Kaajjal after ML - Part 9 - Oct 22, 07 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: lovelygurl

wow..that was an awesome part kashish di πŸ‘..I just loved it..keep up the wonderful workπŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ..btw so sorry for not being able to reply to the previous few parts of this FF and "Lets Relive Romance"..I was very busy with my school work..can't wait to read the next part..do continue soon.

lots of love
Alishba

aww no problem alishba. But i am glad u liked the part.

miss you waisay. 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
Sigh another great update Kashish... the malady and confusions still prevail. But I sniff something about to cajole and jolt her out of her memory loss..... Hmmm definitely something...

Waiting for the next update eagerly...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
WELL DONE WELL DONE WELL DONE ............KASHISH..JAAN 😳
excellently narrated !!!!!!!!
just SIMPLY AMAZING ( our apu's words for u )!!!!!! 😊

kitty.........nicest kashish......yaar sorry ....i always bother 4 videos.......but i m v greedy yaarraaa.........
need APUSUR!!!!!!!!! waitin 4 more n more !!!!!!
thnx alot>>>>>>>>>>>FOREVER!!!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oh Kashish...you've gone and done it to me again yaar! Just when I thought I couldn't read anything that would thrill me as much as your last part of "Let's Relive Romance" I come and read this...and wow!!! It is simply amazing!!! πŸ‘ You have captured every emotion so well...from Dev's frustration to Kaajjal's confusion...I could just picture them there together and I too was waiting for the magical moment along with Kaajjal 😳 ...I too felt her despiar when Dev walked away.

Loved it Kashish...this is how the ML track should have been! Do please continue soon.

Anu πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by nimmo20 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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What a sizzlingggggg narration that was Kashuuu!!! Absoluuuteeelllyyy fantastic, brilliant, simply amazing, incredible, breathtaking, fabulous, superb, wonderful, and marvellousssss!!!!!Hats off!!!!! πŸ‘

Zareen.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OH ... MY ... GOSH ... KASHISH! You have left me absolutley breatheless! 😲 How did you do it? You have truely truely outdone your self this time with the passion. The anticipation. Oh my ... You have most def. achieved in making my senses go haywire πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰ Absolutley. And Butterflies all the way πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰

I am also so touched and honored that you dedicated this part to me too 😳 😳 Thank you so muuuch 😳 πŸ˜›

Haiii. This part, was just brilliant. Especially Dev, and his seducing. Brillaint. First Kaajjal keeps throwing the Mr. Singh in his face after the passionate hug, then she throws back in his face with the izaam of doing this on purpose, trying to take advantage of her. She got her answer just by Devs touch. Dev showed her how she becomes with one touch from Dev ... Just mesmorizing. I could picture and feel the whole seen as if I was I was in the situation. You did a fantastic job once again writing this part. πŸ‘

It has gotten so intresting πŸ˜ƒ Please Kashish darling, continue whenever you get the chance πŸ˜ƒ But no rush my dear. You cannot rush great things 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharna2k6

OH ... MY ... GOSH ... KASHISH! You have left me absolutley breatheless! 😲 How did you do it? You have truely truely outdone your self this time with the passion. The anticipation. Oh my ... You have most def. achieved in making my senses go haywire πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰ Absolutley. And Butterflies all the way πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰

I am also so touched and honored that you dedicated this part to me too 😳 😳 Thank you so muuuch 😳 πŸ˜›

Haiii. This part, was just brilliant. Especially Dev, and his seducing. Brillaint. First Kaajjal keeps throwing the Mr. Singh in his face after the passionate hug, then she throws back in his face with the izaam of doing this on purpose, trying to take advantage of her. She got her answer just by Devs touch. Dev showed her how she becomes with one touch from Dev ... Just mesmorizing. I could picture and feel the whole seen as if I was I was in the situation. You did a fantastic job once again writing this part. πŸ‘

It has gotten so intresting πŸ˜ƒ Please Kashish darling, continue whenever you get the chance πŸ˜ƒ But no rush my dear. You cannot rush great things 😳



ahhh sharnu. thats our DPS. he know how to make kaj realise how much she loves him. uffff i just love this DPS. simply love him.

waisay, imagine what i went through while i was writing this interaction between them. o man, i was breathless. sometimes i really wish i was kaajjal. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nimmo20

Oh Kashish...you've gone and done it to me again yaar! Just when I thought I couldn't read anything that would thrill me as much as your last part of "Let's Relive Romance" I come and read this...and wow!!! It is simply amazing!!! πŸ‘ You have captured every emotion so well...from Dev's frustration to Kaajjal's confusion...I could just picture them there together and I too was waiting for the magical moment along with Kaajjal 😳 ...I too felt her despiar when Dev walked away.

Loved it Kashish...this is how the ML track should have been! Do please continue soon.

Anu πŸ˜ƒ



Anu dear, thats the way we feel when we read about DK. when we feel DK. when we think DK. to me DK are a symbol of love and passion and my heart just stops at the thought of romance between them.

i am indeed very happy to know how much u enjoyed this part. i was completely enthralled while writting it. the feeling was too overwhelming. i know u can imagine as u urself are a writer, and know how it feels to live the characters you write about.


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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww Mala, u r soo right yar. we are just crazy about DK. but yar ever since this ML track in the show, i had wished the show had taken this turn. things would have been soo wonderful, so spicy, and sooo romantic.

But ahh wishes are all we have. and the saddest part, they will never come true, for we shall never have Apu and sur as our DK ever again. 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hello, kashishji kya kardiya apne, i just wanted to see all these things happening in the show also. but nevermind, you are really a gem you have fulfilled all my wishes, because i can imagine every scene in my mind. But kashish i must say you are a wonderfull writer, after reading your FF's i can hardly breathe. do continue fast yaar and dekhna yeh raat kahee aise hi na chali jaye i am sure there will be lot of romance.

thanks once again for giving such beautifull FF's.

Belated happy birthday.

Do continue fast.

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