I'd Say Yes Anyways [ KaYu OS]

950842 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#1
Basically, Kali lives with Manjhi Maa now. Yug lives in an apartment by himself because this is not set in Mithila, but Mumbai. Manjari took Kali there for a new start, and Kali is now pursuing her postgrad degree in media and communications and Yug wanted to expand his event management business. Now its high time for them to take one of the most important decisions of their life, what it is is revealed through the course of this short story. Again, writing on my phone so please disregard any editing errors. Dont forget to like, comment and criticize my work, I am open to creative discussion on my piece.

-Tannu

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------


Yug arrived at Manjhi Maa and Kali's apartment, pulling the spare key out from underneath the carpet. Now or never, now or never.

He entered. Even though he had intimated Manjhi Maa of his plan and she had assured him it was okay, isn't this still just a little creepy? he asked himself. Sneaking into their house?

He stopped.

No, it isn't. It's not creepy at all, not when you're doing something like this for her. He thought back to himself, before continuing on his journey - to Kali's kitchen.

He cooked up her favourite food, the way he knew she liked them. Once he finished, he plated the food for two people, and covered it with tin foil. Smiling proudly at his work, he sat on the couch, awaiting her arrival.

She should be here any second now.

He could hardly contain his excitement.

But as time passed, his excitement deflated and she wasn't there yet. Checking his watch, he frowned.

Somehow, he'd ended up lying down on the couch, drifting off.

Kali thought it was a little weird her door was unlocked, because she was pretty sure she locked it when she left for groceries. She was just going to check in, pick up what she needed and head off to Yug's apartment.

She was quite a bit later than she had planned, but he didn't need to know that.

Then she saw him sleeping on the couch, and she shook him awake, unsure of what else she could do.

As soon as Yug awoke, he instinctively pulled out the ring, remembering what he originally came here to do.

To his surprise, she pulled out a ring, too.

"Yes." She said, an ear-splitting grin plastered on her face.

He smiled back at her, before saying in response, "Yes."
Edited by RTme0w - 9 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

23

Views

2.6k

Users

6

Likes

23

Frequent Posters

950842 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#2

Thanks a ton!! Glad that ya like it. Its unlike my forte but gave it a try (:
benishchaudhary thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#3
I like it, it's beautiful 😛
LiveLoveLaugh96 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Awww
So cutee

It was awesomee 👏👏
Karaali thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Perfect! I was saying "yes" too as I read that part... 😆😆
950842 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: benishchaudhary

I like it, it's beautiful 😛


Thanks. Was something very different, but just wrote it in the moment (:
Edited by RTme0w - 9 years ago
950842 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: LiveLoveLaugh96

Awww

So cutee

It was awesomee 👏👏


Thanks! Glad you liked this one as well (:
Edited by RTme0w - 9 years ago
950842 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Katori

Perfect! I was saying "yes" too as I read that part... 😆😆


Was gonna make her say 'NO' but I had no comeback so made them both say Yes :P
950842 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#9

Thanks!! (:
950842 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#10

Thanks ya! (:

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".