, believe me, my work can nowhere match up to that. Thanks for the exam wishes!! Still have some to go. As for wishing this for the show, I guess it is already on track now (:

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950842

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Katori
This was lovely. The way you portrayed Yug's feelings and his pain for Kaali's rejection were very good.

Thanks a tonnn!! Cannot wait for you to update your story. Came on the forum anticipating that today. Please give me a chance to compliment your story tooo!! (:

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950842

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik
Aww this was so sad:(:( But beautiful nonetheless :)

Thanks a tonnn. Heartbreak is a part of the process. Better to be hurt than left at the altar where he'd have to face shame and be compelled to marry Gauri instead (:

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950842

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: BubliBag
heartbreaking os

Thanks a tonnn!! (:

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Mithi373

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

As usual, I fell in love with the story as soon as I started to read it!!! So well written! So cute and sad! Really was a heartbreaker! But I loveee it!!!

Edited by Mithi373 - 9 years ago

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950842

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Mithi373
As usual, I fell in love with the story as soon as I started to read it!!! So well written! So cute and sad! Really was a heartbreaker! But I loveee it!!!

Thank You. I know its depressing but I guess heartbreak is neccessary sometimes to understand the real value of the person. Was hoping to write a Part 2 on this but nvm.